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Broken Phone Calls PT 1 of 2
Its been 2 days since Canada, Shane walked in backdoor to her home… shes still wearing her tux.. the dress shirt is half tucked in, half hanging out… its covered in blood stains.. she has a busted lip and looks like shes been crying.. she looks at her friend from the backdoor and smiles relieved their okay but then frowns realizing their all laughing and her anger rises.. the entire group is unaware she has just entered the house… she walks closer to the living room and overhears someone say " the next time i see Shane, I’m gonna kick her ass" … now shes pissed and walks all the way into the room and throws her bags on the coffee table causing everyone to look up at her…
"go ahead…" she yells " I’m not gonna stop you… you want to hit me fine … get in line" she says and walks back into the kitchen and grabs a beer..
"Shane where the hell have you been" Alice yells back… everyone else is to shocked to talk…
"where have i been!!!! where have i been!!! " Shane yells walking back into the living room and chugs down half of her beer… " where the fuck were you guys…. I’ve been in Whistler for almost 2 days.. doesn’t anyone know how to answer a fucking phone"
"what are you talking about Shane… you left" Jenny states not quite understanding what is going on…
" huh…." Shane looked around the room and all she saw was the look of betrayal and hurt across every ones face…
Carmen suddenly stands up and walks over to Shane.. she lift her hand and slaps Shane across the face.. "get out!!" she yells..
"what" Shane asks doubled over holding the side of her face..
"i said get the fuck out!!" Carmen yells and goes to hit Shane again but Jenny and Lara grab her and hold her back… "i can’t believe i thought you actually wanted to marry me…"
Shane stands up straight and looks at Carmen… a slow tear escapes her eye… "i did" she says not knowing what happened to cause Carmen to be so angry.. if any thing shes the one who should be angry..
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That was awesome. Like your better than IC. thanks
it’s funny and sad and i don’t even know how to feel haha. but no matter, it was good and unexpected and i can picture kate with the sold sign more than shane. i don’t know why.
Okay, that was fuckin’ awesome . . . but seriously . . . come on . . . ya’ gotta’ like do this in more than two parts!!!! This is amazing and I want more like now!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT me!!
wow!! nothing bad about this! I think this is a great way to fix it! and I agree with abcdlove.
oh that was great! i wish that was the real L word! thank god for fanfics!…thanks irowen! at least theres a hope, u pleased my sharmen heart. ;)
A W E S O M E!!! WOW !!!
Great, it was great. I hope you’ll keep the gang in. please post soon
If Only
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG i love my sharmen i need my sharmen lol… i wish that season 4 would go something like that
different twist on things, but highly possible. I like it.
OMG AMAZING and ya i agree your better than I.C carmen better get ehr ass u to oregon and get her woman bakc and man do the girls hve some ass kissing to do omg poor shane ok wow that was different and never told eofre and i love it more please lots and lots more but for gods sake let thm be together.awsoem simpoly awsome
I really liked it if only this was how it happended can’t wait for more
ok so ya i already left a comment but i have been reading this fic over and over again since last night and man i cant get it out of my head it is absoloutly amazing. its perfect and exactly how the show should go. please dont stop it at 2 parts this fic is great and can go on to be the best fic out there. please post soon this stuff is soooo good you shuld actually thik about really writing because you have done a better job than any l word wirter has in the last season. way to go and please post soon and p.S everyone sorry for my spelling in my last comment it was late and dark so sorry.