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Brief Encounter Chapter 24
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Kit put the receiver back down and sighed.
Kit: Just last minute orders. So how are u baby girl?
Kit walked round her desk to give me a hug.
Bette: I’m ok Kit.
Kit: What? Just ok? I heard Mel gave u a surprise visit. It should’ve been awesome!
Bette: yeah I know.
Kit: Speaking of which. Where is Mel?
Bette: She’s at the hotel taking a nap.
Kit: Oh right. Hey are you ok girl?
Bette: yeah well no.
Kit: Well which one is it? Yes or no?
Bette: Oh I dunno Kit. I’m already confused as it is!
Kit: What about?
Bette: Me, my life, what I’m doing and Mel and
Kit: Tina?
Bette: Huh? What?
Kit: Oh sorry I guess Tina is none of your confusion then.
Bette: No! I mean yes I mean oh god I dunno anymore Kit. I’m lost.
Kit: Aww baby girl what is wrong? I thought you were happy with Mel no?
Bette: I am but I don’t know. I feel well, to tell you the truth Mel has been wonderful. She’s everything I expected. But there’s something missing ya know?
Kit: Does she make you happy?
Bette: Why yes.
Kit: Then what is the problem?
Bette: The problem is that, hmm, well the problem is that I haven’t told you this before but I’ve talked to Tina.
Kit: About this?
Bette: No of course not about this! What chance do I have to talk to her about this when
Kit:
Bette: I was out with Shane and Alice at the Club and I got a call from Tina. You know how much I love her. You know how she’s the only one for me!
Kit: I know baby girl.
Bette: Yeah and well from the sound of her voice somehow well, maybe I was imagining it but I felt like she still has feelings for me Kit! I mean u know how close we once were! And she seemed pretty excited about meeting me here. And right at that moment I thought maybe she felt something for me Kit.
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Welcome back. Just give Bette and Tina a chance to talk. Send Mel back to NY and also Helene send her to.Any place you want too… Bette and Tina being so polite to each other was funny. If the could get into each other head,they would be surprized.. thannks
Miss you girl! Yes, I still read; looks like a lot of us still read this story! I’m very thankful that you at least have our heros at the same place, even talking a little to each other!
Me thinks Helena and Mel have something going; how else would Helena know to be there to pick up Tina?
I hope your busy life is all good and not just work/stress!
Keep well and write when you have a chance. Thanks for remember us here.
Good to see you Thumbs. This is good chapter and we know how Bette feel and hope Bette and Tina will have a talk alone soon, ok let see what’s next. Thanks!
Nice to see an update Thumbs.I agree with those that say get rid of Mel and Hellno.Post soon.
Nice to see an update Thumbs.I agree with those that say get rid of Mel and Hellno.Post soon.
Wow! You’re back. Looking forward to more posts and ever hopeful?
You’re back!! Yiiipppiiiieeeeeeee!. I have been waiting for you to continue this story. Thank you for posting! Welcome back!
Hoho, when I read ‘airport’, I finally remembered some of the story. I still need to re-read the whole story since I still remember how I loved this story when I first read it. Thanks for the new chapter and welcome back. =)
YEAH!!!! Your back..I am so glad you decided to continue this story I loveit..Thank you for writing again. I look forward to the next chapter..Please don’t make us wait 2 months again..LOL Post soon PLEASE!!!
awwwww! Thumbs, you sweetheart you! This is just the thing I needed! I’m glad you were able to find the time to write again. I’ve missed this story so much! You’re doing a fantastic job in projecting Bette and Tina’s love for one another! My heart is aching for both of them though, and I don’t know how much more I can take…well, I guess I can take alot more if it means you’re going to continue to share this beautiful story with us! Thank you!!!!
thumbs!!!!!!!!!!! yoooooo…finally you are back..! been missin this story long enough..! is awesome…pls do post soon!
No way…………..way, yea, Thumbs is back OH MY GOD………….does a 360 in my swivel chair…….you have been missed, welcome back T, now to get back into your groove get those fingers typing that should help you, lol.
I have missed this story, off to read it now.
Thank you.
Hey Thumbs…welcome back girl. We have missed your story here…nice you could take the time to write again….always a pleasor to read your update because you write so well….do post very soon and give us an update on things between B&T. See you.
It could be two months or years and I’ll still come back. I love your story and pray you will bless us with more. Thanks
Hey, Thumbs, I’m back!!! Sorry, I’ve been MIA for the last couple chapters. But, I’ve been faithfully reading, as you post them. They finally meet, YIIIIIPPPPPEEEE!!! Okay, can we just give them some space, and not have any Mel or Helena appearances for a few chapters?! I mean, please give me a break already?! (smile) It’s so good to have you post, when time permits. I know you have a life, outside of the confines of this website, but you’ve got me hooked. Please post again, when you can. Tah!
yeah, it was hella long itme. but glad your back. what ive been saying on each post this morning, COMMUNICATION would be nice. thanks, mate.
hey gostosa!!!!where the hell have you been????ive missed you a lot..ok about the story could you please let those 2 talk and be together again?..is it too much to ask????..lol..im glad you back and please dont take so much to post again see ya babe:o)
1st, LoL i was going to exactly as where’ve you been, and YES i’m still reading this story, it’s always been one of my favourites ;) and i’m a loyal reader.. i know you’re busy and stuff, but i expect at least a chapter a month.. plzzzzzzzzz..
2nd, god how i missed your Bette and Tina (more than i missed you :P LOL).. if only Helena and Mel were not in the picture, i guess every thing will go the way they should be.. but i think you are doing the right thing by not rushing things, cuz it might mean we’ll come to the end of this story which i really don’t wanna happen..
FUCKING SHIT T!!!!!!!!!!!
I see they let you out of rehab how was that?? LMAO SO then it’s been a minute I kinda miss talking with ya. You know how it is life gets in the way and well then there’s all that other shit too. Maybe one of these days I will get to catch up.
Hey T good to see you writing your story again. love this story. cant wait for B&T to reconnect and have some lovin. we will have to skype again now that i got high speed. Thanks for posting