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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 34

    Story written on July 8, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Number of Comments: 33
    Words: 1632
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55279
    Author Notes:

    “And they’re making plans for the furture, when they should be right back in school…”
    D -O – U -B – T

    Jackie: Bette, we really need to sit down and talk about this…

    A beep interrupted Jackie’s voice and Bette once again looked at the caller id.

    Bette: I have to call you back.

    Jackie: No. I need to talk to you now Be…<click>

    Bette switched lines.

    Bette: Hello?

    Chad: Girl, no you didn’t.

    Bette: Good morning to you as well.  

    Chad: Why wouldn’t you warn me?

    Bette: Warn you?

    Chad: Bette, we had a deal of sorts. You pretended to be mine and I was yours
    and no one needed to know the graphic details.

    Bette: I couldn’t do it anymore.

    Chad: You couldn’t do it anymore? That’s nice.Related

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    1. Flair, girl you crack me up I love this story, and of course I have been here since the begining, I too will ride along with B/T. HAHA singing in the shower even i don’t do that. I do sing when I get drunk then run around telling people I sing better then puffy does. WOW can’t wait until the other newspapers come out and more of the neighbors start bringing housewarming gifts.

    4. there’s drama afoot! bette’s in for a bumpy ride. and now i have to ask, can we hear more on katie? i dunno why but my spider-sense tells me that she might play an important roll in further drama. GREAT WORK FLAIR!! and have u figured out the photo thing yet?

    7. “Girl no you didn’t”

      Your gay men are spot on!

      I sense a calm before the storm. The controversy is arriving, uninvited, at her doorstep (literally) and the day has only just begun!
      Courage, Bette!

      I’m loving this story!!

    8. OK, if i said i LOVED this chapter and that you do every thing just right, and that all ur characters are SOOOO REAL, and that i will follow this story no matter where it goes, will you believe me??
      You better do, cuz i just love love love every thing about ur writing..
      Way to go Bette, and Tina better stick her ass with Bette after outting her, or i’ll kick her ass..

    9. I feel as if we’re at the top of the rollercoaster rider, you know the one before the DROP! Oh shit! That has been your story for me, by heart breaks and sighs at the same time! Love it and you!

    12. oh yeah.. drama is on the way alright. Indeed it’s an entertaining and endearing story on the site. I’ve been hooked! Just don’t forget to put a little lovin so the drama is more bearable. (wink)

    16. I think there is more here than meets the eye…do continue.
      I love the timing on your chapters, it’s usually when i’ve lost focus on my own writing and need a little pick me up.

    19. Kudo’s again…the Drama, silly banter, underlying humor…all so real to life…I really wish that you could just sit and write…what exactly do you do in real life…this def should be it!!!!
      THANKS !!!!!!

    23. So the drama has begun. I can’t wait for more. I just hope these two will end up sleeping together at night. That is the only way they can be strong enough to stay together. Plus I love their intimacy. You’re a very good writer and I can’t wait for your next post.

    27. this was great! i was actually feeling a little tense reading about the article in the paper. but then again, there’s always a price to pay right?

    28. i wait with baited breath for your post each day. when i get done reading i’m never disappointed. no, i don’t mind slipping off my chair, unless i hit my chin on the desk. lol. yes the drama has begun, but … i think you know what i mean. i love the laughs. keep posting.

    31. Interesting things happen when two people stand together against the world. Will it cause them to falter or will they fortify each other…I’m betting on a bit of both.

    32. I have only commented a few times on this story but I couldn’t hold out any longer. I LOVE and I mean LOVE this story. It is just truly captivating. I must check back here 100 times a day to see if you’ve updated. I think you have all the people who read this story on the edge of their seats. Which is not easy to do. I applaude you. I can only hope for the next fan fic awards your name is in there! Your story is so orignal and believable! Every piece of dialouge is real, it’s not forced. I just can’t say enough, but i’ll shut up…FOR NOW! Keep it up girl!

    33. once again great chapter! wish i could write story’s like this! anyway the part with bette’s neighbour was funny! who would have guessed huh? :) wel continue soon please

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