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Can’t Help Falling in Love Chapter 25
Tina: I want you to do it
Bette: It? Thats kinda vague.
Tina blushed.
Bette: Are you getting shy on me now?
Tina: I want you to sit on my face.
Bette: You liked that huh?
Tina: More than I can verbalize!
Tina took Bettes hand and pulled her forward until Bette was now straddled on Tina.
Bette: Are you sure you want to do this?
Tina pushed Bettes body upward so she could see how wet Bette was.
She ran her finger from Bettes lower back, down her *****, causing Bette to shudder. Tina paused and increased the pressure.
Tina: You like that?
Bettes voice was just above a whisper.
Bette: Yes
Tina: I didnt think youd be into that.
Bette: Im into anything that feels good.
Without warning Tina leaned her neck up and placed her tongue on Bettes hard *****. At the same time she kept the pressure on Bettes ***** with her finger.
Bette: Oh god T!
When she couldnt stand it any longer Bette finally lowered her body onto Tinas mouth, relieving the tension in Tinas neck.
Bettes body rocked back and forth on Tinas face. The sensations that flowed through her were increasing every time Tina pushed her finger a little more into her *****.
Bette: T! Oh my god!! I cant hold out any longer. I am so close.
Tina responded by pushing Bette further down onto her tongue.
Bette: oh god T, Im gonna come in your mouth so hard.
Bette rode Tinas face until she exploded. She collapsed forward trying desperately to catch her breath. Tina lapped up every ounce of liquid she could from Bettes core before climbing out from under her. She placed herself behind Bette wrapping her arms tightly around her lover. The two were breathing in unison.
Bette: I know that I love you T.
Tina smiled and began to speak. Before she could, she noticed something out of place.
Tina: *****!
Bette: what?
Bette looked around frantically.
Tina: The door is closed.
Bettes eyes locked on the bedroom door.
Bette: So?
Tina: So? So it means Alice was awake, she saw us.*****!
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(52 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
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Poor alice, but if i was in her place i would stay and watch.. ppl pay to see these stuff.. LOL.. nah i would rather die before seeing any one i know having sex..
Fuck, I almost passed out. Poor, poor Alice. “The worst thing in the world is to watch the one you love, love somebody else.” Thats tough stuff. Well in this situation sum1 always gets hurt, but I hope it runs out for the best.
Poor Alice – could you write in a love interest for her as well. And… EXCELLENT job with the NC-17. HUBBA.
Great chapter………but I know your setting us up for the Drama next with Helena; thinking we’d forget…be gentle pls….tks
Geeeezzzz…OMG…i´m sorry but i think cold shower is not enought for me right now..i need a tub with a lot of ice..amazing fucking chapter..
Hey Flair…you know I’m taking notes, right? haha. I’m all warm and tingly now…thanks…I guess :-D
MEgga- Well, that was fun! I LOVE this story, please post again soon!
Oh damn that was so fucking hot and damn so awesome and excellent, love it. Damn damn so hot hot hot, love it. Poor Alice, well maybe she will find Dana or someone later. Post soon, thanks! Excellent chapter, so fucking hot!
god, every time i read a new chapter it just reminds me why this is my fav story. i’m glad B&T are together, but i can’t help but feel like something will go wrong. will alice stick around to pick up the pieces? and i find myself wondering what alice and tina would be like together. aw, man now i wanna read the next chapter so bad, post soon!
You have more than a flair for the dramatic. That was,I dont know I’m speechless.
Love Bette and Tina together but felt bad for Alice in this chapter.
Just started reading this from the beginning. So far…..very hot! Been fanning myself like mad. One problem though – ch 25 pg 4 doesnt load no matter what browser I use.
hahahhahah ecstasythrumusic, you cracked me up.
but it’s true, right? these two are SMOKIN’.
oh poor ecstasythurmusic, you don’t know what your missing out on, don’t worry someday you’ll find it. F damm girl can it get any hotter, poor alice that must be heart breaking, feelin for her right, not really cause I’m sure she watched the whole thing. Can’t wait to see what Bette does to Helena.
Wow Flair that was HOT!!! You do NC-17 very well!
Quite the workout! Did you intend for their encounter to lack, how can I say it, tenderness? It seems really rah-rah, full-on and that’s good, very good. Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving that they got together, thank you. But does Tina’s heart really belong to Alice? Is their affair “too hot not to cool down”?
Thank you for bringing it! Love this story!
Girl, you def know how to get things going. Great chapter. Post soon.
call 911!!!this was way too hot for words!!!great chapter, you rock!!!!!!
THat was hot. I wish sex was that good in real life.Then again maybe it is and i am not aware of it.You rock.
Your so bad ass. I usually don’t comment on the nc-17 stuff (im a bit of a prude sometimes) but that was great. I feel bad for Alice, I would die if I were ever in that situation. Your story really rawk’s the casbah!
K
Totally hot! Wow. Poor Alice, she needs to find someone for her. Love this so much.
Your new name is FreakNastyFlair ;p Your sex scenes are realistic, I mean right on target and for that you get a million stars, I was thinking Alice would have watched and done herself off, instead she has to call attention to herself and close the damn door! lol Well it’s nice to know your Bette knows all my moves and there are others out there that F*** like me! Yeaah, I said it!! Thank you for the update Miss Flair :)
SMOKIN alice needs to let it go for everybody sake
wow that was WOW so damn hot!!
That definately was H-O-T !!! Unlike some of you, I ain’t getting that kind of lovin’, f—–, so more power to those of you that are. And for the rest of us, we’ll just keep reading this story. (Smile) Post soon.