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Chandelier – 27
"Ow!" Bette winced.
"Angel!" Tina reprimanded.
"Mama," Angelica said joyfully.
"Ow," Bette whimpered, rubbing her head. She looked at the child with her. "I love you too, geez."
"Love," Angelica drawled, wrapping her arms around Bette in as much a hug as her arms could manage.
Bette and Tina exchanged amused expressions.
"She learns fast," Tina noted.
"Or maybe she knows this all the time and lets us in on the information in small doses," Bette pointed out.
"Who’re we talking about?"
Bette and Tina looked up to find Shane and Alice at the table. They glanced at each other, realizing how close they’d been to being caught, and mercifully Angelica had cut in at just the right time.
"Hey." Tina greeted.
"Hi." Bette greeted.
Alice and Shane nodded.
"Who’re we talking about? Who’s got information?" Alice pressed.
"Angelica." Bette told her.
"The secrets that kid can tell," Shane said.
"Yes, like whose coffee cup is that?" Alice pointed to the cup beside Tina. "TK, are you keeping secrets from us?"
"It was Helena’s," Tina told her flatly. "She was here ’til just a few minutes ago."
"Good," Alice said.
Bette and Tina lifted matching individual eyebrows at her.
Alice stopped, realizing what she’d just said. She smiled faintly at the two. "Ignore me."
"Just right now, or does that apply at all times?" Bette asked politely.
Alice glared at her. "I’m gonna go, talk to Lara. Hopefully she likes me more."
"Good luck," Shane told her. "Get me cofffee?"
"Yes, master." Alice mocked, walking on.
Shane smiled at the Kennard-Porter family, upon Alice’s departure. "So."
"So," Tina pressed.
"So." Shane repeated.
"So." Angelica mimicked.
Shane sat back, grinning at them.
Uh oh, Tina recognized Shane’s smile. "My sitter call you yet?"
"Uh huh."
"So you know."
"She’s talkative."
"Have you told?"
"Nah," Shane grin grew broader.
Bette frowned, confused, then the statements began to click together in place. "Oh. You know."
"Kid was concerned about a blue Saab spending the night at Tina’s house." Shane said, grinning.
Bette and Tina exchanged a glance.
Busted.
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ha damn that blue saab
I seem to recall the sitter having been called a mini-Alice in a prior chapter.
I love this love how you include Angie in this, Alice is going to be hard to convince that Tina is not going to hurt Bette again thanks
I just love this story. Great Chapter
This is wonderful. It makes me happy just reading it. The banter between the two, is fantastic, and then your throw in Angelica, its just what its all about. Wait till Alice finds out she’s been left out of the loop. Looking forward to your next update.
Wait! Do Alice and Helena have their own secret? Sweet chapter.
I’m with everyone else. The story is great and your ability to write dialogoue is stupendous. It’s as though we are sitting on the sidelines watching as they go through their day. Thank you very much for this. Wonderful.
just can’t get enough of you…please post soon
Let’s see, Helena, Lara and now Shane know about the reconcillation efforts of Bette and Tina. Now that leaves Alice and Kit. Both of which seemed to be against Bette and Tina returning as a couple. It only seems appropriate that they are the last ones to know. I believe that you can go ahead a claim them as yours. They have been left a shell of two women on the show. You bring them to life with your story. Got to love Angelica. How she can draw out the love and togetherness of her mommas.
i am so loving this.. please post soon!
There’s no surprise that Shane figured it out. I loved the way Tina sneaked a kiss. I only wish that they had left before Shane and Alice got there…
Ah, Texas is one of my favourite group. “And when you see there’s something you recognise…Love started making sense…I always make mistakes at my expense…Love has placed a seed…And you’re the sun that shines down upon me”. I feel like I’m repeating myself each and every time I read a new chapter from you and leave the same comment. And I’m not the only one. I just love your dialogue. Yes, they still have a lot to talk about and we get to read more of TiBette’s wonderful dialogue.
This is wonderful and happy to see them happy!
Absolutely wonderful again. You write these characters and dialog perfectly.
I’m so enjoying this story – sitting here with a great big grin on my face. Great dialogue.
I have said it before but it doesn’t hurt to say it again, your ability to write dialogue is superb!
Really enjoy these characters.. Your dialog is perfect!!
LOL @ Angelica pulling Bette’s hair! That makes me think of “I’m the baby! Gotta love me!” from Dinosaurs. Also loved the quick nod to the “love you” thing.
I love this story. Thanks for posting so frequently.
absolutely fabulous..best dialog ever…i think i can read it non-stop…you’re rock
Tiff..Fearing of being redundant…your dialogue is superb and your presentation of B & T is sophisticated and delightful. You’re the mack master of this genre.
:-)
what an excellent way to start the morning. thank you.
Wonderful, beautiful, hit the spot!!! tks!!! Oh, and tks for the added length it’s appreciated
It’s not fast enough, Tina. I’d love to see Alice’s facial expression when she knows and finds out she’s the last one to know. lol
What a treat to have another chapter today. Alice is a good sleuth, but Shane is intuitive. Thanks for the pure pleasure of it.
love your dialogue…!
this is incredible as always! i enjoy so much your storie i cant’ get enough of this!
Loved the interaction between Bette & Tina tiff, brilliantly written dialog.