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Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 26)
“Really?” The ‘T’ only needed two straws. “Why are you glad, though?” I looked up and she grinned. She had a nice smile and I liked her hair, dark, pretty. I liked that she was tall, too, and she had nice clothes.
“Because I met you,” she said. I smiled and nodded. She added: “Cute.”
“Oh,” I disagreed, shaking my head, “I’m just drunk. The cute will wear off soon enough.” I heard it usually took six weeks.
C for Cara found this amusing and she laughed again and I liked her laugh, too. It was honest and refreshing and not at all mysterious, not at all guarded, not at all fucked up and incapable of sharing anything with me.
She leaned in, wrapping her arm around my shoulders and moving her head closer to mine so that she could get a look at my straw masterpieces. I was glad she found my drunkenness charming. “‘Bet’?” she read aloud. “‘Bet’ what?”
I chuckled. “I bet I have a bad hangover in the morning.”
C for Cara pointed, smiling, to the ‘A’. “A for
I smiled. She understood so effortlessly. I liked her.
I chugged my beer and watched her attempt her own straw masterpiece. I squinted at the outcome, frowning slightly.
“S for Sarah,” she supplied.
“Oh,” I said, confirming that it was indeed a crooked ‘S’. Guess she wasn’t C for Cara after all.
I turned to her suddenly and looked at her and I wished her eyes were darker, although blue was a perfectly nice color. She was nice and pretty and so very not complicated. I let her kiss me.
“I like you,” I told her quietly.
S for Sarah smiled. “Come on,” she said. “I’ll give you a ride home.”
I agreed and let her take me out of the club, leaving the straws on the table. I told her where I lived and when we got there, I asked her if she wanted to come up and she agreed that this was a good idea.
And sleeping with her, I think, made me feel a whole lot better.
For a little while, I think, it made me feel better.
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(32 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
Yay, you’re back!! I’m looking forward to the rest of the chapters, but I feel bad that this story’s ending. You’re just so cool, Rachel_raj! lol
Wow. These rapid-fire posts are giving me a whiplash. (Oops! Didn’t mean that as a complaint. Was trying to be funny with that ridiculous graphic of me wearing a neckbrace. Duh-oh!)
I love your Alice. So funny, quirky. And I love your fic like crazy. Please post soon. Cheers!
Rachel. you have a wonderful gift! This story is terrific!!! The dialogue is witty and realistic and flows so effortlessly–I love it! Thank you…and I hope you post again soon…AND, that you find a way of extending this story so that it doesn’t have to end!
You’ve got it bad, girl
Payback is a …
Soryy that this will end soon. Alice is rather funny in this, Poor Bette, now she has Tina and is scared to death.. thanks
Funny and true – Bette is just so terrified and smitten. As of course, sadly, is Alice.
Oh well now I just have to keep checking the site every five minutes for the next post …
This has been a highly entertaining story about Bette & Tina from a new perspective- Alice. Wonderful LOL reading.
This is the kind of stuff that I would have liked to have seen in the series. OK, so it would have made season one something like a gazillion episodes long…but who cares! This is just wonderful. Thanks for posting.