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B&T in the beginnig chapter 3
“Yeah ok why don’t we go back to my place and I’ll cook”. Suggest Tina
“I tell you what I prepare dinner at my place and then you can prepare the dessert at your place how does that sound”. Bette Says.
“Ok. Bette you couldn’t give me a ride home could you my car is being serviced”.
“Yeah sure I’ll be just one moment I have to make a quick call”. And she turns to leave.
It goes straight to Eric’s voicemail. “Hi Eric it’s Bette Porter every things set for Friday night we’ll be back at Tina’s around 8.30 ok bye”.
..cut to Friday at noon
Tina is in her apartment she’s in her room setting a romantic evening, “I hope she doesn’t think it’s too soon I just really want her to make love to me”. she thinks to herself.
.later that day Tina arrives at Bette’s with wine
Bette’s in the kitchen when Tina knocks on the door “come in “Bette shouts from the kitchen.
“Hello”, shouts Tina trying to find where Bette is.
“I’m in the kitchen”.
“Wow you have a pool”. Say’s Tina amazed.
“Yeah maybe we could take a swim a little later on”. Suggest Bette.
They sit and eat dinner talking some about each others families
“Well I have two older brothers who are really protective of me they always try to scare away my boyfriends in the past. I hope they won’t do that when you meet them”. She realizes what she’s said and starts to blush a little but Bette just smiles her 1000 watt smile at her.
“It takes a lot to scare me”. She says simply.
“I have an older sister well half sister she’s to busy into herself that she doesn’t see what’s around her. My dad can’t except that I’m ***** he thinks I should be success and married to a man with children by know. He doesn’t get it that one day I will be married and I will have children with the woman I love”. Tina smiles at that secretly hoping that she will be the one to marry her and have a family with her.
“Well I guess that we should be leaving if we want desert tonight”. Tina says that with a twinkle in her eye which Bette notices.
“Well I still owe you that swim remember maybe we could do that tomorrow night or something”. Bette says smiling.
. Cut to Tina’s Apartment
“Courtney must be out she said she was busy tonight and would be staying in just to check you out I think, but she must have went to the library or something”. Tina sighs opening the door.
“SURPRISE”, there’s around about 30-40 of Tina and Eric’s friends.
Tina is absolutely shocked that her special night she had planned is ruined. Eric comes over to greet Bette and Tina.
“Hi baby”, he says and kisses her on the cheek she glances at Bette to see her reaction, so looks jealous but still smiles. “Hi Bette thanks for your help”.
“It was nothing”. Bette says smiling but Tina heard the bitterness in her voice.
Eric turns to Tina I saw the bedroom I can’t wait to get you in there”. At this Bette walks off to get a drink.
Tina catches up to her later in the evening “hey, I just want to tell you what Eric said it was for us I dunno I’ve never ever felt this way about anyone in my life Bette I think no I’m falling in love with you”. But before Bette can respond Eric gets everyone’s attention.
“Excuse me excuse me I would like to thank you all for coming here tonight and say bye to Courtney who is leaving on Friday”. The crowed all “AWWW”. “But I would like to ask Tina a very special question here”. He walks over to Tina.
“Will you marry me”.
tbc
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(27 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
no i cant cuz im in love with some else and she is right here..lol..please let Tina say NO to Eric…post soon thanks :o)
she should do a “coming to america” move on his ass. tell bette she’s madly in love with her kick out all gusets and get to work on bette. LMAO please post soon.PEACE.
Tina replies….. NO AND GET THE HELL OUTTA MY APARTMENT, ‘CAUSE I WANT TO MAKE LOVE WITH BETTE!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!! HURRY UP AND POST!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
WHAT?? I thought he was just going to ask her to move in with him…!! I think we all are waiting for Tina to say: “Hummm… nah! No way, man… You were soooooooo stupid and asked bette to take me out and now, I love her, not you! :P, so EVERYBODY OUT!because I want to make love to Bette…”Can’t wait for next chapter!hee hee
No, get lost you big dope, you don’t stand a chance against Bette, so hit the bricks!!! I think this or any of the other suggestions from the other readers will work, but definetly not a “YES” from Tina.
Bette should have told Tina what Eric was planning. I hope T dumps Eric soon.
No Eric are you crazy! you stupid fool, I never loved you, I’m in love with Bette! yeah that would definetly be what Tina would say! please post soon, can’t wait for more!
I thought Tina’d have slammed on Bette’s face and run out of her flat, coz it’s really like Bette set her up with Eric…
wonder how tina handles this!
lol iwent from moving in to marrying is this guy insane?!?! lol postt soon thanx byeness
tina the aggerssor i like that!!!!!!!!!!! faint tina now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh. Sh*t.
Eric is c*ck-blocking like a mug, and he doesn’t even know it. I’m waiting to see how B&T get out of this and get rid of him. Thanks!
“fuck no”…I hate eric. There is only 1 or 2 stories where I even liked him. Please let Tina have the guts to tell him no. thanks for the post
this is so good.. oh and eric…NO..see you later..
EWWWW….she best say NO!.
thanx 4 the post, ouch what a ?, i hope tina knows what she is doing, i can’t believe he just asked her that, what i thought that he wanted tina 2 move in with him, i think this is going 2 be funny cause there are 30-40 guest wating 4 the answer. i agree with all of the other readers, i mean i can’t blame eric 4 wanting 2 marry tina she is the ultimate price, i’m sure that if eric would have told bette that he was going 2 ask tina 2 marry him she would have said no. man heck no, she can’t marry eric, i don’t hate him but i don’t like him, he seems 2 treat tina as a price rather than his girlfriend. poor bette
VAN – just spewed all over the monitor again. god that was funny.fergz – im with ya babe.WTF moving in to marrying her. hes a dolt.thanks.