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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 4

    Story written on June 11, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Number of Comments: 14
    Words: 1785
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54662
    Author Notes:

    “Love me tender, love me true, never let me go…”
    Role Playing

    Tina: Sure but its a rough draft, its missing a lot of scenes too.

    Bette smiled confidently at Tina.

    Tina: Take it and read it when you have time, but dont judge my writing based on it.

    Bette: Cant I read it now?

    Tina: I guess, if you want to. I dont want to waste your time.

    Bette: I highly doubt time spent with you is a waste of time T.

    Bette and Tina had comfortably settled on the couch reading through the script. Bette had offered up some suggestions.

    Bette:I really like this character, Natalie. She has so many layers.

    Tina: Truth is, I had you in mind when writing it.

    Bette: Seriously?

    Tina: Yeah. Look at the description of the character.

    Bette flipped to the beginning of the script and read Natalies descripition.

    Bette: Tall, tan and gorgeous. Dark brown curls framing her face. Deep brown eyes hiding mysteries of her past. A powerful woman of 28 who knows what she wants and goes after it.

    Bette looked up at Tina in awe.

    Bette: You wrote this thinking of me.

    Tina: Of course.

    Bette: Im humbled, but you should know Im only 26.

    Tina: Youre an actress, I figured you could act 28.

    Bette laughed and took Tinas soft strong hands.

    Tina focused her eyes on the floor, embarrassed to make eye contact with the mysterious beauty next to her.

    Bette: I have an idea.

    Tina: OK

    Bette; Lets read this out loud. This scene. I can tell you are having a hard time with it. Maybe if we read aloud we can figure it out.

    Tina: Ok, if you think it will help.

    Bette: I know it will.

    The women sat and read the script from the beginning. Bette played Natalie of course and Tina played the man secretly in love with her, Dean.

    Bette ( Natalie) : Dean, I cant do this. I want you. I know that I will die with out you but I cant do this. I cant be with you.

    Tina (Dean): Natalie, listen to me. I love you. I came all the way out here to find you and I wont leave without you.

    Bette ( Natalie): Im sorry. Im not going. I have to many messes out here that Ive made that I need to clean up. I cant just walk away from them.

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    4. I LOVE THIS STORY! Please keep writing! They are so cute together, and it is so true about the industry. It’s getting better, but hell it’s not there yet! Please post again soon!

    8. did I see seahurst comment on your story holly shit it’s that good. Wow Bettes not the only one hidding in the closet. LOL well this is getting good can tina play along?? can’t wait for the next chapter Great job with this story

    11. I love it! I hope Tina makes the right decision and I hope Bette gets out of the closet, she has to! They look so cute together. Please Post soon, I can’t wait to see what happens!

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