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Call It Fate Chapter 1
We stood there in complete silence — you could hear even a pin drop. However it was not an awkward silence, as one would imagine given the event about to take place. We both did not know how it happened but it did. Bette held out my earring in her hand for me to take and I did but I left my hand resting ever so gently on hers perhaps giving her the opportunity to read into my signals further. And with a gentle notion Bette leaned in, softly kissing me. I could feel my eyes lightly closed while our lips met. And what felt like an eternity only took place for a brief five seconds. Bette slowly pulled out from the kiss and my eyes opened glancing into hers. It is right about now that I wish that I were a mind reader. This is when the silence became awkward as our minds were racing a mile a minute. We were both lost in our own thoughts and it became apparent
Tinas point of view:
It was at that exact second that I realized that I needed to stop kidding myself My relationship with Eric was built on a lie. An extremely big lie at that; I have always had these feelings deep down that I was attracted to women and Bette Porter was exactly that, a woman. Bette Porter was incredibly smart, tough and unbelievably beautiful and I just could not help but to get caught up in the moment that we shared, or should I say, the moment that we connected — because that is what it was or at least what I felt; connected. As our lips parted I felt a surge of emotions wash over me but most of all I felt curiosity seep in. I was more curious than anything at the possibility of where this moment may lead me. However I told myself that I could not portray it now and that I needed to hold out to see how she felt. Of course, there was also Eric, but being with Bette felt too good for the guilt to seep in yet. I wanted to say something so badly but I could not find the right words to say anything. Instead I hear a very quite voice whisper,
Im sorry
Bettes point of view:
Bette what the ***** are you doing? I, that little voice inside me called out in my head. I cannot believe that I let my emotions get the best of me like that, but I could not help it; look at her she is just beautiful, radiant. But then again that little voice starts to yell out, She is a client’s girlfriend! So cut the ***** Porter. I felt a rush of emotions run through me ranging from guilt, disappointment, and most of all, confusion. Guilt, because I knew that she was involved with somebody, my client, and disappointment because, after all, I cannot believe that I would do such a low-ball thing as kiss a client’s girlfriend. But, most of all, I felt confusion because, at the same time of knowing this was all wrong, I felt that somehow it was maybe right. I knew I had to claim responsibility and speak up. So I did just that, but all I could muster up was a weak,
Im sorry
These are two words that Tina Kennard did not want to hear.
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(37 votes, average: 3.54 out of 5)
I think that is great that we get to hear thing from her pov please continue post soon
Good thus far. Please continue, expeditiously.
great start..you need to continue.
** BRAVO ** Excellent beginning….I love it! Now….where is chapter 2 huh? Where is it? LMAO….I love it I really do… I like the two point of views and an awesome explanation of their emotions and what they are feeling. Your writing is wonderful. You storyline is executed beautifully and you have presented the very beginning of the story at a perfect place….cannot wait to see where you take this…..
COOL!!
Ohh this is good and you must keep going and please post soon, thanks!
I really like this. Now get busy with Chapter 2!
GREAT START..I LIKE HOW YOU SHOWED BOTH SIDES..GREAT JOB..POST SOON..THANKS
has great potential to get everyone addicted to it :) .. please post again soon :)
I have this impression that soon I’ll be addicted to this story. What you writers are doing to me..?! ;)
Aw! Great start! I already like this story … now its back to being patient!! so please post soon!
Great start…please continue…:-)
Hey I love it Keep it going Please I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Please post soon. I do like the way you present your story. I like it.
i liked it- hope you continue!
you gotta continue… great start..
Hey TK what happen to the title?? I though we agreed on hot naked tina?? oh well LOL. This is a great start, and I always support new writers, so please go on, I always like new twist to the B/T start.
I like this. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
K
Great start. Like it already.
;D You know my opinion on this, Defenetly a good work in progress.
*Christine
Interesting….where will you lead us? Please continue….Thanks.
Great start!!! Please continue…Post soon