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Birthday Presence – Part II
The next morning Bette walked into the Planet to find that a jury of her peers had already returned a verdict: guilty of birthday neglect.
Alice looked up as Bette approached the table. “How’s the view from the dog house?”
Shane covered her mouth to prevent espresso from spewing out.
Bette glared at Alice. “Where’s Tina?”
“Come and gone.”
Just then Dana arrived at the table carrying a tall glass with a straw. She took a sip and sat down.
“Mmm…I only want Marina making my smoothies from now on – I can’t even taste the spirulina.” She looks up to see everyone looking at her. “What?”
Alice turns to her. “Bette cancelled Tina’s birthday dinner last night .”
“The dinner at Indochine? Ohmygod, why?” Dana says to Alice, as if no one else is there.
Bette, still standing, says, “I didn’t cancel, Alice. In fact, I talked the restaurant into postponing our reservation. Twice. No small accomplishment, I might add. It was Tina who opted out at that point.”
“At what point was that? Midnight?” Alice asked, her eyebrows raised in interrogation.
“No. 10:30 at the latest.”
Shane shook her head.
“Jesus, by then you should’ve been eating dessert,” Alice said. “Or home.”
“Eating dessert,” Shane added, smirking.
They all laughed except Bette, who let a small smile curl up the sides of her mouth before she caught herself.
“Did you give her the watch?” Dana asked.
“Yes.” Bette nodded in Alice’s direction. “Thank you, by the way.”
“You’re welcome. And?”
Bette shrugged.”
“Strike two.” Alice says, swinging her hand for emphasis.
Bette’s eyes burned with anger.
“So what’s your make-up plan?” Alice says.
“I’ll figure it out,” Bette says abrubtly and walks away.
Shane watches her for a moment, then stands to leave.
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(46 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
so glad you posted love this story you have been missed
I wonder where Tina is taking Bette?
Gee, I know how it seems time stands still when you’re wrestling with a problem and it just drags on and on. I’m sure it must have felt like months had gone by for Bette. Say, about 3 of them? Good to see you back, Massmom. Don’t be such a stranger.
Absolutely delicious. Please post as soon as you can.
Fanrastic! Can’t wait for the get away trip Tina has planned. They are off to a good start. PPS
PPS. dont wait too long!!!!!!!
Thank you for continuing this story. Forgiveness is important to a couple along with communication. Too bad the show could not show this in season 3.
absolutely love your stories and this one is no exception!!!
Yay Massmom. Boy you have no idea how much I’ve missed this fic!! So glad you gave us an update to this beautiful fic.I’ve been waiting with baited breath. I would’ve held it forever if I had to.And such a wonderful update to add. I’m so happy that Bette didn’t cancel out on Tina yet again,finally choosing the love of her life over work obligations. I loved the way Tina initiated this little gataway.I hope this isn’t the end of this fic,but should it be,then i must thank you. Excellent fic.
I love your beautiful, sophisticated writing..so warm, so lovely. You’ve been missed.
I so enjoy your writing…and this chapter was well worth the wait! Thanks.
Hey glad to see you back…you were missed. I was starting to get mad at Bette when it looked like she was gonna cancel on Tina again. I am glad they reconnected. I am glad you reconnected with your fans…keep posting.
OOOHH that was so right. The timing the battle and recognition by both sooo right. Thanks MM for the compelling story.
God, that’s good.
A friend of mine recommended that I check out your stories. What a wonderful writer you are…
this is really good. techgal said it best–it’s fun reading stories with such maturity and depth. i wish Massmom writes again.
so glad to see you back with this story…good for bette to say No ot arlette, tina is more important…thank you
Uh, folks, I think they may have already reached their destination…
I love, love, love your adult stories of two WOMEN in love. Bravo! You make it fun to be a grownup! Thanks!
I’ve really been looking forward to a second post to a very intersting beginning, but had given up!!! Great post and Bette definitely did the right thing about the invitation to the beach house, but I’m sure it will come up over the weekend. Especially if they’re staying close to that house LOL. Post soon please, this is very good :o))
That was simply spectacular! Thank you.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww glad ur back
It had been awhile, but this is a great story. Okie dokie where are they going? Another chappy soon please, you are a great writer!
I’m so happy you’ve written a chapter! Loved this sentence: “It was all deliciously familiar and yet heightened by the distance they’d traveled to this place.” Beautiful.
Damn thats good and hot and let see where Tina take Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!