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Carmen: “No. Please do. You don’t have to ask.”
Bette: “Well if you want to be alone I understand.”
Carmen: “No alone is Not what I need right now.”
Bette knew exactly what she was talking about. There was many a night Bette sat and drank herself to sleep because the silence of her once vibrant home was defining.
Bette: “I take it you and Shane haven’t worked things out”
Carmen: “umno”
Pause.
Carmen: “I just don’t think I can forgive her. I want to be mad at her but I really cant because I knew what her habits were before we got together. I guess I thought I could change heror”
Bette: “That you were special enough for her to change.”
Carmen was shocked just how dead on that last statement was. She looked up into Bette’s eyes.
Carmen: “Right”
Bette: “I cant say whether or not that’s true. But I will say you have changed her for the better. I guess we all revert to our old ways every now and again.
Carmen just looked at Bette and nodded. This convo was obviously affecting her as much as it was effecting Carmen.
Bette spent the evening with Angelica. Tina came home around 7 and they switched shifts. Bette’s disgust lead their conversations to be entirely made up of “hi’s” and “how ya doing’s” without much else. Tina had a bed in the guest room but she was using it less and less as the days went on.
Boredom set in and Bette dressed and went to the Planet. To Bette’s dismay none of her friends were there. Carmen, however, was spinning her records. Carmen’s mood was being reflected in her music selection. She was playing songs of heart break and longing set to upbeat tempos. Carmen waved Bette over when she saw her.
Carmen: “Hey”
Bette: “Hey, no ones here?”
Carmen: “No haven’t seen any of them, surely not Shane.”
Carmen looked pissed.
Bette: “Sorry”
Carmen: “Don’t be, not your fault.”
Bette: “Well I guess I’ll grab a drink and then head out. I don’t even see Kit.”
Carmen: “She’s been busy all night.”
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Sometimes a physical release is more about an emotional release. This wasn’t about a sexual attraction, or hidden crush on the other…it was about release emotionally through a physical eruption. And, the fact that the person helping you is going through the same pain helps to create an emotional connection that helps to share the pain…making it slightly less. Thanks!
Thanks, that was a great little story. But sad it had to happen.
you just seem don’t like B&T together, don’t you? LOL… maybe release is necessary but that kind of help just doesn’t really solve anything, only makes it worse
That was interesting! And somewhate HOT…nut I still love B&T!!!!
that right it will die with them only knowing
I agree with the others, they are so wise :o)) Do you think you can write about happy B&T because I love your writing and I need some B&T loving…..
hey vibes!!! i love your stories girl! hey don’t be concerned with trying to keep b and t together. Ilene is solely responsible for breaking up this couple that had such great potential. she is the one that is screwing it up. so by the way tina is treating bette these days, i say Bette needs to find a strong beautiful woman that understands how special she is! so keep doing your thing.