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Blvd Knights PT 8
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Blvd Knights
Ch 20
All that we were is gone we have to hold on….
A nurse walks by and sees me covered in Carmen’s blood. And she asks me if I am hurt. And I tell no but my girlfriend is and she pregnant. And no one will tell me if she is alright. And I know she is dying and she would want to see me. And she has no family I am her only family. And we took our eyes off him for one second …The nurse tells me that she will help me…but that we need to get cleaned up. So she takes my hand and we go get cleaned. Turns out I got grazed by a shot and it needed to get it cleaned up and stitched. And I had a nice new pair of scrubs to go with my bloody towel, which I wouldn’t let her take from me.
The nurse asked me if I wanted to see the baby. They had to do an emergency c-section to save the baby incase something went wrong in the O.R.
“Is it a boy Carmen wanted a boy?…” I choked when I said boy. My voice couldn’t say the words clear.
“Yes a baby boy…” The nurse says.
“She knew………. she kept telling me he’s gonna be a champion kick boxer. Or soccer player. She wanted a boy. Marco she wanted to name him Marco.”
“Good now we know what to name him…come on let’s go see baby Marco…”
So we take the elevator up to the baby floor. And everything is foggy and I feel like I am walking outside of myself. Like I am not here. I had to put the towel down to put on this suit to keep the germs out. He was in this glass case. And he looked small…and sad and alone. And it broke my guts to pieces seeing him like this. I touched his little hand. And said a silent prayer. I sang a little song to him. Just humming really. And I left. Could the nurse please tell me if she was ok. She told me she will come get me as soon as she was out of the O.R.
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I’m not the emotional type, but damn it, you got me almost crying here. Awesome fic, and I’m looking forward to your next fic. I’m sure it will be as great as this one is. Thank you for sharing this with us ;)
it’s scarey b/c some where right now that’s happening, or it’s happened, and the beauty of your story is something that I don’t see in many pieces, definitly one of the greatest stories from start to finish, brava
I’m crying, just give me a sec… (fuck you’ve made me soft) I will never be able to sleep tonight, knowing this is over.. And ahhh, what a love story! You should be so damn proud!
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo lol not cool lol you had me crying 4 30 min so sad god im not gonna sleep tonight lol 4 reel you r one of the best righters i love all your stuff but this story….. the way you right it felt like the movie domino the same stie lovve it!!!!!!!!!!!
im with koolthing . You have 2 make a movie !!!!!!!!! lol lets bring carmen from the dead and keep righting lol
This totally brought tears in my eyes. I’m so sad to see this story end. It was an amazing ride and I dind’t for once get the feeling that I knew what was going to happen. I truly thank you, and your gift to write, that I got to read this story. Hopefully this isn’t the last we hear from you!
You broke my heart. I thought that it would wrong finish but the path was fantastic.THANKS…
I scared myself just now, because I was finding myself agreeing with Havoc’s reasoning, not with the killing, just with the reasoning. I mean, a true friend–hell, it doesn’t even have to be a friend, just a decent human being–wouldn’t bite at the first chance to screw someone else over. Anywho, my heart absolutely broke in this chapter. I’ll be honest, I’m a sucker for happy endings. I would have preferred that things would have worked out for the characters a little better, because even people with messed up lives deserve happiness. However, I knew you wouldn’t go for that “happily ever after” fluff. I still like your ending, beacuse you stayed true to the story and I seriously respect that. Thanks for sharing; it was flippin’ awesome.
WHHYYYYYY! My heart broke for Shane & baby Marcos. I didn’t expect the outcome to be a happy one but I hoped. Damn! That was incredibly awesome. The story arcs you’ve taken w/ this story was beyond fantastic. So sad that its come to an end. I hope you do something else soon w/ my favorite couple Shane & Carmen. Luv it.
truely awesome fic!! Loved it from begining to end! I figured Carmen was gonna die, but I still didnt want her too… although it makes sense, fits the story. Now, you must contine the other one you started… and I request another dark one like this! I have to say I’ve read a whole lot of fics…. but this one is my favorite, unless you can out write yourself…
I don’t know what to say… I just… am lost for words. I am happy that you have written this fantastic fic, I am sad that it had ended. I am freaking pissed at Havoc for shooting Carmen. I am feeling all the heartbreak for Shane, but i am especially upset that Carmen died. I love your fic and the way you have written it, because just the premise, and the writing style is enough to blow me away. I knew, somehow just knew that it would never be a happy ending. Sad movies never happen that way. Sigh. But I still read on. Totally hooked. Argh. it’s killing me.On another note, now that this sad sad fic has ended, does that mean you will be updating La Mer from now on. If so, then that would be the best news since Santa gave me a bicycle!
that was heartbreaking but also amazingly great. I love your stories and the way you write…I do like Sharmen stories!!Tomorrow I’m gonna leave for Barcellona-Spain and I hope that once back I’ll be able to read your new Sharmen story, “La mer”,which as far as I’m concerned will be another great story…bye
I had to remind myself that this was fiction like when I’m watching a movie that ends sadly, well this is what that felt like. It wasnt like a story for me it was like watching a movie play out and it was so awesome to read. I really like your style of writing and hope that you will continue to indulge us Sharmen fanatics with other great stories like this in the near future!
This was an absolutely brilliant story from start to finish and I’m sad to see it end. Even though it didn’t have a happy ending and I hate seeing Carmen die and Shane be hearbroken, I think you had to be true to the tone of the story. I love all of your fics, so I look forward to reading more great writing from you. Thank you.
I really liked this story. I liked how it seemed to play out like a movie, and I liked how twisted it got at some points. The ending was sad but completely understandable. A happy, fluffy ending would’ve felt wrong in this story I think. Thanks so much for taking the time to write it, and updating frequently. It’s such a joy to see an update. I looked forward to reading the rest of your new story “la mer” and any future fics to come! Thanks again!
I don’t know if i ever commented on your story before, but i just wanted to say that i followed this one all the way through from start to finish and loved it. i never thought i would enjoy these alternate reality type stories but this one really got me. i always got excited for updates. i’m just sad to see it end but you did an amazing job with it. sure it was sad but like others said it was the right way to bring this story to an end.