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    Story written on August 26, 2005 by Bconfused.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56269
    Author Notes:

    Danish story – Will they ever get back together?

    Dana signed quietly trying to figure out what to do next. She was soaking wet because of waiting for Alice
    in the rain for an hour. Her whole body was shaking not only because of
    the cold; it has been weeks since she was alone with Alice, only two of
    them together and this brought some weird insecurities.

    She looked around seeing every furniture, every little thing that belonged to Alice.
    How they were very familiar to Dana and yet very distant and strange
    they felt. The chart got messier than the last time she saw it, with
    more names and links written and drawn on it. Dana saw her name and the
    link of it to Al’s was unneatly cleared while hers and Lara’s link was
    strongly bolded. Like her and Al never was. Like the whole relationship
    disappeared. A knife stabbed deeper into her heart and tears formed in
    her eyes.

    “You know where my clothes are. You go change yours before you catch cold or something. Besides you’re ruining my couch.” Alice said without any expression in her eyes. Like she didn’t care at all.

    Dana
    stood up, her shivering got more intense. Walking through the bedroom
    once belonged to both, she tried to gather her thoughts. She knew she
    had to start from somewhere but never in her worst version did she face
    such a cold and strict Alice.

    Picking Alice‘s t-shirt and shorts next to her pillow without thinking if Alice
    would mind, she took off the wet clothes and grabbed a towel to dry
    herself. The bedroom was full of memories; hot memories as well as
    innocent ones. All seemed so far away, beyond reach.

    Dana inhaled the old dark blue t-shirt smelled of her Alice, her unique skin aroma and little hints of her perfume. After wearing them, she laid on the bed still shaking uncontrollably.

    “Alice?” she forced herself to shout. Coming into the bedroom from the kitchen, “What is it?” asked Alice coldly.

    Dana search for any hint of softness in Alice‘s stare. But there was none. Maybe coming to talk was not such a good idea. To beg for forgiveness To demand a second chance

    “Nothing. Just I’m cold. Can you bring me a blanket?” Alice
    looked at the fragile figure before her and brought her a blanket from
    the closet. “How’s that?” she asked after spreading it out over her ex
    best friend; her ex lover.

    “Good”

    “-K” said Alice
    casually and walked to leave the room. She stopped instantly when Dana
    said “I missed you.”, her voice weak but solid. Without turning back
    she asked: “What did you say?” even though she heard the sentence
    pretty clear.

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    1. Thanks for the story. You did good. Jacq is the one I go to for advice on my stories also. Small world. But you did a good job, even without her betareading. By the way I told her once she the Alice of the danish group, the one we all go to for advice and help.

      Please keep writing we need all the danish we can get. Your fellow Danish-ite. Deb

    2. holy shit that was so amazing!! I want more please dont stop dont ever stop!!
      i love alice and dana together!!WOW is all i can say and that fic was fantastic!

    3. hey confused! okay- i admit it- when i saw you’d posted something other than ‘tennis anyone’ i was bummed. then i read your synopsis up top and thought ‘what new spoilers??!’… THEN i read your story. THEN i took a cold shower! hummina, hummina! : ) THEN… i went to the spoiler board to see what the heck you were talking about. : )
      now…get writing! you have TWO stories to finish. THANKS!!!

    4. It’s a joke, isn’t it? you can’t stop here, well in fact you can :P , but it would be very good, for us poor danish fans, if you continue, please, please, please :D , come on Dana have to do a lot of things to get again the Alice’s confidence, well at least a lot of “this talk” lol.

    5. Wow! That was your first sex scene? You did a great job. You used the spoiler in a way I didn’t consider. I figured that Dana had gotten hurt, but I liked your idea better.

    8. Dude! You went and did it LOL! Aren’t you supposed to be working when I left you? Yeah, I’m a hopeless romantic who would prefer this scene without sex but it doesn’t mean I wouldn’t enjoy it ;). So two thumb ups, good job on your first sex scene. *in Dana’s voice* “I’m so proud of you”

    11. OMG forget the wall, hand me a blanket instead! This is flippin good stuff! I agree with the general consensus: you did damn good for a first time, B. I’ve got to apologize. I waited way too long before reading this. Then again, it is so worth the wait. Where’ve you been simmering this material? Let some of this stuff seep into Tennis Anyone, huh. Are there any more spoilers you wanna “clear up”? LOL

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