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Breathe Me * Chapter 25
Andrew Wills looked back and forth between the two women, paying close attention to Tina’s body as he moved aside to usher her in. Bette followed closely behind, catching his lascivious gaze and not appreciating it in the least. She didn’t like him and she had no intention of pretending that she did.
Porter and Kennard stood in the hall as they waited for him to shut the door, and then followed him through the entryway and into a large living room. The house looked barely lived in. Every shelf and table top was covered with dust; the wall paper was yellowed and several boxes were piled haphazardly in the corners of the room. Old newspapers lie stacked in piles and Bette could see the roaches scatter when Wills turned on the light on an old coffee table.
"You’ll have to excuse the lack of house keeping; I haven’t been here very long. I just moved in."
Bette huffed, "I thought you’d been here over a year already?"
"And where did you hear that?"
"Ellie Banks." Bette observed the change in his facial expression and wasted no time in bringing it to his attention,
"Oh, that’s interesting."
"What’s that?"
"Well, I mentioned Katherine’s name earlier and there was nothing, no emotion at all. Funny, considering the two of you were boyfriend girlfriend, which I don’t believe, by the way, but we’ll get back to that later. Like I was saying, I mention Ellie’s name and I see anger, maybe even some fear?"
"I’m not afraid of that miserable bitch, I can assure you of that."
"Hmmm. You can deny it all you’d like Mr. Wills, but I know what I saw."
"Excuse me, Andrew. I think what agent Porter is trying to say, is that we’re a little surprised that you and Katherine had been in a relationship. It was almost as though you didn’t remember her when we mentioned her name."
"As the Agent said, it’s been ten years. Yes, Katherine and I were together, about a year or so before she was taken from us. I’ve had time to grieve."
Bette began to chuckle and Tina could see the anger rise in Wills’ eyes,
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(52 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
I knew he was the killer!
faaaaaaack!!! Go Tina Go!!!
You should write crime stories for a living. Very exciting.
HOLY CRAP! That was awesome. Please post more so we can see Tina kick his ass and then help “tend” to Bette! :)
OMG – go get him TINA! GO! FANTASTIC STORY – please don’t leave it there! (sorry about the CAPS – I’m excited!)
Oh my god! You shot Bette! Tina shoot him and land one! This is so exciting. Thank you scaf!
let’s hope bette will be okay and tina gets the bastard…though he might not be a killer, he just could be a really bad guy LOL
WOW this is really exciting!
I knew he was the killer. I hope Bette is okay and that Tina gets him or shot him either way, doesn’t matter to me.
very exciting!!!!
Holy shit!!!! Hurry up!!! (PLEASE!) :-) LOL Thanks!!
You think that Bette would be abetter shot, LOL. Just kidding scraf, this is good story and GREAT update. PLEASE continue.
Wow what a great chapter. Kick his ass Tina. Quick so you can help Bette.
I seriously dont believe this…You shot Bette, the bad guy is on the run with Tina (hopefully) close …..and you end the chapter there. So not nice. We definitely need an update – please – soon.
DAMMIT!!!!!!! That was so good… I knew I should have waited to read this tomorrow, arrgghh!!! Damn cliffies ;) please post reeeaaally soon :)
very thrill!come back soon please!
Somebody call for backup! I love this story. I had a bad feeling about this chapter, but I have another feeling you will make it all OK. Thanks for posting such a great story.
HOLLY GOD!!!! please don’t let anything happened to them. Poter please don’t kill him, that will be too easy. He needs to suffer before he dies. Mooooore please. Can’t believe you stopped there lol, tease.PPVS
Holy Shit Batman!!!!!!!. Surely Bette has called for backup and an ambulance.Hopefully she has called the station for Shane to go to Ellie’s house because if Tina doesn’t get him, that is where he is heading right now to possibly kill her next, especially since Bette told him that Ellie is afraid of him, the sniveling bastard. I just hope he doesn’t shoot Tina too. Bette should call Ellie back and tell her to get the Hell out of there before he gets to her house. Damn, this is terribly exciting. Bette will be okay, rightttt? Fantastic chapter. Thanks for posting everyday.
OMG.Tina kill him.PPS
Oh shit this is so good, hope Bette is ok and Tina will catch that guy!
So, it is now belived that Andrew killed Katherine, but he seems to be too frail to still be killing the women now, that was just found a week ago. Will keep reading, this is getting heavy. I hope that Bette is Ok and Tina gets that creep.