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Blind (Chap6)
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Previously:
“Ehem… you’re really beautiful…” she spoke in a hoarse voice.
“Thanks.” I sat back straight and couldn’t help but to feel disappointed.
Chapter 6
Bette:
I was awoke by a strange feeling, tickling feelings churning inside my stomach, excited heart beat…
‘What was that? Oh wait, I could sense her in the room… *sniff* oh yea, she is definitely in the room.’
Providing the hair at the back of my neck stood… ok, she was staring at me. She took a deep breath and exhaled a bit audibly.
‘Isn’t she supposed to be at home for a real rest like what she said to Dr. Palmer? Oh, she must have been exhausted working two shifts back to back. Is she staying for another shift to take care of me? There must be something bothering her by the way she sighed…’
“A penny for your thoughts…”
“Huh… oh sorry… I thought you were sleeping.” Tina was taken back by a sudden awoke Bette. She had been doing this… by staying with Bette for sometimes before heading back home at nights. She couldn’t quite put her fingers on what and why was she doing this. But Bette’s existence sure made her heart swell and feel at ease, just like how a nursery full of sleeping new born babies do to people.
“You know people can feel other people’s intense stares on them…” Chuckled Bette a bit, but actually it was Tina’s smell and presence that alerted Bette more. Tina followed the chuckle.
“So what was it you were thinking before I rudely interrupted you?” asked Bette.
“I was thinking… well, I was preparing myself for your operation tomorrow…” stammered Tina trying to avoid the truth.
“Oh c’mon, I might have been blind but I bet that is not what you were thinking.” Bette said it with a smile so that the situation would not get too tensed.
But still, Tina turned sad and pressured… she frowned… “Eric has been pressuring me to move in with him.”
‘Oh, a twinge in my heart’, “Well, do you want to?”
“I… I…” Tina gaped and then, “I don’t know… I…” she sighed and bowed her head, “I don’t want to…” She shot her head up again, “But I’ve been wanting a stable relationship, and aren’t I suppose to be ready to take a step forward in our relationship after being together for a little bit over 3 years?” She stopped a bit and she felt like she really needed to get the stuff off her chest…
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WOW!!!! Great Update. Thank you PPS
Still lovin it. Can we at least have a kiss before Bette goes in for surgery. Eric, dude, tah,tah, you gotta go. Loved how she could tell Tina was there by perfume, etc.
cool man ..all i get is one page!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The beginnings of a beautiful love story, one that brings joy to many people around the world. All it takes is a look, a touch of one’s hand, or the knowledge that someone is listening to you.
very sweet and way too short. Thank you for this story. post soon
If Tina dosen’t want to move in with the good Dr. then she shouldn’t, she should wait until Bette leaves the hospital and move in with her (am I being too forward…lol. Please let Bette’s surgery go well and sight is regained so her and Tina can get on with their lives.
Thank you so much for this lovely update ! By the way, please never worry to be long to write : English isn’t my first language too so I understand and, above all, quantity isn’t quality, hmm ? (*wink & smile*) Oh, that’s my pleasure to express my reader’s joy through comments, really it is (… and, dear JLBT, stop to make me blush !! ^_^ ). — I love the way you depict Bette’s evolution (‘I discovered how important it is to really listen to someone’) and how feelings are beautifully growning here. Tina mouthing a silent declaration of love just gave me a thrill ! In a way, I share JLBT’s point of view here, about the far distance between Tina’s statement and Bette’s one – this frustrating ‘I think I’ve fallen’ thing ! – , but after all, isn’t it sooo our Bette to avoid a definitive confession of her feelings, like a last defense ? For me, these contrasted ways to express their feelings are so symptomatic of their opposite natures. But the essential is there : a shared love is taking all the place ! As so rightly said the Little Prince : ‘It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.’ — More than ever your faithful reader ! ^_^
They are sweet and beautiful!
I didnt even try.. can I be 1st again?
Arghh… I should followed my instinct to just leave myself the first comment… *defeated* yea, u’re first JLBT… hahahhahaha
Hey Zabo ;) Now, I really wasn’t trying to be first… I had my test yesterday and today Ive been painting in the new place me and my gf are gonna live in (soon I hope) and I just got here and decided to check the site… And wat do you know, I get to be first to comment again! Yessss… The L-word has fallen… Although Tina seems to be more certain about her feelings for Bette then vice-versa (The famous ‘I think I have ‘ LOL) *sigh* I so love this story.. As Therese said (isn’t she a wonderfull commenter?) love is blind… And this story equals love ;) Thanks so much for this update! I hope you’ll post again soon!
I love reading this story, and am so glad that your writing for us again
“Why is that all our relationships started off with passion flames and ended off with… mostly anger flame or coolness?” My dear Tina, I believe that is called “the end of the honeymoon.” Not to mention that the hotter the beginning is, the worse the end will feel. If there’s never any fire or giddiness then the end will be more like a “Hallelujah, Amen!” lol I’ve been through both, and I’m talking about serious relationships, not junior high flings that end a few months later and you’re crushed thinking you’ll never find someone again (been there, done that too x.x).
wonderful update as well, you just know how to build tension…can’t wait for more
I really,really Love this fic, for the simple fact that it seems B&T are falling for eachother,even though they’re not exactly at their best. Bette’s practically blind,So she can’t see Tina. And Tina doesn’t seem to mind.Tina has major issues as well with Dr.Palmer. The fact that they’re falling for eachother,even gthough they both have flaws shows true love. LOL. i think i’m jumping the gun a bit here, but your writing is really good. Post soon!
This was heartwarming, thank you.
Waow, JLBT, You didn’t even try??? …You’re really becoming a pro at this! Even Lament is beaten! Zabo, your story is amazing! I love this new kind of connection between our favorite couple. Go with the flow, Tina, go with the flow!!! Thanks, and PPS!
I enjoy this story so much.
i still love it but we need to get rid of Eric :)
i can’t stop to said that this story is so sweet i like it so much, If Tina stayed longer with Bette than her usual work time is because she is in love with Bette and eve Bette think i have the feeling that Bette is sure about it but is the Porter’s method to protect herself. I hope the surgery will be fine in order to Bette will be available to see the wonderful blond nurse!
Damn….a cliffhanger!!!!!PPS
You need to post some longer chapters :o) – welcome back Zabo, I just stumbled on your fantastic story here…..so nice to see your name with us once again. Post soon
My heart Tibette all smiles :) :) :)
10 stars.