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Brief Encounter Chapter 29
Previously on Brief Encounter…
Bette (I chuckled): Don’t worry it’s just a scra…
Girl: Look out!!!
I turned around and the next thing I knew was Shane screaming my name.
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I looked up and pulled the girl to the side of the curb and practically threw myself in the process as the car swerved to the opposite side. I blinked and stared at the girl who was now on top of me. I held her tight thankful that she’s ok. We’re ok!
I saw Shane running to me and a few others.
Bette: Are you ok? (I checked her face for any more scratches)
Girl: Yeah I’m ok. Thank you! Are you?
I could feel my arm hurting but that was it. Everything felt ok. I smiled.
Bette: Yes, yes I’m ok.
Shane: Bette! Are u ok? I didn’t see the car coming. (I nodded) Are you sure?
Alice: Bette! Are you crazy?
Bette: Crazy, no. Hurt, a little maybe but nothing I couldn’t stand. Here help this girl up.
As I tried to stand up I felt someone holding my arm helping me up. I turned around and there was Tina; looking very worried. She hasn’t said a word. She was just so careful about helping me, and so serious that I had to let out a giggle.
With that everyone looked at me surprised but Alice.
Alice: You are crazy. You’re hurt and you’re laughing. That’s just nice Bette! You could’ve been killed! What is wrong with you?
Bette: Al! I’m not hurt ok? I’m fine! And can we just check if that girl’s ok? She’s the one who got hurt.
Alice: I’m just, concerned ok? Is that wrong?
I smiled and gave her a peck on her cheek.
Bette: I’m fine Al, seriously. (Looking at Tina) Thanks Tina. I just need to check on the girl.
Tina: Ok
She was just sitting there on the curb checking her arms and knees from the accident.
Bette: Hey are you ok? Do you need to go to the hospital? We can give you a ride.
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(32 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Some people never go away,They just wait and hope that a certain writer will return. Almost 2 yrs. and most everyone is here. Now you are back so lets get on with the story. thanks
Saw your message the other day, and sent a shout back to ya. WELCOME BACK! I was talking to Ness the other day about some of the older gals from the site. Been in touch with Pickles? Thanks for picking this story up again, and a VERY warm welcome back.
what a pleasant surprise!!!! thanks for bringing it back…i think bette should follow tina into kit’s office ;)
Welcome back! Sooo glad you r continuing with this story. I love it.
Hell nooooooooooooooooo ur back!!!!!!!!!!! yeah u know i love this story pms
Wow, talk about a blast from the past!!! I was thrilled to see you pop up again and I am hoping you are going to start reposting on a regular basis! Looking forward to your next post, thanks for your time and effort with this story, it is a real treat!
Glad Bette are ok and now let Tina take care of her!
Damn girl will wonders never cease!!! I’m thrilled with this, and two years wow but I’m so glad you posted and I actually remember the story and didn’t have to go back but will because it’s so good. Thanks Thumbs
Glad to have u back continuing on this story. Pls continue. It’ll be nice to have a happy ending instead of hanging :)