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Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 28)
I’m not sure what I expected when I opened the door to her, but Kit looked just like a regular person. I mean-well, exactly what I said, I don’t know what I expected. It was the first time I’d seen her when she wasn’t drunk or hung-over and she was really just this normal person with a resemblance to Bette and a contrite manner.
“Hey,” I said.
She gestured to me, indicating my wet hair and my pajamas. “You’re getting ready for bed. I’m sorry.”
“It’s okay,” I said. I led her into the living room. “If you’re looking for Bette, she’s not here.”
“I wasn’t.” Kit shrugged and joined me on the couch. “I don’t really know any of Bette’s friends, which is my own fault, I guess. I remembered you, though, so I looked you up and here I am.” I smiled. She added, “Maybe should’ve came at a better time, though.”
I laughed. “It’s okay. What’s up?”
“I’ve been, uh…” She shrugged and pulled one of the couch’s pillows onto her lap, playing with the ends of it. I was a little bit fascinated by some of her mannerisms and actions; some of them were so similar to Bette’s. “Thinking about going back to rehab, you know. Doing my thing. I figure a few more times before it sinks in and-” She looked up suddenly as if I’d said something. “It was all my idea, too, I just realized I needed, uh…”
“Help,” I supplied.
“Yeah,” she agreed. “So I figured I’d give it another go. But there’s all this… stuff on my conscience, you know? Like if I don’t try to make amends with my little sister before I go, it could be my last chance. I dunno if it’s true or anything, but I need to.”
“Make amends?” I clarified.
“Yeah.” Kit shrugged. “You know, apologize, tell her I’m trying, that sort of thing.”
I nodded slowly. “It seems like a good idea.”
“Thing is, it’d be good to have an ally.” She spread her hands in another decidedly Bette-like movement and said, “Last time me and baby sis got into things, it didn’t work out so well and I know her. She remembers things. She won’t want to hear me this time around.”
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Thanks for inserting the Kit angle concurrent to the ongoing Tina trauma. It makes us realize that love (and life) does not exist in a vacuuum.
Hooray for Kyle and Spencer! Someone is happy in the midst of La Chanson D’Alice!
Thanks!
Whoa…intense. The beauty of your story is that it’s never dull. You skillfully interject the various stoylines at just the right time.
Loved that Alice didn’t ‘freak out’ at Kyle’s news about he and Spencer.
I’ll be sorry to see this story end.
That was pretty cold of Bette, it take a lot of guts to admit you are wrong,but Kit did Then Bette had the nerve to jump on Alice and slam the door in her face, Does she not want friends Thanks
“Bette had shown up at Tina’s office wearing the tight jeans and sunglasses… .. Nothing was working.”
Wow! Is Tina human? Who could resist the jeans and sunglasses?
Loved the scene with Kit and Bette with Alice’s point of view. She’s an only child alright – never been in the middle of sister wars. LOL.
Tremendous as always.
God! That was cold. Coldest happy birthday EVER, with the door slamming on your face. Oh, Alice. REALLY move on with your life. Why don’t you go look for a goofy tennis player named Dana?