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Bisous; #11
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“Oh my gawd, I’m…I’m…Aaarrhhh…”
I’m sure I told you that I have never experienced an orgasm before. I knew I was pretty professional at giving them to other people, but I had never felt what it was like. I guess I just never really felt comfortable enough to make myself that vulnerable.
Her body began to relax as she held me to her, kissing my collar bone, “That was amazing, Helena,” she said as she rolled beside me, closing her eyes for a brief moment. I could feel her breathe beside me. She turned to look at me, her fingers tracing my curves, slowly caressing my stomach, pushing down my underwear; she moaned against my chest as she felt wet I was.
I smiled, trying to enjoy what she was doing to me and as much as if felt nice, I couldn’t say that I was even close to achieve anything more than that. But if it’s anything I learned from my previous career, it was how to fake it.
I closed my eyes as I wrapped my legs around her, feeling her fingertips against the folds between my legs. She kissed my neck, her tongue licking my earlobe.
After a few careful moments of fondling, I made my body tense up and contracted my muscles, “I’m close…” I said, trying to sound as into it as she was and then…I grasped onto her as I allowed my body to tremble against hers. The beads of perspiration on her skin and the warmth we had with our bodies so close together made for an even more convincing bluff.
I pulled away gently, lying down beside her and resting my head on her breast.
“Was that good?” she asked as she kissed my forehead.
“Mmmm…” I replied, nodding slightly, “The best.”
I couldn’t quite bring myself to tell her that the truth was that it wasn’t her, it was just me.
She tilted my face towards hers, “Helena…I need to talk to you about something.”
I looked at her, wondering why her expression had become so serious.
“What about?” I asked.
“About what just happened…”
I smiled, waiting for her to continue.
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He-larious…my my my how competitive…anxiously anticipating the update…
Who is up for a broken heart? ya know Helena and Tasha could make a wonderful pair if they would just let it happen. Thank you, Mdw
Tina should be running for the doors after that display. Can’t wait to see how the rest of dinner goes. Not really feeling that Bette is jealous. Just annoyed with Helena for trying to embarass her. PPS. I really love this story
BTW I can understand about the frequent checking of the comments….Now when Helena finally has her orgasm. I think the neighbors will this another earthquake has hit because she will leave herself vulnerable for Bette.
Ok..first thing is first..You have such a beautiful style of writing…I absolutely adore it and don’t worry..Im just as “passionate” as you..thank God for modern technology..I would be so lost…but thats what inspires us to continue writing..and for the complete love for the ladies and writing of course…Ok so my comment was a bit to long..but great story…interesting pairings I must say but you make it work so well!!PPS
Hello My Beautiful Dragonfly… ok… I’m back… I’m sorry I left in such a jealous rampage will you ever forgive me… please please please forgive me… PPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE… I will write and write and write… just please forgive me… :(, hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
Hello My Beautiful Dragonfly… hehe… you said you incessantly refresh your iphone so I was just seeing how incessant you were LMAO… as for the story… I love love love how you are handling Helena and Bette to jealous lovers who can’t see past their own noses to realize that the other shares in this love with them, I love how Tasha is helping Helena to maintain some disposition… I’m thinking that the ‘blond bimbo’ is going to be the other way around… she is going to put up a fight… hehe… let the cat fights begin… oh and that beginning was tender… passionate… and HOT… love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
Hello My Beautiful Dragonfly… “Have you had one of those days when your writing feels a bit “off”? I think today is one of those days for me. ):” ummm yeah… and if you even remotely see this as being an ‘off’ day then I quit… yep thats me packing my bags and handing my keys to the right to weave words… pfffttt… your ‘off’ day is better then my most definite ‘ON’ day… pffttt… I’ll go back and just immerse myself in your incredible words until the next chappy ok… love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
Hello My Beautiful Dragonfly… Thank you so much for forgiving me… I am going to start writing immediately… is there any special requests you might have… hmmmm… any and its yours a special gift for you… just say the word and poof it will appear… love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
Excellent update! I think Helena isn’t the only one with a little jealousy streak going on. Now we know that Tasha is an observer. But what about Tina? Didn’t she think that her girlfriend was acting a little strange?
Well, well, well, it seems that Bette isn’t as immune to Helena as she probably thought. Seeing her ‘best friend’ with a possible suitor is not going down too well for my girl. LOL! I like that Tasha is there to be a friend to Helena and help her get through this. She offers an objective POV for Helena, who, I have to say, can’t see the trees for the woods. Ok… let the games begin! I am staying for the ride. This is just getting better and better. PPS!
oh, and btw, the story is coming soon…i haven’t posted it and i’m just now finishing it up
i love this competition between Bette and Helena its so catty, but in that good way…helena doesn’t like what she sees and clearly bette doesn’t either…i say helena reaches over the table, punches tina square in the face and leaves with Bette…or maybe something less violent lol j/k….pps