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Capitulation Part 1
INT: THE PLANET: DAY
Alice and Shane are seated at a table having coffee. Shane is holding a newspaper at which she is glancing before Alice begins speaking.
Alice
I went over there last night. Bette is totally not talking.
Shane
Maybe she doesnt want to talk about it right now, Al. This cant be easy for Bette, you know.
Alice
Doesnt it bother you that Bette is doing something so totally not what Bette would do.
Shane
We thought cheating on Tina was something Bette would never do. It is their life, man. We should stay out of it.
Alice
This is just too weird even for all of the weird stuff that has been happening lately. Even Tina seemed surprised.
Shane
So, when is it going to happen?
Alice
Tina is supposed to meet with her lawyer tomorrow to take care of it.
Shane
How does Tina feel about it?
Alice
She seemed pretty shocked and a little sad. I wish she would try to talk to Bette.
Shane
Yeah, thats what she should have done in the first place, but somebody talked her into seeing a lawyer.
Alice
Look, Bette totally jumped me for that. You dont need to start in on me either.
Shane
Im just saying, man, that I think youve done enough already. Maybe you should just stay out it from now on.
Alice
(gives a look of disgust and speaks quietly as she takes a sip of coffee)
Not until I find out what is going on with Porter.
INT: ALICES APARTMENT: DAY
Alice is sitting at her desk in front of the chart. She is talking on the telephone.
Alice
Bette Porter, please. (pause) Shes still not taking calls? She wasnt taking calls yesterday either. (pause) What if its an emergency? (pause) Okay, Ive leave another message. Tell her Alice called.
(Hangs up phone with a look of disgust)
INT: BETTES OFFICE: DAY
Bette is sitting at her desk looking at a file in her hands. From her look, it is obvious that she is not concentrating on what is in the file. She turns as she hears a knock on the door followed by James entering her office.
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(41 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
Nice job….thanks
Thanks for the shout out, nouvelle. And thanks for reading my stuff. It’s a difficult task to step into the skins of these characters and make them tell a story, isn’t it? You put forth a good effort on your maiden voyage here. Keep on writing your stories because we will certainly keep on gobbling them up.
I like the way this is written. Bette need to talk to her friends. I know that Alice will tell everything that is said, but Shane want. I really like this.
Wow this is good and Bette is need time to thinking and be alone, and when is time that she ready she will come to her friends and talk and tell them everything that she been keeping inside of her for a while. Please post the next one soon, thank you!
I like the screen play style, it’s amazing how much emotion you conveyed completely through dialogue, Would love to read more.
I like this new style Nouvelle…now stop messing around and post some more…thank you for your time.