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Blisters in the Sun: Part 2
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“I’m a crap mother.” Helena said shakily. Bette and Tina had invited themselves over for dinner, but were bringing dinner with them, since the invite was really about seeing how Helena was doing.
“No, you’re really not…you’re a wonderful mother.” Tina reassured her. Helena began to cry, rather uncharacteristically, against Tina’s shoulder. It lasted all of three minutes, but it was enough to let them know that Helena was indeed crushed about her children’s distance from her, to a degree which was perhaps altogether new and unfamiliar. They stayed over that night, without debate or discussion, and in the morning, Tina made pancakes.
While pancakes were being eaten by the increasingly affectionate and inseparable threesome, Ninny were shopping for a sperm donor.
“I want ten children…and at least one set of twins.” Nikki really was sort of adorable, and her domestic aspirations touched a part of Jenny that the strange little writer had thought to be permanently dormant.
“What about him?” Jenny pointed covertly—actually, she was rather obvious about it—to a muscular, dark haired man in surfer shorts and a Ramones tshirt. He looked terrified.
“You’ve apparently already scared him away…” Nikki shrugged, watching as the man rushed into his car and drove away from the café. He had obviously had experience with lesbian couples scouting for sperm. Or else Jenny just frightened him. She did, afterall, spend an extended amount of time loudly discussing “eunuch culture” (a sub-culture invented by Jenny herself) and the shamefulness of losing the practice of castrating men for the sake of using them to protect brothels. She also waved a butter knife menacingly whilst discussing the invented issue.
But Nikki, as always, stood up to Jenny, and calmed her down long enough to discuss the real possibilities of not only having a child, but of keeping that child’s bio-sperm-donor-man in the picture.
“It saves him or her looking for that person down the line,” She explained while they lay together in the bedroom, half naked (waist up for Jenny and waist down for Nikki), surrounded by a series of prints of the paintings of Cezanne and a small tub of chocolate ice cream, which Jenny nibbled on while they discussed.
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That TBC (with no question mark) makes me very happy. So does the fact that Ninny managed to snag themselves a sperm donor; if they screw up parenting as badly as they screwed up “Lez Girls,” it’s comforting to know the framily is there to serve as a safety net. I love the Bette/Helena/Tina triangle and this story’s non-angsty celebration of free love. One worry: if Tina continues to write bad poetry, will Jenny feel threatened by the competition?
Hmmmm HB I love your stories but the threesome of Bette/Helena and Tina just don’t do it for me….not sexy at all. I prefer couples. Why does Helena have to hang with boring Bette/Tina why not Shane/Alice? When I say Alice and Shane I mean friendship not sex.
i had to laugh when tasha and alice got caught in france,lol…tina needs to do something to get out of this funk she is in…. needs to see dr. dan.lol oddly i can’t get into bette and helena stories, to me an odd pairing but this one of the three i find so well written and amazingly funny in its own way. jenny and nikki are so funny together…. please… tina needs to give up writing bad stories and what not… jenny is bound to go wacko on her sooner or later…lol… rofl at shane and puppies.. great update :)
The trio seems to be growing together despite any hesitations Helena has. I am glad to see there has been a thaw from the iciness of the girls. I look forward to seeing where you take us next.
I’ll admit I haven’t read it yet but I’m happy to see it. I’ll read it over the weekend. I see from the comments there is lots to think about.
So “Lez Girls” was a flop. Given Jenny’s creative *abilities* (don’t tell Sofa I stole her asteriks) that’s no surprise. Given same, I truly hope Ninny doesn’t attempt procreation, either. Isn’t the world a fucked up enough place without Jenny’s offspring roaming about? The thought along makes me want to retch. And since it was France, why didn’t they simply put the security video featuring Alice and Tasha on as a objet and offer cocktails and hors d’oevres for the debut instead of giving them the sort of warning more typical of American morality? (It’s that goddamn Puritan streak, I tell ya) And what’s a well muscled guy doing wearing a Ramones shirt? It’s not like Joey was any paragon of physical beuaty-in fact he was one of the ugliest guys I’ve ever layed eyes on-God rest his soul. Well, it’s good to be back. It’s good to see you back. I’ll be in touch when there’s slightly less shit hitting the fan-may I make it through the last 2 weeks of school. I don’t think this particular story needs any werewolves. And I’m so glad you canned the ?
And you’re right about Shane’s reaction to the “puppies”. Any self-respecting butchish street urchin would have stood her ground and not got all girly-squealy about some nice, clean, wellgroomed stunt rats. And Angelica was wrong about the “puppies”, too. When I saw a tourist couple walking on W. 52 St. react to the rat scurrying away from the heap of garbage bags late one night, I smiled at them as I passed and said “nice kitties”.
I love your sense of humour. Jenny and the knife.lol. Tina drinking red wine and writing bad poetry lol. And I think Alice In France. lol I love your threesome. I am going to read again. I love it you did amazing..
Hey there, you do know you are only a 4 hr drive away… and if I have to walk I will make it in 4 hours or die trying to make sure you never give up on the writing… yep… you will be writing as long as me and well I think that might be forever :wink:… hehe… as for this story… lets see… when these three actually find there barings and well just start acting like more of adults then little Angel well then hehe… they might be deserving of their fates… but right know… let the healing come and love and passion are certainly ingredients for healing :wink: :wink:… you rock and roll my beautiful friend. Hugs, JC
I love the little snippets about the other couples–public sex for Talice, sperm choosing for Ninny :).
Ok Finally read it. Cracking up as I thought I would. Hmmmm would love to hear more about Talice’s adventure…I wonder about Shane and Helena’s little tryst and if this story of free love might we expect a foursome or some other threesome combo’s….Great story Co-captain…(One comment on the comments…Beachlife I thought you liked my Bette and Helena story…Hmmmm Things that make you go hmmmm)
Oh God. Ninny (HA! xD) creating a child together? *shudder* Dammit now I’ll have that Ramones song stuck in my head AGAIN. lol Sounds like Tina really had it rough growing up. I’m not sure what’s worse: depression and anxiety that rear their ugly heads at an early age, or stay dormant until then come crashing down unexpectedly.
Helebette, this was so good! I think there is more room for another Shane/Helena one night stand. Can’t wait to read more!