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Breathe– Chapter 24
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Bringing her body on top of Bette’s so that she could look directly into her dark eyes, Tina said “Is this all right, baby?”
Bette nodded, not sure if Tina was suddenly self -consciousn in her lovemaking something that had not been evident before or she feared that their time together was nearing its end.
Receiving Bette’s unspoken permission Tina dropped her lips to her dark lover’s neck and slowly, methodically kissed every inch of exposed skin.
As she licked Bette’s ear, taking her lobe in her warm mouth and teasing it with her tongue Tina said softly, “Bette, I can’t get enough of you.” She paused as if unsure that she should go on.
Defying the impossible and getting her lips even closer to Bette’s ear she finally said barely above a whisper “Bette I want, no I need, all of you. Will you let me love you?” she paused again, “Will you let me taste you?”
Bette took a deep breath, unsure of how Tina could possibly know. They had never discussed her lovemaking with her wife, nor had Bette ever shared how the intimacy of someone’s mouth upon her had always been too much for her heart to bare.
While she had loved bringing Bobbie her release with the touch of her lips and mouth, she had always insisted on holding her lover close, and being able to look in her eyes at her own most vulnerable moment.
Bette searched Tina’s patient eyes her mind again asking the question “How could she possibly know?”
As if she read her thoughts, Tina leaned forward and gently pulling on Bette’s lower lip said “Let go. Trust me Bette.”
Bringing her hands up to cradle Bette’s beautiful face in her hands, Tina lightly kissed her left cheek. Drawing back again, she looked in Bette’s eyes and said “Trust me.”
Still seeing the doubt, Tina gently kissed Bette’s right cheek. Drawing back and holding Bette’s gaze once more she repeated “Trust me.”
Bette shook her head and finally finding her voice choked out hoarsely, “I don’t know if I can.” Her voice trailed off as she realized how disappointed and hurt Tina would be by her words.
Tina had given Bette her trust so freely. From the moment she had let Bette seize control at the crime scene, let her take Tina to her home, and accepted her first kiss, Tina had willingly placed her heart, soul and life in Bette’s hands.
Bette looked away and biting her lower lip was afraid to meet Tina’s gaze knowing she would find nothing but sadness and disappointment. She felt Tina’s warm hand on her chin as she carefully forced Bette to look in her eyes once again.
Bette sighed when she saw nothing but love, patience and understanding reflected in Tina’s soft, brown eyes. Not knowing what she did to deserve such immediate, complete and overwhelming unconditional love, Bette knew this was the time, the place and the woman worth risking it all.
As Tina repeated “Trust me, Bette,” in a soft, reassuring voice, Bette decided to simply step off the ledge and hope Tina was there to catch her. Unable to find her voice, Bette nodded, leaned into Tina’s arms and waited.
As she realized she had finally reached Bette, Tina moaned with deep love and desire and captured Bette’s lips in a soft, intense kiss. As the kiss deepened, both women let go no longer communicating with words or looks, but wanting to let their hands, their soft touches and their deep kisses speak their wants and desires.
Overcome by her own need, Bette tried to reach for Tina but her lover shook her head, staying out of reach and started kissing a slow deliberate path down Bette’s honey-colored torso.
As the nerves in her body and the love in her heart responded, Bette shook slightly as Tina brought her closer to the intense and intimate release Bette had always resisted and feared.
Bette could not hold back the tears as she felt Tina inside her and as she cried Tina’s name she knew the last wall had fallen. Tina was now part of her, part of her heart, part of her body and Bette could not live without her any more than she could without the air in her lungs or the blood in her veins.
As Tina came back to her, held her close and kissed her tears Bette knew that she would indeed keep Tina safe or die trying.
TBC
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damm let me be the first to ask for another
wow it kills me to have to wait for this story
I find myself reading a book a day and yet to find anything that compares to your story. I don’t know why but I am hooked. I have read more books in this short time of your post of this story then I have read in my life.
wow you really take us there!
Amazing..simply amazing
I love the way you write NC17, we will have to call you “love puppy” not “porno puppy”. You are gifted, and thank very much for sharing your story with us!! You have one totally addicted fan on your hands.
Again very well done
Simply beautiful!
Yet again, inspired beyond words, the love doctor is in your writing. Thank you, can’t wait…
“Porno-Puppy” your NOT! Sox, I hadnt reached the end of this chapter before my own body starting tingling.
WOW! You have the gift that keeps on giving!
Excuse me while I read this a 3rd time!!!
That was breath-taking!!
That was really special, Sox. Thank You. I think that is the most intimate thing a woman can do to another, beautifully done.
Sox, what can I say but WOW, I like the way you say feeling the love before feeling the skin. It definitely showed in this story. You are an exquisite writer, please keep it coming and I will continue reading.
You write it perfect like love is between two lovers. Thank you
“I have always been a bit of a stickler for feeling the love before feeling the skin”
… god, I so totally agree with you here. That’s very beautiful…
Now continue to blush if you want, but please don’t feel “humble” : this second part was so touching, truly moving, because it was, beyond the pure beauty of such a shared total love, a real deliverance – in the deepest sense of the word.
And I’ll be always happy to comment your wonderful story, dear talented author. That’s a daily pleasure…
By the way, thank you for this tender “Sunday break” ! It was great to melt a while before to go back to the hard reality – even if I’m absolutely ready for an other journey through “the wacko’s head” this week !
P.S.: I love your personal notices before each new chapter a lot, it always gives a between-the-lines reading through an author’s mind and heart too – and I have a big weakness for this sort of exercise !
Thank you.
*sigh* that was one of the most touching examples of love and trust i have ever read. thanks for being a “porno puppy” so NOT. anytime tonight.
SOX… beautiful… simply beautiful… i could just see tina asking bette… and i could feel the love… OMG… please keep them safe… like tina said… There has been enough dying Bette…and “I want you to live many, many years and grow old with me.” yes we all want that…. another great chapter… please continue
What more can we say…Amazing…
What can I say???? the others have said it all for me. Sigh
>>As Tina came back to her, held her close and kissed her tears Bette knew that she would indeed keep Tina safe or die trying. <<< Uh oh. Since Bette said that twice, now I’m nervous. Thanks for the surprise Sunday post. :)
That was so beautiful.. it brought tears to my eyes – don’t ever call yourself porn anything. I keep asking myself.. how does she give them voice so well.
Tasteful and Fantastic!! You are a famous author having fun with us aren’t you!! :)
Sox–
This note’s long overdue, but I hope my tardiness doesn’t diminish the sincerity of the praise. I’ve been enjoying this story since you started posting it–fabulous twists and turns, wonderful things happening with all of the secondary characters, amazing attention to just the right details with the more technical crime scene info. Thanks so much for sharing your work.
Gosh, you are on a roll.
Another sweet interlude to reassure our lovers and deepen their bond. Amidst all of the mayhem, this is a nice calm before the storm. You continue to have a sweet, knowing way about the way B&T connect. I am hanging on your every word.
That was not ‘porno puppy’ stuff in the least! It was deep emotional exposure bathed in love. Tasteful exploration of each other’s bodies searching for familiar vistas and new horizons. I am at a loss for words to let you know just how much I enjoyed all that you brought to us in this chapter. At the risk of being repetative…wonderful.
amazing..
True love, fate, destiny………..hope. I like that Sox. Thanks.
Wow
Well soxy, yoube got a line of addicts outside your door – waiting for posts and treasuring each one. I’m at the front of the line and then I go right back and get in line again. Awesome wonderful beautiful chapter.
I love this story. So much so that I read 18 chapters in one day. Would have read them all but I had to go to work. I seriously considered calling in. I came home this morning and promptly read the remaining chapters. What will I do now? I am so hooked. I love how you have incorporated phrases from the show into your book. If I don’t see another posting soon I will probably die. I need more of this story like Tina needs Bette. Hurry!!! Love your work. Just love it!!!!!!
***such tenderness***. Simply – beautiful! Thank you.
This was simpley beautiful. Hey CROO.It was a rain day here again. I picked up a Rita Mae Brown book ALMA MATER .Been on my book selve for a while. If you hadn’t read it do. Thanks for this wonderful chapter.
WOW, you really are a GREAT writer…THANKS POST SOON
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What more can i say excellent!!!
Great post this exciting and tender at the same time!!!!!!!!! nothing can happen to tina!!!!!!!!
That was amazing!