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Can’t let her go Chapter 6
Kasey: Ok there’s my suitcase, you get that, and I’ll get my underwear and my dresses, and my shoes…I’ll need some toys too..
Tina rolled her eyes, but happily obliged to Kasey’s request, it was good to see her smiling and chattering away. She then laughed, because this was exactly the reaction her sister said would happen. The rest of the afternoon Kasey chattered on and off about how much fun they would have together. All thoughts forgotten about her aunt Bette, at least temporarily. Tina on the other hand couldnt get the brunette out of her head and as each minute ticked on, she became even more nervous. What exactly was she going to say hey, im here you have a child on the way…by the way Im not sure if I want you in my life…
Tina wonder how she looked, probably amazing…
She wondered how soft her lips would be against hers, Ok Tina stop that, think about anything besides her, think of um Dora…, Dora’s a kid, dora’s brunette, hey bette’s a brunette…
A very ***** brunette….
One I would definetly like to make love to Tina thought…ok I really have to stop thinking about her….This isn’t right…but do I really want to stop thinking about her was the second thought right after that…
Luckily her sister interrupted her thoughts before she could ponder as to why she suddenly had the urge to ***** Bette. She was surprised to see her home, she wasnt due home for another hour in half. Kasey saw her mom jumped off the couch where they were relaxing ran to her mom and jumped in her arms. Then babbled on and on about Tina’s surprise trip. Jen listened as if she had no clue about any of it, humoring the ***** out of Kasey. Then she looked at Tina and winked at her.
Tina: What?
Jen: Good news and bad news
Tina looked up at her sister, she was grinning rather to largely for her to be delivering bad news. She put her hands up and said “what”
Jen: Ok bad news first, your flight isn’t when I told you.
Tina’s shoulder’s went down in dismay, althought it was rather quick she really was looking forward to being in L.A.
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(41 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
Oh please don’t stop. You can’t end it there. Please, please continue. Ok, I’m begging. LOL. I hope you continue and will be watching for new chapters.
You can’t stop, please continue, I love your story !
Hola, I haven’t commented before but you are doing great. I love all your stories, yes this is depressing, but you know what? So is life, there is a strong possiblity it could have gone this way.. So keep up the great work. i am tibette fan, so i hope they get back togehter. But some stories i am liking them not. So continue if you want and let the writing take you to where the story needs to go!! :)
ny plz dont stop i luv this story!!!
I’m enjoying it nyc you should really continue!!!
… You can’t be seriously considering to stop, are you?!, Right in the middle of the story line?… You do have readers for this story, so please continue writing it.
Don’t quit yet… we like it, and the folks that only have time to read fic on the weekends will be thrilled to come online & see another chapter so I’m sure they’ll chime in!
I also have not commented but love this story so please continue – I am waiting for the playful banter when they meet with Bette and she sees how much that little girl looks up to her – by the way, she BETTER ditch Candace and fast because she loves Tina!
OK how the hell am i supposed to look at Dora the bloody explorer with my kid and possibly have to explain the smirk??? well?..lol anyway i wouldnt mind if you dont go with too much drama with this one …dont think my heart can take it!!!So just bring the girl home and cut it as fine as you like but make it on time! lovin it!
coming out of lurkdom to beg you to continue!…Bette doens’t have a life to move on with without TINA!
NYC, just when Kasey warming my heart, you’re thinking about stopping this story. No way, cousin. Are you trying to make me march down to where you are and shake you? Alright then. I love both stories, so please, please (w/a cherry on top) continue this story =)
I agree with the other, you can’t stop. Please post soon
Please don’t end it there! I’m really enjoying this story. We all need to see what happens next!
No No must not stop! Not nice to tease the readers during the holiday season LOL
I hope you dont stop! i love Kasey :) Please continue.
I agree with all of the above!!
you can’t stop now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bette needs to stop being a ass!!!!!
Why on earth would you think that no one is interested in this story?! It’s fabulous…it’s wonderful…and if you leave us hanging like this and don’t finish it…well, that is just down right mean!!! Besides, this is your story. You obviously had a storyline in mind when you started, so I say forget about what you think the readers want…write the story that you want to share. Thanks!
Ok Bette is really need to dump Cancade now beacuse Tina is come back looking for her and this is gonna be big drama on the way. Ok post soon please, thanks!
No, you definitely can’t stop here~~~ Please continue with the story~~~
No, you can’t stop with this story now, it is really getting good. PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! DO NOT STOP!
Ok you want me to beg?? I will do i then… ;-) Please don´t stop it is to good to do that… Please post soon great chapter
* * * * * (5 stars.) please keep goin i have to know where bette is heading in her life. i’m hoping tina can push bette away from candace and make her realize they need each other. this story is to damn good to stop now. please post soon. PEACE.
OK id already left my comment,got so carried away with this story that i left this out … i dont normally beg!!!its true! but im asking you as a personal favour, dont stop writting this story yet it has so much potential to keep going,i really dont see anything negitive in it, its “true love” gone way off its path and you were slowly bringing them back to each other or dare i say not! but thats your choice and one i was so happy to read,just look at all these comments…id hate to see you just leave it here cause you felt there was lack of interest,cause it just aint true …anyway whatever you decide just want to say thanks for shareing your talent with us…But do hope you continue!
I havent had much time to read and comment, so when the time permits, I seize it. I am not understanding this concept from many of the FF writers. I do understand that comments help motivate, but do any of you ever take into consideration that you already have a legion of faithful readers. Some just read and others WITH TIME ON THEIR HANDS, read AND comment. I dont have the same time available to me as I once did when I started reading FF. I mean DAMN…….what does a person have to do around here to show an author just how much they enjoy them and the stories they write??????????????
love your story dira. dora a turn on lmao
I have been away for awhile and just caught up with your stories. Love how albeez and fergz let you have it in the begining of this one. But as with your other story you cannot stop now, you’ve got everyone so riled up and you need to fix that. Please,please let Bette just get a feeling and decide not to go forward with Candace and let her run into Tina, not Tina run into Bette and Candace. Pretty please with sugar on top.
Please don’t stop. we get lazy and don’t comment,doesn’t mean that we dont read it. Bette should know that Tina is pregrant. and Kelsey should see her Aunt Bette. thanks
I hope you continue too. I hope Tina’s heart isn’t telling her to take Bette back.
Please don’t stop now, I love the story, we want to see this thru to its conclusion. You must keep this going please. The babies will bring them back together. Thanks for the post.
Please don’t stop!! Really love this story…come on, please! Pretty please, with a cherry on top! LOL. Need to know where this goes and how it ends. Come on…(Big Smile).
Oh… you must continue this story… it’s sooooo great!!! Please continue…
Sorry, I just read your notes now. Are you kidding ??? I’m reading about 5 post at the same time and this one is wich I like best. Pleaseeeeeeeeeee!!! Don’t stop it!!!!!!!!!!! I’m begging either!!!OK? What is LOL means???
Nice one! I love Tina explained to Kasey what is a lesbian very funny…Post soon!!! Ps. Bette and Candyass noooooooooo!!!!!!!!!
Oh please don’t stop…I love this story. I have been just a bit behind on all of my reading. I feel that you are taking this in a wonderful direction and I hope I see another chapter…let’s say over the weekend.
Looks like you have plenty of votes for you to continue, but I just thought I would add mine! Thanks.
omg wow! thank you! I only just started reading this fic. Beautifully long piece for me to read :D shall continue with it now :DPost soon!