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Casual Acquaintances?. . . Part 4 . .
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The night of the party couldn’t have been more perfect. The sky was filled with stars, and the yacht was decorated with thousands of fairy lights, the setting was absolutely incredible.
Eric presented Tina with her anniversary present before the rest of the outside guests had started to arrive. He, handed her a leather box lined with plush velvet, and in the middle of the box, lay a magnificent diamond and sapphire necklace set in white gold with matching earrings. They were breathtaking.
“Wow they’re beautiful.” Tina exclaimed, lifting the necklace from its box. “Thank you.” She kissed Eric chastely on the cheek.
Alice glared.
Bette pouted.
The rest of the guests purred at the exquisite gift Eric had lavished on Tina.
Tina was wearing a stunning silk jersey dress which skimmed her body to the ground, and was slit at the front. Her necklace and earrings accentuating the deep blue colour of her gown. Her blonde tousled locks piled on top of her head and a deep suntan she looked absolutely amazing. She played the role, she was Mrs Eric Stoltz, even though she was aware it would only be temporary.
Bette hung back watching Tina. The fantasy was becoming a reality. Tina was already under her skin with a vengeance.
She finally caught up with Her at the bar, and as she eased her self down on the stool she whispered in Tina’s ear.
“I miss you.”
Tina felt a shiver of anticipation.
“I’m horny, lonely and going out of my mind.” Bette continued. “And you’re not going to believe this, but I think I’m in love.”
“Any one I know?” Tina said nonchalantly.
Bette reached out and touched her arm.
“How does that make you feel?”
“Married.” Tina replied flatly. “And you’re in a relationship.” She pointed out.
“I’m going to tell Alice its over as soon as we get back to LA. We would be better at being friends anyway, its going no where. I’ll be doing her a
favour, ending it. What about you and Eric?”
“I don’t know.” She replied.
“What do you mean you don’t know?Tina you are going to divorce him aren’t you?”
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I love your writing and this story in particular. The tension between all of the ladies, Tina and Bette especially, is palatable and I love it, I hope you write the next chapter soon. Thank you
you sure about that Tina? (raising one eyebrows)
This is great!!!!!!!!!!! post soon
Yes It would!
I love this story. Please continue, and soon.
Yes it stands a chance, So continue to write. We will read. I reas everything written on F/F Because I like to read and I like F/F
Oh yeah, they have a chance. This I believe is going to get interesting. Always fun getting our two girls together. Can’t wait for more.
YES IT WOULD!! Give her a chance.
this story is so angsty and blatantly blunt that it chafes. I love it more so!!!
i’m a danish shipper for the most part- have no idea how i ended up here- but i’m completely sucked in, enjoying your tale. my only gripe you can guess (being a danish shipper) – you make alice such a whiny, disaposable ex… i always got the feeling the reason those two survived their affair was because it was always more of a freindship– but setting that gripe aside… this is HAWT! : )
Thewhonow get your ass back her and keep writing heehee.
Oh can I see alice and tina throw down maybe in some jello or choc pudding?? yummy you know how fun that would be to write??
“You fucking bitch.” those are fighting words
Damn awesome story, these 2 need to talk and work thing out. And yes it would, they will have a chance for them. Ok post soon, thanks!