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Black – Chapter. 22
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“I should clean my self up…” Shane said, she looked at her let the toilet sign. She started walking to the toilet, passing the worried family. She forced her self ti smile at them but couldn’t do it.
Shane got her self in the toilet and turned the tap on. The mess she was in. Her shirt seems like it’s never been ironed. The stain on her shirt, her hands and on her face. She couldn’t the sight of it. She saw the steam coming up and blurring the glass in front of her. she ran her hands through the hot water, she could feel it burn. She gripped tightly both of hands and let the hot water run. The blood stains coming off slowly. She pressed the soap machine and rubbed her hands together vigorously until her hands were red.
She splashes some water on her face and starts to rub it off her face. Her wet hands run through her hair making it stay back. She felt the vibration in her pocket and pulled her phone. Shane answered without a care who it was.
“Shane??? Where are you?!? Are you okay??! I’m on way okay… just stay tight… are you there?? Shane?!… I’m on my way…” The English man said.
“Ed… I’m, I’m fine… Carmen and lily are in surgeries… uhh, we’re on level three… the ER section…” Shane said.
“Okay… just uhm, stay there… I’ll be there in a jiff…”
“Okay… Ed, how did you know?” Shane asked
“It’s on every news station Shane…” The man said.
“… Christ…”
TWO HOURS LATER…
The three of them sat there. Staring at nothing in front of them. Alice held on to Shane’s left hand and Ed hold on to Shane’s right. Finally a doctor got out of the room. Still wearing the surgeon cap. There were only two groups of people there. Shane, Alice and Ed and the family.
“Shane stood up immediately when the male doctor looked onto the document and said the family’s name.
“Mrs. Robertson…” the doctor said. The group of family stood up and went to the doctor. The three of them couldn’t hear what the doctor of saying. Then the smile of the children’s face tells them that it’s good news. The mother broke into another cry again. All hugging her, crying out of happiness.
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that is so mean………did you have to kill lily…….i mean carman my favorite an all but the kid that is to sad…know you probably have Shane become a alcoholic or addicted to drugs
Ok I did see it coming you kind of warned us in your comments. :( Poor poor Shane (and Carmen). I hope Alice will pull Shane through and will keep her sane. I’m really interested what you are going to do with this story, because it’s a great story.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO – You cant do an Ilene on us. Yeah ya can really cos you did say you had to write what was in your head. Still love your story the best…..keep it coming.See yaFAY
oh no…she’s going to hate carmen
Wow…..well I agree she is going ot blame Carmen, be intresting to see how see deals with the grief of losing her daughter, but I’m sure Alice will support her no matter what. Good story…btw I’m a Danish shipper but I’m kinda getting adictted to this story too. PPS.
oh my God… well, this is a nice story, but I’m sorry I’m a Sharmen… I agree, Shane is going to blame Carmen… but I hope not… please continue it! Kisses!
(*sniffles)….what did you have to go and do a thing like that for? :-)