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Burning Down the House
She moved lower, kissing Alices throat and nibbling a little at her collarbone. Danas hands moved ceaselessly up and down her sides sending Alice on a wave of ecstasy. This was all too much
By now their bodies were slick with perspiration, and Dana slid lower. She parted Alices legs with one knee, and pressed it tightly against her. Alice was immediately soaked. Sighing softly to herself, Dana took one nipple into her mouth hearing as Alice moaned at the sensation of teeth scraping ever so softly.
Bringing a hand over to Alices other breast Dana kneaded her moist flesh. Desperate for a release Alice found herself unwittingly pumping against Danas leg, feeling an ***** build. But when her breathing became rapid, Dana suddenly drew away. Alice whined in protest.
“Not yet . . .” Dana said rather unconvincingly, as she gave Alice her best smirk.
“Oh God! Hurry . . . ” The words found their way out without any assistance. Alice was too lost in the way Dana was touching her to think of such virtues as patience.
Leaving Alices *****, Dana left a trail of kisses down her belly. Dipping her tongue into Alices belly button, Dana could almost sense the jolt that ran through her. Alice thrashed against her chest; she was so close…
Firmly, Dana grabbed her by the hips and pinned them to the bed. Alice felt her hot breath between her legs writhing in anticipation, but Danas strong arms held her down. Right then Alice wanted to scream at her as she felt the tip of Danas tongue barely touch her *****. She kept this almost contact up for several minutes . . . All Alice wanted to do was sob.
But just when she thought she would lose consciousness, Dana drew her in entirely into her mouth, sucking hard. Immediately Alice felt an immense rush, wash over her. It was over quickly, but Dana didn’t let go. She continued sucking hard.
At first it was almost painful, almost too much. Alice tried pulling her away, but she refused to budge. Soon her body responded and matched Danas rhythm. Before long she was coming again, and again.
Her mind shut out the world, and colors danced before her. Brilliant reds, oranges, deep purples and blues. It was the moment when a sunset could be a sunrise, or vice versa. It was when time no longer mattered, and all that existed was the beauty before you. When Dana finally stopped Alice was trembling. My body no longer felt real. She just felt Danas mouth cover hers, and with that she let her girlfriend kiss her deeply. All of Alices strength had diminished that she I couldn’t even return it; she just merely opened herself to Dana and let her do what she pleased. Finally Dana leaned back and wrapped her arms around her protectively.
“Im sorry I made fun of you today . . . ” Her voice was thick, and she squeezed Alice tighter.
“Im glad you decided to make up for it.” Alice was spent, but still she forced the words out of her exhausted body, drawing on the fullness of her feelings at that very moment.
THE END…
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(55 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
Megga- Crazy. . .your writing is KILLING ME! Literally! I almost bust a gut from laughing so hard! Great new story. Please post again soon! (of course after you post your next chapter of Showtime, I’ve almost finished with the earthquake) :)
wow awesome 5 stars
This was amazing, I hope there’s more from where that came from.
That was billiant I love it 5 stars
Craze: Your ability surely shows with every sentence. I loved this story. It was very exciting and you showed us how Alice and Dana could entertain themselves. Awesome. I’ll be waiting in the wings for your next adventure.
Whew I need a cigarette & a cold shower!
You are a great writer. This was an amazing story! Definitely 5 Stars!
OMG, very hot…I love it! :D