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Bisous; #10
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I saw her smiling the smile I always felt could light up a dark room, and laughing the way she use to laugh with me.
My eyes focused on the person beside her.
Her blond hair glistened in the sunlight and her eyes were big, bright and completely mesmerized by Bette. She wore a simple white blouse with a dark gray knee length pencil-skirt and a pair of black heels.
Who was this blond bimbo?
This was Tina? The girl who stole Bette’s heart away?
Gawd, who was I kidding. She was gorgeous.
In a very cheerleader kinda way, but still…
I sunk back into my seat and sighed to myself. I could tell from the way Bette was looking at her; she obviously made her happy.
When she turned to say goodbye to Bette, Bette bent over and dropped a kiss on her lips before smiling at her, looking deeply into her eyes. It was as if the entire world had disappeared from existence.
With that one scene, I felt my heart disintegrate.
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Bette walked in and immediately caught sight of me at the corner booth.
I took a deep breath and decided to play it cool. I could not show that I was upset. I needed to be happy for her.
I stood up, smiling as she walked over to me and placed a friendly peck on my cheek.
“Hey Helena,” she said.
I think I was being a little sensitive but I could smell the bimbo on her.
“Bette,” I replied, “It’s really great to see you.”
She looked at me and smiled as she took the seat across from me.
After we had ordered our food, I couldn’t help but notice a strange sadness that had settled in Bette’s eyes. She was telling me about work, but there was something displaced about her. I didn’t want to probe, so I just nodded thoughtfully as she described her colleagues.
“Have you stopped completely now?” she asked.
The question had caught me off-guard. I didn’t expect her to bring it up.
“Yes, I have,” I replied, looking down at my coffee, afraid to meet her eyes.
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I love this story but Helena and Tasha I can’t get into. Tasha is just to conservative and boring for HeLena. The pairing don’t mash well. Helena seem more likely to go out and play the field. Where is Shane….will she show up sometime soon? pps
Well long time no read soori chick…ive recently moved house and busy with work and college…Im loving the direction you’re taking this story in gosh i Love BeLena…So no more Chloe eh…ive had to catch up on like 3 chapters at least.I wonder will she fall back into her old life and Tina and Bette the blonde bimbo lmao classic there…The smell of her on Bette’s clothes must have been hard.Cant wait for the update btw hows things on your end?
that such a random pairing, but i can’t wait to read more…pps
btw, the use of “the blonde bimbo” inspired me to write a story….
I knew it, but don’t let H hurt Tasha. And your description of Tina was hilarious…say it ain’t so that B and Tina are together…I can’t wait for the four of them to have dinner. PPS
Hey There… OMG… that was freaking awesome… such a nice twist… hmmmm distraction… and a very nice way to blend the notions of jealousy… I guess two can play at that game huh… LOL… this is just getting better and better… Wow… ok… so yeah I love how you externalize everything… ‘Helena’ is our eyes and ears throughout this story and you do an amazing job showing us her inner workings… and just how ‘love’ feels from the inside… just amazing… keep it up my friend… ttys… love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
Ok, I see it’s going to be a while before my Belena can actually be. Now we have two people to get rid of instead of just one. How is that going to work? Nice twist. I never would have paired those two together. Hmmmm… Now, I have to see what you do with this. So far, so good. You’re doing great with writing this from Helena’s POV. I like that! Keep it coming. PPS!
You got me on this one. And I must say I love it. This was a twist that I didn’t expect. But I can’t say I’m against it, because I’m not. Helena needs to have some joy in her life. And as Helena admitted “just pure unadulterated attraction” and I do like the sound of that. You did a marvelous job on this! Thanks for ths update.
Sack…WOW…as always…you provided a great chapter…I must say…I was never sold on the possibility of Belena..but girl..you so good at this that it’s rubbing off….PPS….don’t know how long I can wait:)
I love Helena,LOved her with Dylan,Can’t like her with Bette. There is a lot of story with them,but love Bette with Tina. Love how a writer can pair a couple and how you can make a beautiful love story. Do love how you are writing this through Helena eyes. Thanks for posting and I’m waiting for more of this story.