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Bette’s Nightmare: Chapter 13
I grinned internally.
I glanced at Tina, who looked away instantly, her face
turning a brilliant shade of red.
“Oh yeah,” I said, nonchalantly, “I think Tina and I went to
that place once.”
Hannah smiled, oblivious to Tina’s extreme awkwardness.
“It’s a nice place. I’m sure you and Tina had a good time
when you were there, I know we did.” Hannah nudged Tina, mistaking her
embarrassment as a result of the memory of Hannah and hers date, as opposed to
our own.
“Yeah if I remember correctly that was a good date.”
Tina stood up,
“I’m going to go to the bathroom. I’ll be right back.”
Hannah looked concerned, “Tina, honey, you look a little
spaced out, do you want me to come with you?”
Tina looked as though she didn’t really hear Hannah.
“Noit’s ok. I remember how to pee.”
We all sat in a cold silence, even though the music was
pumping and people were laughing and shouting all over the place. The tension
was palpable.
I cleared my throat,
“I’m going to step outside for a bit of fresh air.”
I stood and left the table before anyone had a chance to say
anything.
I exited the Planet and saw Tina sitting on the pavement
outside, staring into the sky.
“Hey” I approached her.
She smiled, “Oh, hey.”
I sat down beside her.
“Look, T, Tinaabout earlier, I’m sorry I didn’t mean to
make it awkward it’s just she was flaunting youand I know that shouldn’t
matter to me because we’re not together and haven’t been for the past five
years but about earlier today I’m really sorry about that, I shouldn’t have
assumed thatYou have Hannah and”
I was stopped by the soft pressure of Tina’s lips on mine.
God I’d missed this feeling so much. I’d missed her.
She slowly pulled away, her lips lingering centimetres from
my own.
I looked into her eyes. I could drown in her eyes. I reached
up and touched her hair. It was the same pure softness that it had been five
years ago.
Tina pulled away from me.
“Bette, I need to ask you something.”
“Anything” I was breathless.
Tina hesitated, “You still love me?”
I looked into her deep, brown eyes, “I never stopped.” I
say, without the slightest hesitation.
With that, Tina stood, her hand softly touching mine,
and walked back into the Planet.
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(59 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
Wow. Another update. Yippeeeee. Love your story.
Great story, let them break the news to Hannah, that Bette and Tina are back together. Please post another soon.
Well, you mean they’re walking back hand in hand? Wow, poor Hannah… lost in a few minutes. =P
I’m absolutely loving this story! The older and wiser Bette and Tina realising their feelings again! please post soon, cos i’m looking forward to some fireworks!
wowhooo…sorry Hannah ..ts ts maybe with some other woman cuz that one belongs to Bettes…they walked back hand in hand??????..cant wait for more please.. more please thanks :o)
happy happy joy joy! You can’t see it but I am doing a happy dance.
Whoa! it’s getting better I just catch up to read Thanks now I see that Tina I think she still LOVE Bette too that was great update Thanks!!
i want hannah to fight for tina and dont give up so soon. remember it was bette who walked away.
hannah reminds me of tonya, so we know she’ will be short lived…i hope tina went in to say hannah goodbye
fergz – im here baby. did that just make your heart do a little dance?mine did. that helped my hurt heart. thanks.
hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just caught up with your story love it, cant wait to see what Tina does next
What happened to this story?
You know what I can’t believe? The fact that Bette wasted five years wallowing in self pity to step back into town and bam she finds out Tina still loves her. That was either a waste of five years of suffering or I don’t know what.
wow i didnt expect t to do that…but say good bye to hannah
you are wonderful! Thank you so much please post soon. albeez..come out and play
Good chapter. Now its time for goodbye to Hannah. Post soon please, thanks!
what !!! i’ve been gone 2 wks and only 2 short chapters – they’re good please do more
Again I ask….what happened to this story?