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    Breathe– Chapter 33

    Story written on October 4, 2005 by Sox1.
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    The Task force comes together and Bette Plugs a Media Leak

    His throat tightened as he realized how helpless they were to stop a man they couldn’t find from killing a woman they didn’t know. “We made this guy a star today and the urge to kill is going to overwhelm him. We need to find this man, and we need to find him before he finds her.”

    As every officer in the room thought of the next victim, someone’s daughter, sister, lover or friend an awkward silence fell over the room until a young patrol officer raised his hand and asked “Detective Porter who called the reporter and leaked the info in the case?”

    There was almost an audible groan from the veteran officers in the room who knew Bette couldn’t reveal the identity of the informant, wouldn’t share the information publicly until the officer had been notified, and shouldn’t betray the officer just because he had betrayed the department.

    “This is an ongoing investigation that will involve both Internal Affairs and the Officers Guild,” Bette said, keeping her tone as matter of fact and routine as possible. “Union rules are very clear about confidentiality.” She paused as she contemplated her next words.

    “There are really only two things that concern this task force,” she finally said. “Finding this killer before he kills again, and making sure we aren’t the ones making it easier for him to evade arrest.”

    “This story,” she held up the paper again. “details our investigation to such a degree that I think we can anticipate the real killer will change his MO.” Bette shook her head as another sobering reality suddenly came to her. “We also need to be prepared for copycats who now have a blueprint on how to commit a front page murder.”

    While Bette had expected this news to set off a round of questions and heated discussion, she was unnerved by the uncanny quiet that descended upon the room as every officer contemplated a city full of copycats.

    “I need us to be sharp today. We have hundreds of leads generated by the first article.” Bette picked up a stack of papers and began handing one to each member of the task force.

    “The leads are grouped geographically. Each zone is assigned two officers and one CSI.” Bette finished distributing the assignment sheets and returned to the front of the room.

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    2. Soooo glad you’re back and starting to feel better. The words ‘dislocated pelvis’ themselves make me squeamish – let alone knowing that you’re actually experiencing it. Gods! This installment was great and not at all patchy. Please continue writing – it’s one of my faves! Hey, get one of those ergonomically correct chairs for your office. They are pricey but will definitely save your bones! Continue healing, Sox! – dragon

    3. *waving and jumping up and down* soxy so glad to hear from ya. was very worried. thanks for the dinner.

      it flowed for me. i love the details and the pain i feel bette in everytime she thinks about tina. back in fighting form. take care and be safe.

    6. THRILLED!!! you are back I am glad to are on the road to recovery..This story is so compelling..I can’t wait for it to unfold..You are one hell of a writer girl..Please take care of yourself and your family and post as soon as you can..Great chapter…Thanks again for your time..Feel better soon.

    7. Before I even start to read this chapter, I just want to say welcome back. Oh, how I have missed you. And so glad to hear that you’re healing. Now off I go.

    11. SOX…so glad your feeling better… you were missed but we were praying for you… and i’m glad your back and better… you know i love this story… so continue when your up to it… we will bw here waiting.. thanks

    13. Welcome back, Sox. Happy to hear that you’re getting back to your normal self.

      This story is just as riveting as ever! I am always amazed at home quickly I fly through the pages.

      Sensationalizing the killers actions unfortunately only gives credibility to his actions. But like Bette said, this was not publicity that he orchestrated. When people are upset that is when they are likely to make critical mistakes. We hope the same goes for him.

      A city full of copy cats…that’s a very disturbing thought. There’s always some nut job that wants their 15 minutes of fame and will be willing to ride on the coat tails of someone else that did the ground work.

      The arrogance of the young officer was only one of the things that got him removed from the task force…it was the fact that he was a danger to Tina’s safety that was the most damning.

      Most of the officers on some level are probably hoping that this will be a feather in their cap, but that is less important than their oath to Protect and Serve.

      Protocol and common sense were transcended by Jeff Kaplan’s ideal of protection. He thought outside of the box and decided that he would rather try and save a victim, rather than sit ideally by and provide the clues to how she died. Becoming a parent changes your perspective.

      Would Bette have done the same thing as Jeff Kaplan? He didn’t do it specifically to save Tina, and if Bette were in his place she wouldn’t have the same investment with Tina as she has now. Hopefully, we will never know.

      Tremendously thrilling story. Happy to see you have posted, even happier to know you will post again!

    14. Nice to see you back – you were missed. I hope you continue on the road to recovery.
      This was a good “behind the scenes chapter” about how this type of horrific case affects everyone involved.
      Looking forward to the next chapter and for the record, I am really worried about Tina!

    16. Hope everything keeps going well with you and yours. It a shame that one person in the name of justic did the wrong thing.Most of us would have done the same thing to save some one any harm. Bette is still between a rock and a hard place. Her job or Tina. Justic will prevail tho… thanks so much

    18. Sox1,

      Glad to hear that you are on the mend. Sending you kind thoughts to encourage the healing process.

      This chapter was a great change of pace and displayed the dogged determination and temerity that is required for police work, particularly involving a homicidal maniac. It is not the spoils that drive these officers but the knowledge that the criminal will not re-offend and will pay for the crimes.

      Bette’s call to arms speech is a brilliant observation of leadership and motivation. The investigators know their job and the responsibilities however it is often necessary to ensure that everyone is fighting in the same corner.

      The unveiling of the informant was heartfelt and compassionate. I felt every emotion that Bette, James and Jeff went through. This is a testament to your talent.

      I will, as ever, be waiting and watching for you next post.

      This story like a fine wine only gets better with age.

      Your Loyal Fan.

    19. welcome back Sox. I hope your recovery going well and u r feeling alot better. Now on to the chapter – once again, absolutely captivating. The way inwhich you describe a scene and create tension is outstanding. Thanx for your time and so looking forward to the next chapter.

    24. So glad you’re back and on the mend. Such a slow, painful process for you. Anyways your story – as tight and powerful as always. Absolutely rivetting.

    25. Great that your back and so glad that your doing better after the accident. As usual this chapter is excellent – looking forward to the next!

    29. so glad to hear you are recovering and feelin better. and hey..thx for this great post!! i’ve been waiting long enuf..!! :) take care meanwhile….hope to catch the next chapter soon!

    30. Sox….what a joy to have you back! I know Bette is going to nail this guy but , then what is her decision going to be? Will she stay with the SPD, will she retire to some romantic place with Tina, will she become a consultant, a trainer of young cops? Geez…endless possibilities.

      So glad you are on the mend and by the way, this chapter was well worth the wait.

    31. soxy – I wasn’t worried about the pooch or Tina – I was worried about you glad to hear you are healing and that you were taking care of yourself. You know your loyal fans will be here whenever so may your recovery continue and the story is as aways wonderful.

    33. Hey Sox..nice to see you´re back with us…hope you are feeling better after your little incident….take care now and do write something for us very soon. We so love the drame here…post soon

    34. It’s good 2 have u back and i hope ur feeling better, take care of urself would ya. thanx 4 the post, and just 2 let u know i love ur story.

    36. Newbie here. I’m glad you seem to be doing well. You are one lucky person.
      A good friend turned me on to this story, and I’m glad she did. All I can say about your work is @#e483^&3!~ &^(*&* AHJG8%^$@7@^ *^2wef6@$@!!. Exactly. There are just no words. I consider myself very lucky to have felt what you write so eloquently about.

      True love always ends in tragedy. Do you believe this? *holding breath*

    37. Hey Sox…..just wanted to say that I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This story is great! I hope you’re almost fully mended and things have now gotten back into their normal groove.

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