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    Black – Chapter. 21

     

    “Slow is good Al… Slow is good…” Shane said. Shane looked in front where she’s heading and seemed to be a bit nervous how fast Carmen is driving. Shane flashes her head lights hoping that it’ll make Carmen realize. Alice looked at Shane who looked nervous. “What’s wrong?” Alice asked. “Uhm… Carmen, she was never the fine driver… but uhm, she’s driving a little fast don’t you think?” Shane asked. Alice looked in front and they seem to be losing the black convertible Benz. “Well if I had a car like that… you’ll find me speeding as well…” Alice cracked a joke, she looked at Shane again who’s not finding it funny and looks even more worried.

     

    Shane Aston Martin tried to catch up with the black sport car that is far ahead in front of them. She pressed hard on the gas but Carmen was too far ahead and it will cost more of a chaos if there are two speeding cars on the busy Los Angeles road. “Jesus Carmen… what the hell are you doing…” Shane said to her self. Shane pulled out her phone from her jeans pocket quickly. She speeds dial Carmen and got through.

     

    “Carmen! What the hell are you doing?? Slow the hell down, you’re driving like a maniac out here…” Shane nearly yelled through her phoned, holding the steering wheel steadily with one hand.

     

    “Shane relax, I’m not driving that fast… I’m trying to see how fast this thing can go kay…” Carmen said irresponsibly. “Here talk to Lil…” Carmen said and passed the phone to her daughter.

     

    “Hey mum… I’m fine… Don’t worry about a thing… we’ll see you there.” Lily hung up on her mother and smiled back to Carmen.

     

    “Fuck! Carmen… this is so fucking typical of you…” Shane let out her anger. Shane doesn’t know what else to do; she heard the honking of the cars around her and slowed the car a little but still kept the black sports car in her sight.

     

    “Shane, I’m sure Carmen is mature enough the handle the car carefully okay… relax okay…” Alice tries to calm Shane down. It looks like Shane and Carmen are probably going to have an argument once they stepped out of the car. Shane looked at the traffic lights and the still green lights for the Aston Martin but knew it’ll turn red soon when they’re close enough.  Shane knew that intersection is always a busy one and regular spot for accidents.  She knew something bad was going to happened. Her heart was beating irregularly. She saw the lights turning yellow and saw the black Benz not slowing down, not even for a second. Shane looked quickly at Alice’s sight, she can already picture the face that Alice is about to make. She blinked and looked back ahead of her. The lights turned red. The car still not slowing down and still tries to head across the busy intersection, first car from the left went straight ahead, missing Carmen’s only by a meter. Only a second later she saw a white sedan coming from the left, where it’s green for them to go. Shane’s Aston Martin is about four cars behind the first car that stopped at the traffic lights. The white sedan ram through Carmen’s black Benz from the side, from the driver’s side, from Carmen’s side. Shane gripped her steering wheel as she saw the shiny black car screeched right in front of the intersection and flipped one full turn. The convertible landed on the top. Shane’s eyes were as big as the sun. Her knuckles were whiter than snow in the Alps. She could hear the blazing noise of honk, probably from both total wrecked cars.

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    1. Holy crap!I can’t believe Carmen would drive like that with her daughter in the car…but then again she did leave her home alone. Wow, I definitely didn’t see that coming. Great job….more soon please!

    2. Wow…I have missed this story so much. I just read the last three updates. Good to see Shane and Alice are on speaking terms. But poor Shane…I hope Lily and Carmen will survive! Btw, I love your take on Dana. She reminds me of the goofy, naive and insecure Dana of S1. :D

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