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Blind (Chap20)
I settle down, controlling my breathing to let her think that I’m going back to sleep. I watch her sleep… although we’ve spent nights together sleeping, and I always stay up a little moment to see her sleep, I’m still not tired of seeing her sleep. The hormone which she caused earlier is still lingering in my body… I need her.
My mind starts to wonder… it is like dreaming… have I fallen asleep? I’m dreaming… that she’s making love to me… tenderly and passionately… Suddenly I feel the urge… the sureness of being together with her… I’m ready.
I move nearer to her… feeling the warmth emanate from her… listening to her breathing… smelling her scent just fume up the desire I have inside…
I lean closer, rub my nose on hers then kiss softly and tugging on her lips, prompting her to wake up. Not much attempts require and she’s awake… we kiss deeply and passionately… usually we would just have a heavy make out and fall back to sleep, but tonight it will be different… this will be my first with a woman.
I know she’s going to stop us when the passion is out of control… she does… she lay her palm softly on my cheek and pull away gently. I snuggle into her soft smooth palm… feeling it against my cheek… I can’t wait to feel and taste it… to share it with my lips as well. I kiss it, devour it, worship it for it has caress me countless times, to offer me comfort, to give me tingles, to pass me strength, to relax my tensed muscle. I need her, I need to feel her as well as for her to feel me… this is the time.
Getting up switching on one of the nightstands lamp… I turn to her and grab hold of her hand… “Love me Bette…” She looks deeply into my eyes. I feel no fear but only for the love I’m going to give and receive… physically and emotionally.
Without further delay, she leans in and crash onto my lips with hers… but still her lips offer soft, comforts, fulfilling senses… from upper lip, to lower lip, to the both opposite corner of my lips, she devour, suck them in between hers and nibble them.
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(67 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
Very nice, Zabo! Can’t wait to see how Tina treats Bette? Post soon.
waooo! what incredible first time. I hope Tina’s parents won’t be so mad with her because she will come out. Bette have been so supportive. i like it so much this chapter!
hottttttttttttttttttt longer
So Tina opened herself up to Bette and allowed even more of Bette into her soul. I am still up in the air about telling parents. It back fires a lot of the times. Tina already feels that her mom knows so maybe she does not need to say a word. Only time will tell for sure.
That was great, I like it wasn’t planned, but just happened. More please….
Zabo..that was great! Now let us read about Bette’s turn…
1st brb
hahaha… wow Lament… what is the time at your place now? Do you sleep? ;)
It’s 4 AM now on a Sunday morning so yeah I’m still awake. xD Anyway this was hot and sweet! I liked the simplicity of their first time. I’m not saying I dislike when it’s planned, but sometimes it’s nice to come to the realization of being ready at an opportune time, so no need to wait. I hope that makes sense. I was about to head to bed when I saw the story had been updated. lol Okay Bette’s turn next!
Thank God, finite back. I already wait for the continuation for a long time. Is tense if Tina will tell her parents about Bette. Can hardly wait to the next chapter there is. Please continue fast.
ZABO!!! Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! You know how I have loved this story from the first word on, right? What a lovely and sweet version of a Tibette beginning… I love it so much! PPS and dont leave us hanging here! BTW you did a marvelous job on NC-17 ;)
Gosh JLBT… you ‘KNOooowwwW’ how hard it was… and how long has it taken me to write this ;)
That was so beautiful…so loving and gentle. Will she be gentle with Bette? Or will she go all out? I love this story. I hope Tina’s family will still love her and accept that her being with Bette will not change her being the wonderful daughter and sister she is. Get some sleep Lament…lol
Wow……that was Hot Zabo :O)…ohh yeah you stil got it. Damn fine piece of work. Post soon and very soon
Damnnnnnn that was hotttt and love it and let see Bettes turn. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I really love that it wasn’t a huge, elaborate plan and totally spontaneous. So hot and sweet! Great job!