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Change & Confusion
They all start laughing….. Bette than takes a look at Jenny.
Bette: I really do love your hair, its just.I dont knowworks.
Jenny: thank you, but all compliments of the hair should be directed at the lovely and talented Shane.
Shane throws a ***** smile to Jennythey all continue playing the game and laughing as per usual,, all thinking in their heads they have missed this, this fun time without any tension or drama,,, well actually something was missing,,, they all start to realize,,soon everything may change when Tina arrives.
Tina is coming down the street, she instinctively pulls her car into her and Bettes driveway, then realizes what she just did, and pulls back out and goes to pull into front of Jenny and Shane, she gets out of the car and stares at the house and then at her and Bettes house for a moments, then pulls herself together and goes to the front door.
Shane hears the knock.
Shane: Ill get it
She opens the door to see Tina, looking quite *****, shes wearing a black dress, with her hair in a loose ponytail, with some hair falling on the side of her face.
Shane: Wow, check you out.. pretty ***** *****.
Tina shyly smiles..
Tina: Sorry I was late,.. me and the girls from the center went to grab some dinner.
Bette and Tina now make eye contactBette was happy to hear she was out with the ladies from work instead of hearing Helenas name thank god. Bette also was thinking of how amazing she looked. Tina was looking at Bette thinking, how the ***** am I going to take things slow when she is so ***** beautiful, stay strong tina, stay strong, remember what she did,, remember the pain
Alice now chimes in
Alice: Well, Tee you didnt miss much, come on I got some sparkling cider here, which Im sure will give you one ***** of a buzz.
They all laugh as Tina goes to sit next to Alice and being playing a card game, everyone else is talking amongst themselves, as Tina and Bette keep quite and quickly glance at one another from time to time.
A couple of hours have gone by, they all have stopped playing card games, a few have a good buzz going on, and are a little more loose, loose enough to allow Marc to start filming them.. Marc is interviewing Shane, Jenny, Dana and Alice, while Bette come walking out of the bathroom, she heads into the room where they all are.. Marc put the camera on her..
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(43 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
I’m with Marc.. WOW… 5 stars
Very sweet. But in the next installment, can Mark die in a horrible industrial accident or something? (Please?)
Wow. That was so intense. Sniff Sniff. I hope they can work things out.
I’ll say wow. Very nice indeed. PLEASE continue!
I really love your stories, so profoundly moving.
But how about locking up Mark in the toolshed and paint his windows an opaque black?
Wow so emotion and beautiful about Bette and Tina, hope they will work thing out. Please post soon, thank you! Excellent chapter!
Please write more. I have been waiting for too long.
At the beginning of your series you said you made the chapter long because you didn’t like to leave your readers hanging. Well it’s been almost a year and a half….not only are we hanging, we are swinging in the breeze. Please continue, this was an excellent story.
Bette’s explanation was really heartfelt.
Can Mark’s camera give off radiation and kill him dead?? Like, right now???
Bette GETS Tina. I wish the TV Bette would get a clue.
Thanks!
Yeah wow!