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Breathe Me * Chapter 22
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Eric knelt down and unknowingly picked up Bette’s bra.
"This is nice. I don’t remember this."
Tina moved to snatch the garment out of his hand, but he pulled it away.
"Eric just go."
"So, what? You break up with me and then you’re fucking someone else? It hasn’t even been three days. Who is he?"
"It’s none of your business, get out. Now!"
"Or what?" Eric grabbed Tina’s arm roughly. Before Tina could yank it away, Bette appeared in the hall. Her hair was still wet and she was clad in a t-shirt and a pair of boxer shorts she had snagged from Tina’s dresser,
"Tee, I forgot my bag by the couch, can you…" Bette grew silent as she took in the scene before her. Eric stood over Tina, her arm in his vice-like grip. He looked furious and Tina looked shocked.
"Tee?" Bette looked between the former couple and furrowed her brow, "You take your hands off of her." Bette moved forward but was waved off by Tina.
"Bette, don’t" Tina looked up at Eric and yanked her arm away. "I want you to leave."
Eric stared at Bette, his look of disbelief turning quickly to rage, "You are fucking her?! A woman? What the fuck is going on, Tina?"
"Eric, please, just go. Don’t do this."
"Do what?"
"I believe Tina asked you to leave." Bette wished she was dressed more formidably, she felt ridiculous.
"Oh yeah, and who’s going to make me?"
Eric took a step toward Bette, who for her part took a step toward him, as well.
"Wait a minute, Bette? As in Elizabeth Porter? You’re the fucking FBI agent Tina is supposed to be working with? Oh this is rich. This is going to make quite the story at the office. You want me to leave? I’m fucking out of here." Eric flung the bra he had been holding in Bette’s face.
Bette stared at him with utter contempt.
Eric hooked is thumb at Tina and winked at Bette, "I hope she’s better at eating pussy than sucking cock."
"You watch your fucking mouth…." Bette barely finished her sentence before Tina hauled off and slapped him hard across the face. The loud thwack reverberated off the apartment walls.
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I just love your writing style and how you’re unfolding this story. The pacing is great and their convos seem realistic and natural. PPS.
EXTASTE7 said all that I wanted to say and ditto to what Seahurst said too! Love your story so much, you’re fabulous!
Great Chapter!!! Loving this story!!!! Thank you PPS
eric is such an a**hole…i almost wish he was a killer so he can rot in jail LOL great update
What did Tina’s dad call Eric? Oh, yeah, douchebag…
Thanks for updating so soon. I really enjoy reading this story.
wow awsome thx 4 posting quick im getting obsessed with this story now
It’s great that Tina talked to Bette and made her understand that she doesn’t regret anything at all and that she’s more than ready for their relationship. Hopefully he will leave them alone but I fear he will try to cause problems for them. Hopefully it will only bring more acrimony towards himself. Great update. Thanks for posting.
awww Tina said the L word. I like how she can read Bette’s facial expressions so soon. I hope Eric is gone for good now.
Bye Eric,its Tina and bette now.Great update.Thank you.
thanks a load for the special morning treat :)
Thank you, thank you for this beautiful story. Thank you for not breaking my Tina loving heart. Thank you for not breaking my Tibette loving heart.I’m grateful to you for that because most of the stories that invovled Tibette right now are just breaking my heart in two pieces, but reading your story is healing for my heart. BTW I love Tina slapping Eric but she should have punched him instead, it would have hurt more and make me happier.
Your writing style really is wonderful. From the first word to the last, I am totally immersed in your story. Thank you for your frequent posting, and for sharing your Bette and Tina with us. (And thanks for the compliment. :-))
Again, a great story that is rich in depth in so many areas. Thanks for posting on a regular basis. This really keeps the flow going and adds to the strength of the reading experience.
Lovely chapter, I like how desoite the chane of scenaries and professions you’re keeping TiBette true to their show’s characters. Thanks for the good work and read you very soon.
Oops! I meant despite and not “desoite” and change of scenaries.
eric is an ass and glad that he is out of the pic. Love the way B&T with each other, so sweet and cute!
Lost link, on first time when commenting on this chapter. As I said glad that Tina talked to Bette and actually said that she was in love. I changed my choice as the killer at first I thought it was possibly Jenny, now I know that it is Eric, he seems to hate lesbians.