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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 32
Tina: I love the way your skin feels on mine.
Bette: I like the way you feel right here.
Bette spun Tina around and placed Tinas hand on her chest, just over her heart.
Tina pressed her lips firmly to Bettes. Her tongue pried Bettes eager mouth open. She paused and let her tongue roam over the corner of Bettes lips. She heard a barley audible moan escape her lovers open mouth.
Tina: Lets lie down, ok?
Bette: First things first.
She reached for the button of Tinas pants. She quickly slid them down past Tinas ankles and pushed them aside. Bette lifted her head and placed a sweet trail of kissed from Tinas inner thigh to the top of her pelvis. She could see Tinas wetness seeping through her silk panties and couldnt suppress a grin. This did not go unnoticed by Tina.
Tina: You drive me crazy.
Bette stood up and removed her own pants and under wear leaving Tina with little to do but stare. Without warning she took Tinas hand and ran one finger from her hardened *****, backwards. Tina gasped at how wet Bette was.
Bette: Now who drives who crazy?
Tina retrieved her hand and placed the very same finger in her mouth. Bette kept her eyes on Tinas finger while she removed Tinas panties in one swift motion.
Tina: You taste so good.
Bette fell to her knees and used her hands to spread Tinas legs just a bit wider. She placed her warm tongue on Tinas scorching hot center causing Tina to jerk back. She reached for Bettes head to steady herself at the same time guiding Bettes tongue.
Tina: I am so wet for you.
Tinas hips began to buck against Bettes face begging for release. Release that Bette Porter was not ready to give. She rose to her feet slowly causing Tina to groan.
Bette: Oh now, I wont deny you for too long.
Bette lied back on the bed bringing Tina on top of her. Tina ran tongue across Bettes moist lips and froze when she tasted herself on Bette.
Bette: You like that?
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(49 votes, average: 4.10 out of 5)
somebody get the paddles…because I think my heart just stopped!! Wow that was HOT!!
Smokin to hott to be reading at work lol!!!!!! post soon
I just started reading this series yesterday and now I am rewarded with this blazing hot chapter. Love the whole story, you are doing it up right!
I love coming home to read 2 amazing chapters.. Bette coming out made me so happy but now the sex oh that sent me overboard. I love it! I gotta get me someone like Bette, or Tina for that matter. Can’t wait for more!
LOVE the dialogue! Also nice to see another Elvis fan out there. :) GREAT JOB and please write MORE!
Whew! It’s hot in here.
Wow Flair that was Hot! Great chapter. What about BOB? Next chapter please.
That was smoking girl do the damn thing I am lovin it please keep up the good work…Who needs bob when you have Bette…please post soon
(Megga’s fanning herself. . .) uhhhh, yeah. wow it’s hot in here. . .
Sweet Jesus, it’s cold shower time. So lets see Bob!
good Lord! that was …….incredible. please lets see if Bette is a screamer too. lol.
^5s you Flair…
Allow me to post my two favourite lines…
‘Bette: You’re not. But I on the other hand am going to fuck you hard.’
‘Bette: I have heard you moan and gasp and sigh, but I have not heard you scream. Tonight you scream.’
*Sits quitely…waiting for heart rate to return to normal*…OooooWeeee. I need a cigarette, haha.
I should have a Bette in my life…I swear, lol.
Oh, one other thing Flair…Bob?!…why Bob? lmao.
“……(sigh)……..”
I think they need to slow down the pace, say endearing words to each other and come simultaneously, with a sigh.
But- who am I?
Been away and what a welcome home 5 chapters……Heaven!!! This keeps getting better and better…love you!!
I like it when you write a NC-17 chapters you have a unique way of writting them i love it. Can’t wait for more
What about Bob??? lol (remember the movie)
Damn this is so fucking hot and sexy, damn love it. Oh about bob, it’s so funny. Please post soon, thanks! Great chapter!
I am going to use this stuff on my new girlfriend, when I get one….
Nice! ‘nough said. ;)
Just read your last chapter and then this one…oh my god its all too much for a girl ..lol so im goona read this one again lol very hot very sexy and sooo right good on Bette! cant wait for you next chapter after all as you said yourself ITS BETTES TURN….
K
Damn, that was hot. Love this story so much. Can’t wait for more.
“…now enjoy the peaceful bliss” Bliss, yes, but peaceful? more like heavenly ;-)
the words “Let me blow your mind!” by Gwen Stefani and EVE come to mind after reading this chapter! Post soon!!!
now you’ve got me talking to my monitor. telling you, you had better play nice. and this time you added tongue. naughty but nice. loved this chappy. yes i’m sure a few others need a release also, not just bette. post soon.
OMG! All hail the queen! All hail the Queen! Wait, I have to go change my shorts! Ok, back, thank you, I came like within 3 sentences of their hot scene, and then some, can’t wait to scream at the top of my lungs! I just started smoking again, thanks for that! I love you!
Poor Jesse. I feel really bad for her. Is Tina the only one that have compassion? Because Bette maybe a changed person but seem she don’t feel bad for what she done to Jesse in the pass. And Peggy is like what Bette done to Jesse is in the pass get over it. She must be same as Bette in that the way. Maybe that is why Helena don’t respect her, Peggy must treat her father and other that way. But still great story and writing. Five Star.
more tribbing????i like it..you make me tired…Geeezz…oh and Bob..lol..amazing…please more punishment with another chapter
Is it my last day on earth?? or am i in heaven already?? after having a very high fever, i wake up and i’m totally fine, then i go do an exam and get a full mark, come home and see TWO chapters of this WONDERFUL story are already posted, and each is better than the other..
By the way was this chapter TOO HOT for me to handel or did the fever suddenly remmbered me again?? GIRL YOU’RE THE QUEEN OF NC-17’s..
** Rushing to the bath room to take a VERY cold shower ** ;)