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Chapter 16
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“I’m happy to speak for myself but Helena’s already got her hooks into her. I can’t possibly divulge what I know about Helena and expect her to keep a confidence now. Helena is a skilled seductress and she’s used her charm to lure Tina right into her web of deceit. She’s out to fuck with me by flaunting the $100,000 grant and spotlighting the center to promote her new campaign for social justice and putting the arts in the background. Helena used the grant for bait to grab Tina’s attention and now she’s enthralled. From now on Helena is going to control her every move like a pawn on a chess board. Just look at the way she acted that evening. I’ve known Tina for almost nine years and even drunk she’d never make such a spectacle of herself with such lewd public displays. Helena led her around like a love sick puppy and she let her. It’s like she’s lost all self-respect.”
“When we brought that up to her she tried to justify it.” Alice continued telling the tale.
”I haven’t lost my dignity and we didn’t do anything wrong. There were plenty of couples making out. We had a little too much to drink and we were just having fun besides this was a bachelorette party wasn’t it? Everyone was a bit uninhibited.”
”Not like that TK. Even the dancers we hired stopped their performance to check you guys out. She put you on for show Tina. She treated you like some kind of sex puppet and really amped it up when she had an audience. My guess is she was trying to get a rise out of someone but all it served to do is for us to feel embarrassed for you.”
”I think you’re all exaggerating. Maybe we got a little carried away but what you’re saying is not going to dissuade me from seeing her. I still don’t believe that she has any ulterior motives for being here; besides I can’t do anything to jeopardize the grant. The center needs the money.”
”We’re not suggesting that you to do anything to jeopardize the funds for the center Tina. We’re just warning you to be careful. If she’s as legitimate as you say she is then I don’t think sleeping with her is part of the criteria for getting the money is it?”
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Hi Bat, thank you for this update, I didn’t have time to comment much in the former chapter. In this one I think in Tina’s POV, she didn’t know the big problem between Helena and Bette, she was ignorant of most part of conflict Bette didn’t warn her (and again Bette is acting overprotecting and underestimating Tina, where is the hand of Emma?), but I think Tina is acting with jealousy and try to hook with the first woman in her way, that looks nice to her; what I find unfair again is that everybody (the gang and Kit) are treating her as if she was a real bitch, Bette wasn’t the only one suffering, Tina was and still is very lost; and at the moment Tina hasn’t slept with Helena they just met the same day (as I mentioned in a former comment, I was hoping that Helena could be the tool to bring Tina back from hetero-Ville), what makes me feel very bad is the gang behaving as Bette’s entourage; as Bette was emotionally sick, Tina was/ is and probably worst and she fell even deeper but who cares, she doesn’t have real friends and now even Henry is treating her “You could end up losing everything including Mikey and me”, isn’t it a way to force people to do something? Well Bat, it only rest me to tell you that I love your story and it’s wonderful that you are posting every day, I’ll be waiting willingly for the next chapter. Sorry for bugging too much. Thanks again
Even if BETTE has moved on (supposedly)wanting to know all that was said and who said what is defeating the purpose for me.TINA is falling for HELENA but only in a gratuitous way yet if not careful she will become her puppet as the signs are showing when she found out someone other than BETTE is in TINA’s life.Tread carefully TINA even tho you don’t want to alienate the family or BETTE you are doing yourself a disservice by not admitting you want BETTE,back,you are gay,and you still love her.TINA needs some alone time.HENRY needs to back up and away from this relationship as he has served his purpose.Why does BETTE not tell TINA before the others ?is she leaving the door open on them or she’s afraid this would really be the nail in the coffin for TIBETTE and this isn’t what she wants.THANKS,ps.
Tina really is stuck between a rock and a hard place – and she seems to be hell bent on removing herself from her ‘former’ friends and family as well as her ‘new’ one. And I think Bette’s right she would not have heeded any warning from Bette regarding Helena. Perhaps Tina really needs to hit rock bottom before she is coming to her senses – we will have to wait and see, I suppose.
Hopefully Tina’s not doing something stupid if she discovers that Bette’s pregnant and starting her family with Emma. But on the other hand that could be exactly what she needs to get closure too. As I assume she still holds on hope that she and Bette could get back together after she eventually knows what she really wants.
Thanks for sharing your outstanding talent with us and looking forward to your next post.
Really don’t like this version Tina! Very immature. Thanks
As you know I really like Tina in almost everything you write but this Tina is far from the Tina that I care about. In the last chapter she was really being spiteful and a tad hateful. Bette is right, if she had tried to talk with her and possibly now she would not listen. Even though I never liked Henry, through no fault of his own, I’m really glad that he talked with Tina and hopefully with helenas’ bitchy attitude, just maybe Tina is seeing a little what she is like. Can hardly wait until Peggy shows up and strips helena of the position of being over the foundation and whatever else she is going to do to her. Damn, that will be great!!! Tina will really be shocked when she discovers that Bette is expecting, that will be monumental in their newly forging friendship, and at least Tina realized what a mess she created by taking helbitch with her to the party and how she reacted to everyone trying to talk with her. Really do hope she will listen to Bette if and when Bette tries to talk with her. Just maybe when Peggy shows up and strips helena there will be no need for Bette to talk with her. She will learn firsthand what everyone was talking about. For Bette, I hope everything works out well for her with the baby since that is what she has always wanted. As you know, I would always want Tina and Bette together with a baby. Emma should be a very stabilizing force for Bette. Seems Tina has lost any chance she might have had for a renewed relationship with Bette. Thanks for posting.
Also loved what Kit and henry had to say to Tina, hope she will listen to someone before she is in over her head and gets hurt. Thanks.