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Bette’s Nightmare: Chapter 10
Meanwhile
Dana and Carmen were stationed at the front door of the
Planet. Carmen was daydreaming about her wedding dress, while Dana was
inspecting her fingernail. Neither of them heard Hannah approach them.
“Hey guys!” She said brightly, jerking Dana and Carmen from
their thoughts.
Dana looked at Carmen like a rabbit caught in headlights,
“*****” she said softly and turned her back to walk a few paces away, taking
her phone out as she walked.
Carmen beamed nervously at Hannah.
“Hey! Hannah! Listen, it’s a good thing you’re hear I was
wanting to talk to you about that music friend of yours for a band for after
the wedding. Nowcan you tell me?”
Carmen took Hannah’s arm and gently ushered her away from
the front of the Planet, leading her on a little walk further up the street.
Dana was waiting for Alice to answer her phone.
“Cmon Al pick up.PICK UP! ALICE! Al! Oh my god Hannah’s
here. You have to get your ***** round here NOW!” With that she hung up.
Meanwhile
Tina looked deep into my eyes,
“I know what you mean Bette it’s just, it’s complicated.”
“I know it’s complicated T butI can’t ignore how I feel
about you, and, I know you already know how I feel, I still love you”
Tina came closer to me, raising her hand to touch my face,
letting her fingers stroke my hair.
“BetteI”
“GUYS!”
Alice burst through the door, making both me and Tina jump a
mile.
“Guys, I’m sorry to just barge in but” She must have
remembered her charade, “I’m back!” she smiled weakly at us.
Tina and I both looked at her exasperatedly.
“Ok, ok. No time for the explaining now guys, Hannah’s just
outside.”
Alice went back outside leaving me and Tina alone to compose
ourselves and get our emotions back in check.
Tina ran her hand through her hair, “*****. Hannah.” She
looked at me, about to say something, when Hannah walked through the door,
followed by Alice.
Hannah smiled when she saw Tina, “Hey babe.”
She put her arm around Tina’s waist and kissed her on the
cheek.
“I missed you.”
Tina laughed nervously.
Hannah stood, looking at me, then looking at Tina, expecting
to be introduced.
Tina gulped.
“Hannah, this is Bette. Bette, this is Hannah.”
I put on my best smile, “Hi, Hannah, it’s nice to meet
you.” It really wasn’t.
Hannah accepted my handshake, in thought for a minute,
“Bette.” She said.
Tina must have mentioned something about me to her. I saw
the recollection on Hannah’s face.
She turned to Tina, “Bette?”
wrong with my being there without any explanation.
Tina exhaled, “So, it looks like we’re all done here, right
Al? Ok, see you later.” She gently shoved Hannah in front of her, moving her
out of the front door.
She turned and looked at me, a deep meaningful look, and I
knew this wasn’t over, not our conversation, not us.
“See you later Bette.”
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(60 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
After seeing Bette ,Hannah should start packing her bags I’m afraid her days will be number. Hannah will do something stupid and she will leave on her own.{I hope} Tina is not going to hurt someone like she was hurt,Nor will Bette hurt someone like she hurt Tina. thanks
Good chapter. Man they just about to talk about their feeling and that Hannah interrupt them and hope they will be alone and talk soon. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter. Hello Bette, good bye Hannah. post soon
god. glad your enjoying the writing thingy. im enjoying you writing. love the framily. so hannah saw the glory that is bette porter huh? id start running for the hills about now. but just for slaps and tickles you coulda had them at least kiss *sigh* oh well. another time. thanks. and keep it going.
Wow! great chapter! please keep writing, I can’t wait to see where this is going!
sorry hannah bette’s back so your gone
bette:1 hannah:-4. already without even touching tina’s body she’s already gone. and poor lil hannah is down and out for the count. that’s exactly how it should be. please post soon. PEACE.
Yeah, that’s Bette… the one that has Tina’s heart!
oh Hannah..run my friend when you still have dignity..lol..its perfect clear that Tina feel the same way and i hope wont be so long for them talk and be together again..cant wait for more and congrets for 10 chapters..bring it on more 1000..lol..thanks :o)
you have a knack for leaving me wanting more
so hannah is going to be hurt because bette and tina will get back together.i wnder it the girls ever told hannah that bette and tina will never really be over.hannah should of thought about a relationship with tina, but she didnt think bette would come back to la. i like the fact after five years the love is still there. please dont hurt hannah’s feelings to much when u break them up.
this just keeps getting better…tks post soon
hannah is so gone…Bette is back. love your story!post soon
noooo!!!! I know we don’t know much about Hannah, but damn her! Ms. Interrupty-pants! ARGH! :)
alice could have think of something to keep hannah away from the planet, but at least B&T are not finished yet..bring it on