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Celestial
“…Damnit, Shane…”, she whispered, smiling exhaustedly.
Shane swallowed, bowing her head down but looking up at her.
“…This… This thing I’m feeling…”, she mumbled.
“What?”. The back of Carmen’s head was still resting against the tiles, her drenched hair fell on her shoulders like a cascade.
“…This ‘I belong right here’ thing I’m feeling…”, Shane trailed off.
“Yeah…”, Carmen sighed deeply, “…I know what you mean…”.
“…This is what they would talk about. Love. Devotion. Completeness…”.
Carmen smiled softly, stroking Shane’s cheek with the back of her hand.
“…You’ve listened to people more than I ever did…”.
Shane frowned slightly.
“Don’t say so”.
“It’s true. Metaphysical things were just… so far away from what I was”.
Shane licked her lips, staring at her expectantly, and Carmen’s eyes softened ever more.
“…I think I missed you all my life. I’ve been looking for you and I hadn’t even realized it…”, she murmured, “…You were always around the corner, but I couldn’t see you. And yet you were everything I needed”.
“I’m here, now”, Shane replied, her voice faltering a little, “I’m not going anywhere”.
“I know…”, Carmen smiled, “…And I don’t wanna go anywhere, either”.
”I’d do anything, anything you can dream of
I’d do anything, anything for your love
For your love
For your love…”
***
“Shane? Are you still there?”, Carmen knocked on the bathroom door, frowning.
“Yes. Come in. The door’s open”, she replied, her voice muffled.
Carmen opened the door and burst out laughing.
“What are you doing?”.
Shane was completely naked before the sink, her hair still wet. Every single small bottle of perfume that Carmen owned had been opened and neatly displayed on the floor.
The whole bathroom smelled of a mixture of coconut oil, roses, cyclamen and other essences that Carmen really couldn’t discern anymore, at that point.
Shane took a small bottle in her hands. She watched it attentively and then sprayed the liquid on her own face. She withdrew, closing her eyes and squirming. Then, she sneezed vigorously and wiped her face with the back of her hand.
Carmen bit her bottom lip, narrowing her eyes and struggling hard not to laugh hysterically.
“What are you doing?”, she repeated, softly, “Shane?”.
Shane watched her, her eyes happy, and grinned.
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(17 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Thanks for the great story veba. I loved everything about it and for a second there I thought Carmen was gone. I hope you post more soon.
Thank you for the great ending. I had to read all of chapters today because I didn’t think I could wait for the next chapters patiently. Thank you.
your stories are amazing, this was a great story
:) you’re so very welcome comfy.