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Bisous; #09
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I smiled to myself, comforted by Bette’s words.
“So, aside from work, what else is new with you? It’s been three months since we last spoke?”
“Urm, well…I…” she said, sounding a little more nervous.
I laughed, “Well, what? It’s just me, you know?”
“I…I started seeing someone.”
I suddenly felt my heart skip a beat, my breath was caught in my throat and I didn’t quite know how I should be reacting to the news.
“Oh?” I managed, “That’s…that’s great…”
“Yea, she’s a really wonderful .”
“How long have you been seeing each other?”
“Just a little over a month.”
All that could come out of me where these incessant questions. I wanted to know more about this girl.
A part of me genuinely wanted to know who she was, but the other part of me only wanted to know because I felt as if she was my competition.
“Where did you meet her?”
“At work, she’s one of the writers there.”
“What’s her name?”
“Her name’s Tina. Tina Kennard.”
“Ah, Tina. That’s a…nice name…”
“Helena…don’t…”
“No, no, I’m fine,” I said, trying to smile widely even though I knew she couldn’t see me, “I’m fine. Really great that things look promising on your end, Bette.”
“Urm, shall we meet up for lunch soon then?”
“Definitely,” I replied.
As I hung up the phone, I felt warm tears gently rolling down my cheeks.
I guess I had really screwed big time and now, Bette had moved on with her life.
Leaving me behind.
I shook my head, laughing.
How stupid was I? I had actually thought that cleaning up my life would help me win Bette back.
But I knew that I couldn’t blame her for any of this.
The last thing she said to me three months ago rung through my thoughts, “You broke my heart.”
I had broken her heart, I had hurt her so deeply. Now, the only thing I could do was to let her be happy, and I was willing to put my own emotions aside and do it all for her.
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Since this story is mainly about Helena, I’m thinking the Tina and Bette thing is just for the sake of drama. (crossing fingers.)So, I am looking forward to them breaking up (ducking from the die-hard Tibetters)and Helena and Bette working this mess out. So, Bette, my dear, how long will it take you to realize that Helena is the person with whom you’re supposed to be?Helena, don’t give up on your one true love. It will be ok, sweetie. Bette will come around to the right side of sane. =)
Helena cleaned up her life because of Bette…..now that she has lost her I hope she doesn’t go back to her old life?
I’m not giving up on Bette finding her way to Helena…..This was your best chapter ever. Yes, you did throw in a couple of curve balls. Very, very good….Helena really needs a hug right now.
Wow – what a twist! I knew it had to be Tina…I hope Bette and Helena still get a chance to explore their feelings. I can’t wait for the next chapter – the story keeps getting better and better…
Hello Beautiful Dragonfly… First and foremost I must apologize for my late arrival to this here story, I have been playing catch up and well I completely absolutely, cow jumps over the moon love your stories and your incredible talent that I needed to save something magical for a rainy day. Well let me tell you that this came in handy, cause well I had a rainy day and well I just needed something magical to help me escape, and my friend each and every word you have crafted and shared completely mesmerizes me… I am profoundly inspired by all of your stories and your incredible friendship and this story is no different, if I might be so bold as to say I would place this within my personal favorites ever, you have taken these iconic characters and the mythology that they have been surrounded in and blended it so superbly within the confines of you immense literary landscape, I can see you channeling through your characters very much a profound influence from a Mr. Coelho, for you have such a mastery of creating such complex and emotional characters who feel so very much alive and very much like part of the world I inhabit. This story has such a strong sense about it, Helena is so perfect in the skin she chooses to inhabit and I can understand the desire to change for the person you love but never to compromise who you are inside, and the comforts that reside within your soul… each turn and twist you handled with a certain fluidity that I find so inspiring… I would love to have that raw talent to weave the words and characters and emotions like you have, for you are an extremely immensely inspiring and talented story teller… with each set of words you weave you create magic, so thank you so much for continuing to push forward and tell the stories that only your literary soul can tell, and I for one will never forget the feeling and sense of inspiration and joy I have each and Everytime I get to read your words, thank you for sharing them with me, thank you for your kind heart and soul, and thank you so much for coming into my life, you are a star of immense brightness that I shall never get lost because of your words and your soul, love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
aww…i hope helena tries to get bette back..pps
Awwwwww, didn’t see that comeing, are you sure this is a Tibette, I’m getting a little confused here. Till next chappy. Thank you, Md
Awh… :( This story tugs at my heart. So sad for Helena.
Bette and Tina? Oh that hurt! All I can say is Helena don’t give up on her. True love will win out in the end. At lest I hope so. So I guess you know who my heart is leading for. Excellent update! I’m really looking forward too reading some more.
oh no, I am so sad for her…but her new boss likes her, right??? Please let H and B get together…poor H, let there be a reward after all her hard work…loved the update…have an awesome weekend and PPS.
Rather have a true friend for a life time than a lover for a few month.Sometime That friend become the lover of a life time. Feel so sorry gor Helena but she has shown that she is a fighter. True love will come to her,and she will still have her best friend. thanks
awwwwwwwwwwwman. please please please let this be a belena story.