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Change – Chapter 33
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CHAPTER THIRTY-THREE
Tina sighed in relief when she saw she had a text message from Bette. Maybe she would finally have an explanation for the sudden run-off this morning? She frowned her eyebrows when she read it, though.
Check your mail.
No expression of love or care, not even an ‘x’. She decided that calling her once more wouldn’t help, as it hadn’t before. She went straight to her laptop and opened up her e-mail. A smile tugged at her lips when she saw she had a mail from Bette with the subject line ‘Explanation’.
The smile quickly disappeared when she read it, though. She sighed and shook her head, how was it possible that even after their few weeks together she still didn’t believe Tina was really in love with her? She decided that there was only one thing to do.
She figured Bette would be at Kit’s condo or Shane’s place; she had nowhere else to go. She would check Kit’s place first, because that was the closest and the most likely. She went to the kitchen to get the key, but found that it wasn’t at its place. Of course, Bette had used it to open the door and go away. When she walked towards the entrance, she saw the key lying on the floor, almost daring her to pick it up and go after the love of her life.
She did exactly that.
A few minutes later, she arrived at Kit’s condo. She parked her car in front of the building, rang the bell and waited. Nobody answered and she decided to try to call her again, but it didn’t work. She cursed and rang the bell again. She kept on going and after a couple of times, the sound she had wished to hear was there.
She opened the door and stormed up the stairs, practically ran to the right door. She knocked on it, not once stopping until the door was open. A very dishevelled, exhausted looking Bette with swollen red eyes opened the door. Tina pushed her back and closed the door behind her.
“Now you are going to listen to me and remember every fucking word I say!” Tina had to do her very best to keep her voice down. She was fuming. “Don’t you ever do that to me again! You have to understand that I fucking well love you, that I would give up everything here to go wherever you want to go and that I’m not going to leave you alone until you realise that to me, you are the most wonderful girl on Earth and I wouldn’t want to be with anyone else, and I don’t care if you think I should be with someone with more money and more experience as you put it, I don’t agree with that. If being with you means I have to live in a box for the rest of my life, then fine! I will! But I swear, do not ever run out on me like that again or I swear I will hunt your sexy ass and kill you!”
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Hello dear sweet Gen! *waiving* We loved Tina’s brave reaction to bring Bette back to her life. Otherwise, Bette would have remained secluded on her bedroom. Hahaha The love scene was perfect and with the right pacing. You did an spectacular job, dear friend. Ah, we are waiting for Tina’s turn. *wink* PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the loving JC, Eunichick, ZLFAN, T_Daze, Melrose231 and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
NO YOU DIDN’T?!!!!!!!!!!. Bette seems to really know her stuff. I really do understand your time constraints. Post the next one when you can. That was awesome. Thanks for posting.
Wow! I coudnt hope for a better continuation of this story! Thank you!It is truly great when people just dont let you go out of your life and they do smth immediately and not after 5 years of being apart.
WooHoo (happy dance) about time.Thank you for this. Tina did the right thing by going after Bette as she is the one with more experience and Bette being the one lacking confidence. It just feels great moving on
When I read chapter 32 I was lke “WTF?” THey took forever to get together and as soon as they are, Bette runs away. But now reading this new chapter, I’m really glad you fixed it quickly. Bette running away is total consistent with the character and Tina fixing this the way she does is pretty realistic and hot. Great chapter. THank you.
Very sweet. And very hot.
That was amazing! Bette should definitely not lack confidence! Can’t wait for Tina to wake up. ;)
Didn’t have a chance to comment on the last post..I loved the continuity of both posts …so like Bette to lose confidence and question herself and others love for her & Tina going to get her woman!! was worth waiting for!!
Thanks for playing in safe with your mom so that you could write. I would have really missed your story. Great job on the nc-17 chapter. Can hardly wait for Tina to wake up and continue to boost Bette’s confidence.
Yeah! Of course it took an alpha-Tina to bring Bette back. Silly girl did you think that leaving Tina a “Dear Jane” email would keep her away? Thanks for the post Gen, awesome.
it took 33 chapters but it was definately worth the wait!! I just hope that bettes confidence has a real boost now! pps
The story and your writing was worth the wait. Beautiful.
great, great job!!! i luv how u had tina all alpha, and bette take the lead!!