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Bette’s Dilemma
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Jodie looked around quickly to see if Bette had arrived and located her car in the lot but noticed that it was empty. Her head shook with obvious frustration. "Typical Bette she has to control the entire situation" she thought to herself. Bette had called her and asked her to meet her on the Boardwalk and to dress for a night out. Nothing more! Bette was one of the most intriguing and beautiful women she knew but she was wound so tight. "Well, I might has well go up to wait for her to appear" she thinks and walks slowly toward the Boardwalk. Not everything would be lost the sun was just setting and the waves were slightly white-capped. The slight wind caressed her arms and face.
Jodie’s thoughts turned to Bette and her as she walked. It was like riding a roller coaster. The thrill of their love making was met with the dips of their clashes of ego and personality and she had to admit if only to herself this had caused her to rethink what their future held. She had never loved anyone as exclusively as Bette, this had been clear when they had not spoken after Bette’s text message and the tenseness of the time when she had been away.
As she entered the Boardwalk her thoughts slowly returned to the present. A slight motion caught her attention to the left as she turned to look her eyes beheld a work of art that could not be easily replicated…Bette sat on a bench under an overhanging tree, the wind blowing gently through her hair, her head back with lips ever so slightly parted.
The air carried the soft timber of her husky voice Hodie knew although she couldn’t hear it. Her eyes watched those beautiful lips and read. "Hello darling, I’m glad you are here"
Chapter Three
"Hello Dean Porter" Jodie signed with a smile. "Are you here to meet someone else that you are trying to impress?"
"Only you. Did it work?" Bette murmured
"You could say that." Jodie said as she moved close to where Bette sat on the bench so invitingly. She leaned in for a kiss.
"Do you feel like a walk before we eat?"
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wow, the whole story at once eh? Thanks for the good read, love tina & Bette, they are so meant to be
WOW!! That was awesome! I love how B&T are connecting again. Great job. Can’t wait for more.
Congratulations Leesa! As you know, I’m a big fan of your story and your writing. I’m glad to see that the people on this site are enjoying it as much as we are. Annie
So glad to read more is coming..
WHat an incredible story. I have been coming back to it over and over again today as I try to work but instead I keep thinking about your story. So much for writing today. I love where you have taken their relationship. How you have them both practicing what they have learned from their explosive past. It takes courage to act on what you’ve learned. You have described to very couragous women. I love how you draw them. Please draw some more.
Wow great read! I’m glad Tina decided to give it another go Bette’s really going to need her through this Jodi thing. I always knew Jodie was a nut hope they can come up with some way to catch her in this lie of hers. Hope to read more soon.
WOW that was awesome, glad B&T are back together and work thing out. Now let see how they gonna kick jodis ass. Please post more, thanks!
Fantastic story! The way S5 should turn around. B&T truly belong together, always. Hope you surprise us with more of your creativity. Thanks. PPS Lucero & Marsha
Loved it Leesa!! Is there more to come, surely this is only S5 Ep1 eh!! Only 11 more to go!! ha ha
Thanks so much for the comments everyone. I was really unsure about whether I should post or not but from the response I am glad I took the chance.There is definitely more to come. This is a work in progress and I will be adding chapters from now on as I write them
What a wonderful story, I love how Bette and Tina have both changed for the better. Can’t wait to read more, pps.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful story….thoroughly enjoyed it.
wouldn’t it be nice. thanks for taking the plunge.
omg what a marathon…well done…
leesa excellent as always!!! speachless… so glad to see the story over here!!!
Really liked your version of how things should happen for season 5. Let’s hope it works out this way.
How great to see such a complete posting! However, I only made it half way through before I had to stop for the night..will pick it up again tomorrow! Thanks!
We all hope it works out like this. Thanks for your heroic first post! Love the new relationship bet B and T, much more equal. Jodie seems a bit unstable.
Congratulations, this is a great story. I really liked the Jodie twist. Bette needing Tina as never before, excellent!! PPS