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Broken Sonnet Chapter 9
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Chapter 9
The Viano had stopped in front of Chanel. Shane got out of the car and Carmen followed behind her. They were at North Rodeo Drive. Shane strode into the shop with amazing ease. When Carmen entered, she was overwhelmed by the opulence of it. She wasn’t really a fan of luxury brands and besides she didn’t have the money. The plush carpet, the Chanel motif, the sleek black lines depicted a whole different world to her. This was the rich and the famous’ playground and she was the outsider looking in. For a moment, Shane looked rather lost as she took in the items on display.
A sales assistant came up and smiled “Miss McCutcheon, I’m Sasha…can I help you?” “I’m looking for a gift for someone,a jacket but nothing too fancy…” Sasha returned with one jacket and Shane sat there, sipping the coffee she was given. Shane took one look at the jacket and shook her head. Carmen stood there and she somewhat pitied Sasha. Shane didn’t really quite have anything in mind but she certainly had a clear idea of what she didn’t like.
Finally, a black jacket caught Shane’s attention. She put down her coffee, and looked at it with an unsure look. “Do you have any colors for this?” Sasha returned with a brown one and Shane stood in front of the mirror, with one jacket in each hand and there was a frown on her forehead. “Which one?” Carmen was looking at one light pink Chanel bag until she realised Shane’s question was directed at her. “The black one,” Shane tilted her head and took a further look at the jacket. “Ok I’ll take the black,” “What’re you looking at?” “Nothing,” Shane gazed at the light pink bag and Sasha came up saying “It’s the Chanel reissue 2.55 bag, very popular among celebrities. In fact there is a waiting list for it,” Shane bent down to get a closer look at the bag in the glass display. “You like it?” Carmen shrugged. “Well I guess that’s a yes then, do I have to get on the waiting list for this?” Sasha leaned forward and smiled. “We do give priorities to certain customers,”
Carmen whipped her head to look at Shane who had already taken out her credit card to Sasha who was obviously very pleased. Was she buying the bag for her? Then she felt silly for even entertaining such a ridiculous idea. Carmen carried the huge oversized bags. Shane turned back to look at her struggling with one paper bag which had slid down from her shoulder and took the bags from Carmen.
“Miss McCutcheon I can carry them myself,” Shane took off her shades and looked at Carmen “You know what, just call me Shane…..having people call me Miss McCutcheon all the time is really uncomfortable…” She had stopped in the middle of the path and people walking past were turning back to look at her. Carmen could hear hushed whispers and then squeals in the air. Some girls rushed forward and the force pinned Shane and her to the wall.
“Shane!!! Shane!!” Carmen could see Shane being pressed against the wall and without hesitation, she grabbed Shane’s hand and dashed into a nearby shop. In that moment, Shane’s hand was in hers and the thought that ran through Carmen’s head was not the predicament they were in, but how natural it felt to have Shane’s hand in hers.
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awww its nice to see carmne and shane in a different setting good job and man no matter where they are those two have got it dont they, i hope they will give in to there love soon but love this story great job.