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Black – Chapter. 21
“Right… you know… there’s nothing going on between us… with me and Carmen, she just wanted to spend time with Lily today and uhm, I just suggested that she should join me and Lily today since we’re going out to the beach…” Shane smiled and trried to comfort her.
“Yeah… I know…” Alice said… looking around the place. “So uhm… this place looks amazing…” Alice said to Shane, who’s never been to the place since it was fully furnished by Ed.
“Yeah, Ed did a pretty good job…” Shane said. “You should see the bedroom…” Shane teased Alice. “Uh huh… well uhm, I should get going…” Alice started. Lily bedroom door flung opened getting attention from the two adults.
“Alice! Alice! You’re not coming with us???” Lily ran to Alice with big sad eyes.
“Uhm, No… I’m sorry honey… I’ve got work to do…” Alice said to Lily feeling bad already. “But, but can’t you do it some other time…” Lily tried to make Alice change her mind. She looked at her mother behind Alice who keeps making pleading faces to make lily beg Alice more.
Alice snapped her head back and caught Shane making the faces. “Shane! Stop it!” Alice laughed at Shane. Alice looked back at lily who’s still had those big puppy eyes that you just couldn’t say no to. “Ey… how can I say no to these people?!” Alice let out, making them laugh.
“C’mon Al… it’ll be fun… Alice she knows about us, she knows… we’ve sorts our problems out and she knows that I want to be with you…” Shane said. Shane thought if she wants to make this work than somehow Alice and Carmen has to be okay with the relationship that they have with each other. “Alright… fine….” Alice finally gave in.
Alice, Shane and Lily got into the Aston Martin. They thought it would be easier to take one car to the beach today.
Shane, Alice and Lily got into the Planet to see the usual faces there and their group of friends at the normal table. Shane went to the bar to order for her two favorite ladies, standing in the long lines.
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(30 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
Well…………shit.
It’s me again. I cut off my first message. Things were starting to look up and then BLAM. Update soon please. Love ya!
Holy crap!I can’t believe Carmen would drive like that with her daughter in the car…but then again she did leave her home alone. Wow, I definitely didn’t see that coming. Great job….more soon please!
Wow…I have missed this story so much. I just read the last three updates. Good to see Shane and Alice are on speaking terms. But poor Shane…I hope Lily and Carmen will survive! Btw, I love your take on Dana. She reminds me of the goofy, naive and insecure Dana of S1. :D
that was a silly thing for carman to do but I hope that they are both ok please post soon great update I love it