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Chandelier – 46
Tina scanned the crowd, searching for her babysitter. Dammit, Andrea, you better not have ditched me.
It was odd, really, how much high school dances were exactly how she remembered them to be. The awkwardness, the raging drunkeness, the lousy attempts at spiking the punch.
Too bad for these kids, she was actually an adult who’d been bad at her own high school dance.
So she knew the tricks, and in exchange for keeping this dance clean, she was bored out of her mind. The faculty were not sharing gossip, doubting Tina’s claim she was Andrea’s friend and not a friend of Andrea’s mother, the other parents didn’t know her and were quite content talking about her behind her back.
Tina rolled her eyes heavenward. Oh, Emma Thompson-in-Angels in America, save her now.
"You know, you’re the hottest MILF in this crowd."
Oh, warm and tingly at the mere sound of that voice.
Tina gave a sideward glance at Bette. "How did you get in?"
"Pretended to be a concerned parent," Bette replied. She smiled at Tina. "I’d kiss you, but I don’t think we have the right crowd."
"I’m borderline not caring," Tina replied.
Bette laughed.
"Where’d you pick up the term MILF?"
"Alice and Shane."
"Those bitches."
"I hear you." Bette agreed.
Tina regarded her girlfriend, dressed in an office suit and looking delectable. "How was your meeting?"
"Annoying, with it cutting in on my time with my little girl."
"Which of our friends was deemed capable of taking care of her tonight?"
"Kit and Angus," Bette answered. She again looked at Tina. "I mean it, you’re the hottest person in this room."
"You’re just saying that to get me to sleep with you tonight."
"Is it working?"
"You had me at I’m the hottest MILF in this crowd." Tina replied.
Bette glanced around. "Where’s the babysitter?"
"I have no idea," Tina admitted.
Bette grinned, glancing around, and in doing so catching sight of a group of athletes at a far corner. "You know, half the boys here are fantasizing about you being Mrs. Robinson to their inner Dustin Hoffman."
"A movie reference," Tina noted approvingly, glancing at Bette. "You might want to slow down, B, I’m about to jump you right here."
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I love the playful bantor…please post the NC-17 soon….
I LMAO’d at the car crash reference and giggled at the eraser room reference. If they want each other that badly and no one else is around, they could pretend to be teenagers and do it in the car. ;)
i was almost imaginin them in the eraser room jus to act out the fantasysweet post the nc 17 chappy soon xoxo
they are tooo cute together! love it! can’t wait for more =)
Wow…your dialogue!!!! Smart, witty, sexy, charming, adorable, funny…loving. Like I said…WOW!!!
I am tingly and giddy with this post. Their banter is very refreshing. The eraser room was safe that night because those two would have rocked it like no other couple has. Now this is the kind of B&T story that I love. Thank you for the post.
Dayum..you’re good. The banter, the flirting, sexual tension, no wonder when they’re good, they’re very, very good together.
They’re just too cute. Love this.
You are so good at writing about Bette and Tina. Thank you.
Tiff, this was really really good, loved it.
tiff, absolutely loved it. it’s amazing how in almost every chapter u manage to bring out the love (and sexual tension) between these 2. i think it heightens because you dont really write too many NC-17s. i was reading reprisal (again) and remembered u like to leave certain things upto r imagination. great work, cannot wait for more!
They so cute and hot!!!!!!!!!!
you are rigth in More than a feeling FF the most popular placer is the eraser room! B&T look so relax and in love and is fantastic! you make me have hope in this couple for the next season! take care
They are so cute and they are both HOT MILF’s
I swear I love this story!!! Please update soon!
You can take any random situation and turn it into a masterpiece. Amazing
That was just so cute. Now the NC-17 please!!!!!
always love this.
I’m loving the story, but feel like I missed something. I’ve reread last chapter, and don’t understand this one ? Has Bette decided to commit?
u said once that u’d never post a NC17, are you changing your mind, am only asking cause so many ppl are asking for u to post it already. I TOTALLY LOVE HOW U GET THEM TALKING!!!!!
Well TD, Fabulous as always. The interplay between Bette and Tina is magical in your self-assured hands. Yes, I adored the Angel’s car hit tree reference along with the wonders of a school eraser room/necking location. I too miss “More Than A Feeling” but your fantastic fan fiction keeps me going with its peppy dialogue and inspirational observations. Thank you very much because the apparent simplicity of these stories belie the hard work and effort involved in creating them. Brava! Your Loyal Fan.
Okay, this is all I’m going to say…Awwwwwww!!
Very nice, very funny. Erasers get their own rooms now?
That’s nice. I’m wondering what Bette hadn’t done in high school. Kiss? kiss in a parking lot? have sex in a car? Or all above? ;)
that was just too cute and fun. thanks for that one. post soon
Ahhhhhhhh. As Shane would say, “so f**king cute. Lovve’em.
FANTASTIC post. SO funny. Loved the back and forth between B&T and looking forward to more soon!
AHHH – makes me feel all warm and fuzzy… Terrific as always!
I wouldn’t make it to the hotel or my place for that matter, they were so sweet!
adorable
Warm and fuzzy. Love the dialogue.
you are just too good…what’s this about eraser rooms? whole rooms for erasers? don’t you have white boards in the USA?…sexually charged convo…sex in the car sounds hot!!! more
i found the references…cute….i love their dialog…you are the master and i love this story which i’m pretty sure you’re tired to hear from me but after reading it i don’t have anything clever to say, i’m still smiling happily with no thoughts
I truly believe if you wrote anything, and I do mean anything, I’d read it. Please post soon.
Sweet and sexy