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    Brief Encounter Chapter 19

    Story written on June 17, 2005 by Thumbs.
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    Hotel Room, Coffee Shop, The Porter Gallery

    Keeping up to speed.. Previously (continuation from chapter 10)

     

    I walked out of my hotel room and closed the door behind me.  But as I neared the elevator my mind went overdrive with doubts

     

    What if she doesnt want to?  ***** what if she doesnt want me?  Am I to believe that I can walk away for the second time?  Can I do that?  Can I walk away again?  To see her turn her back on me, on us?  Can I handle that?  I know I said Id forever leave her alone if she didnt want me back but I just I dont know if I can take it.  Im too scared to know what her answers would be.  Would she even want to see me?  Jesus!  Maybe this is a bad idea after all. I walked back to my room pushing the key into the slot. 

     

    Never give up on something you believe in Shanes words kept ringing in my ears.  Never give up Never give up I sighed.  Shanes right I do believe in us.  I did but what went wrong?  How did I lose faith in us?  Does she feel the same way?  Does she still believe in us?  I thought about it for a moment as I slowly pulled the key out.  I guess if I dont try then Id never know

     

    As I stepped out of the hotel, I felt hope.  I breathed out the huge air that I held in my throat.  Breathed in the fresh air Right!  Today I will tell Bette once and for all

     

    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

     

    As I walked down the streets thinking of what I should tell Bette, what I wanted to say to her, my cell rang.  I opened my pursed and tried to find my cell when I finally found it deep under all the unnecessary things I pulled it out.  Who could be calling me now?  I looked at the I.D.  I let out a huge sigh.  *****. Its Alice.  I cleared my throat and put on my happy voice

     

    Tina:  Hey Al

     

    Alice:  T!!!

     

    Tina:  Whats up Al? (Trying to sound as innocent as I could)

     

    Alice:  Dont you whats up me!  You didnt tell me youre in New York!!!  What the ***** are you doing there??  I mean we were worried and here is someone

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    1. You are so mean! I knew you would do that, have Tina in NY and Bette in LA! I’m just not sure which is worst, this or Candance!!!! Ha, ha.

      Great story, Thumbs. I like how you use Sarah to draw out Tina. So, Tina was stalking Bette? Hmmmm.

      I always look for your updates. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!

    3. Great chapter. I think Bette went to LA because of a frantic call from Alice saying she was missing. Oh well back to LA where paths will finally cross! Thanks!

    5. Just loving it Thumbs as you know – love the pace you write in and please don´t go fast on your story here. Can´t wait to see why Bette is in LA. Maybe something to do with Peggy. Please post soon and yes I´ll try to update my story soon but has been away for the past week. Very nice update Thumbs. Talk to you later.

    6. So happy so see some updates. Love this story. Hope the writers block doesn’t keep you down for too long, but hey, it happens to all of us. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter!!

    8. Thumbs thanks so much for not doing the wham bam thing. I love your story and have been an avid reader from the first. Take your time and come when you can I will wait. I know that life and other issues can take priority and that’s just the way it really is. But know we thank you for what we have already. Thanks and great story. I love Sarah and her ingenous young mind.

    10. Geeezz..why are you make this encounter so hard???…lol..please FIX this… i´m about to have a stroke..lol..and that will be your foult…amazing chapter post real soon

    11. Brief encounter, indeed! Please get the to be on the same coast and the same state for more than a day. Thanks for the wonderful chapter!

    12. Thumba, great post, but why are they playing cat and mouse. Get them together soon plz?!?!?!Ok ok Im done. I really cant wait to see where this goes next.

    13. Great chapter Thumbs. I hope u won’t have exam for a long time, I really missed u’re story. Please, keep posting, I’m already waiting for the next update. Thanks you.

    14. Dang Thumbs, where was the encounter? Shit why did Bette have to be in LA! It is a great story and I couldnt wait until I got to the last page, only to find out that Bette wasnt there. I hope in the next chapter that they WILL meet up, or are you going to leave us hanging again. Glad you posted again, I missed your stories, Damn that writers block shit.

    16. mine was alrite.. :) BTW,you are a great writer..take things slow,don’t give up!!!! :) i love your stories.. pls do continue posting.. thx for this great update!

    17. Hey Thumbs, take your time with your story…no need to rush, writers block is a pain in the backside and when you have other things going on in your life fan fic sould be the last of your worries…we will still read when you post..get some sun, kick back and enjoy life.
      Again great update.

    18. No more deux ex Sarah? Perhaps Tina can fit her in the overhead bin.

      So…people think Tina’s missing…and Bette’s in LA. Could these two things be related? Looking forward to more, whenever.

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