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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 17
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Bette: understood.
Alice: Listen Bette, I just really want you to know how
sorry I am.
Bette: I know you are. And I appreciate hearing that. It’s
just like this black cloud that follows be around. Sometimes I forget just for
second about it and my life is..well, it’s happy. But then I remember or
someone brings it up and it swallows me whole.
Alice: I understand, to a degree I guess. I mean nothing
like that ever happened to me, but my childhood was pretty crappy.
Bette: I think everyone’s childhood sucked. Some a little
more than others.
Alice: Amen sister.
Bette: Are you really in love with Tina?
Alice head spun around when she heard the change in
conversation.
Alice: Excuse me?
Bette: well, are you?
Alice: It was a long time ago.
Bette: And what happened?
Alice: She wasn’t in love with me. Easy as that.
Bette: That doesn’t sound so easy.
Alice: No but I figure if I tell***** freezing!!
Alice: I know!!
Alice took a large helping of water in her hands and
splashed it upwards in Bette’s face.
Bette: No fair!
Bette grabbed Alice by the arms and threw her down in the
water. Drenching all of her.
Alice: You *****!
Both girls erupted in laughter. Just then a security guard
approached with a look of great anger written on his chiseled face.
Guard: Ladies I assume you are aware that what you are doing
is highly illeagal and comes with a fairly hefty fine?
Bette looked at Alice like a deer in headlights. Alice
guessed Bette didn’t get into trouble with the law all that often.
Alice: Yes sir we know. It’s just that my friend has tons of
money and we figured a hefty fine would be a good way to waste some of it.
Bette couldn’t contain the smile on her face.
Guard: Perhaps that money can be better spent shopping
ladies.
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i believe you accidentally posted chapter 16 again.
this is the same as 16 no?
Sorry guys. I fixe dthe problem. ALL BETTER! Please go back and read it. Thanks
Another great chapter, please post again soon
I AM SO FRIGGING EXCITED!! I log on for just a miniture during lunch and there you are!!! YEAH FLAIR!! I just wanted to say TY ;] I’ll go read now…(happily running to page 1!)
your story is like a drug, and im addicted, luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If I was Tina ohhhh that Alice would get a good beatin’!! jk…Another Great chapter! Thanks :p
K
Well with friends like Alice and Bette, who needs enemies? Sorry but that sucks. Sounds like some of my friends, ALice I mean. Anyway…LOVE it as always. I hope Bette gets some help and that her and Tina talk. Can’t wait for more.
Totally lovin this Alice, and lookin forward to more posts ….. SOON!!!!
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :-)
Wow! This just gets better and better! I am amazed at how many twists and turns you keep giving us. I’m also loving the double posts! Can’t wait for the next one!
OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH SSSSSHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTT!!!!! I’m so fucking pissed right now. No matter what way you look at this its bad.1 If Tina finds out on her own she’ll be pissed that it happened and pissed thry didnt tell her. 2 If they tell her she’ll be pissed that it happened. I really dont think Bette is attracted to Alice and I know Alice wouldnt hurt Tina. Damn it always comes back to a woman’s best friend is a gey male. Damn, Flair
I love this story! And I loved Mr.Softy! We don’t get it around here (the Midwest)anymore – for like decades! Loved the song the truck played…ta-ta ta ta-ta ta dum-dum…
This story has me in its grip! I NEED Bette and Tina to work it out – and not as just friends, even though it makes more sense for Tina to end up with Alice and for the two of them to befriend Bette as she heals. But, where’s the drama in that????
Thanks!
Can this get any better….seems so with each chapter….luv ya, tks!!!
F.Y.I: http://mistersoftee.com/
The Song: http://www.mistersoftee.com/softee_final.wav
Mister Softee was a seminal part of my summer childhood experience! Loved it!
I guess you folks on the East Coast still have it, albeit with noise ordinance issues. Is nothing sacred?
Thanks for the memories!
One last note ( I promise!)
Bette: Alice I have to stop doing this. I always try to make everything better with sex. It isn’t normal.
Is this how you’re going to explain away the experience between Tina and Bette, as a sexualization of something that should have been platonic?
Please, no!!!!!
Oh Flair, I grew up on Mr. Softee, and the Pink Pussycat, been there,
The Alice and Bette make out session was not what I was expecting. What a Twist! O the Drama! You are my new drama queen. Congrats, LOL
Megga- WHAT! NOOOOOOOOO!!! HAha, I lobge this story, but I hope that this never slips to Tina. . .or they are going to have to do some SERIOUS damage control! I hope that B still likes T. . .hmmm. I think they love eachother, but have yet to really explore one another. Please post again soon!
great chapter, as always! post soon, and can I just say one thing? Bette and Alice –> uhuh, I don’t think so! Bette and Tina –> perfect match! :) ok sorry, they’re my fav couple so…
i love this story so much!!! Can’t wait for more, but i think i missed something, what does pumkin pie mean?
Damn Alice…say no to sex…Excellant again…I’m loving the flow and I wonder should you not tell Tina…You know what will happen…You have me wiggling in my seat…Hope for a great outcome…Please post soon
no, no, no. i thought alice was in love with tina. please say this was just alice’s warped imagination. i’m not a happy camper right now…
you having a “flair” for the dramatic is maybe an understatement great post dont leave us hangin long
Ok i’m back to haven again.. hehehe..
NOW I REALLY AM IN THE MOOD for punching Bette, she’s becoming a bitch, but you know what?? ALice is the Bitch here, she should have said NO.. or stopped Bette and gave her a slap..
Tina deserves a better FRIEND and a better LOVER, and that would be ME.. =P LOOL..
And i think they better not tell her, she doesnt need to know..
OMG!! how could Bette kiss Alice?!?! Sure they had fun but doing what she did was out of line! Carumba! I really hope she gets her act together and stops hurting Tina like this. Please fix it :)
That wasanother great chapter. I gotta agree M. softee does have the best sprinkles.
i’m all in knots now, this story just keeps twisting. please don’t let alice become the homowrecker, and please don’t let tina finds out. looking forward to the next posts.
Two more chapters today…I feel spoilt. Please don’t stop, haha. Twist, after twist, after twist…I’m loving it!
Alice (love this character) humming the theme song to Jeopardy…I do that to my friends all the time, lmao.
And Alice running for the bench before the old couple gets it…hilarious :-)
Poor Bette…she needs a hug.
The Pink Pussycat – I passed by there tonight…hmmmmmm. This all seems too real to me Flair ;-)
Btw…you tell a good story…just thought I’d reiterate that.
Sooo sooo interested in this story. Another amazing chapter. Thank you for posting so often.
Amazing chapter. Well Bette and Alice is accident kiss and both of them need to tell Tina and hope she ok with it. Post soon, thanks!