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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Three
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“You think I’m a …snob?” Bette asked pointing a finger towards her own chest.
“Y-yes… you are… in a way. You haven’t stopped criticising me. A snob is not necessarily rich … you know.”
“I see….” Bette replied softly, “You are probably right.”
Tina should have been happy at her unexpected victory in their latest war of words but she felt nervous instead not comprehending why her host had not been her usual arrogant and insufferable self.
“My ankle doesn’t hurt as much,” The blonde purposely changed the topic of conversation.
Tina steadied herself further on Bette’s arm as they made their way slowly to the bathroom. She took a seat on the closed lid of the toilet and watched as Bette readied a basin of cold water.
“It’s freezing!” The blonde protested as she gingerly immersed her foot in the water.
“It’ll help with the swelling,” Bette reassured, “you will get used to the temperature.”
A few silent minutes went past and Bette, still without speaking lifted Tina’s foot out of the water to carefully place it on her towel-wrapped knee to dry the black and blue limb gently, taking precious seconds to pat it dry before giving it a closer look.
Long fingers traced the front of the foot and the swollen outside, gingerly outlining the colourful bruises before with an imperceptible sigh reaching for a clean bandage to cover the injured foot and give it support.
Tina had watched how her host seemed for those few minutes an entirely different person, gentle, attentive and a far cry from the horrible being she had had the misfortune so far to have encountered. She prayed also that the goose bumps which had appeared because of the soft treatment she was receiving, would not elicit in the dark-haired woman further teasing or unpleasantness.
“I left you a change of clothes by the sink.” Bette then announced as she placed Tina’s foot carefully back on the floor before standing back up. “You should also really try to tame this hair of yours. It’s in your eyes. With your track record you’d be best seeing where you are headed and avoid further injury!”
And just like that the trance Tina had found herself in was lifted.
“A woman’s hair is her pride and joy!” She retorted.
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Another great chapter I was wondering why bette was so angry and then at the end she seemed to soften up a bit looking forward to the next chapter so pps.
Very interesting, I am very curious what connection Bette has with Tina’s father. Loved it, thanks
Great chapter my friend…Love Bettes teasing of poor Tina…Tina biting back at Bette Tinas surprise and indignation at the fact that Bette had dressed her…But then enjoyed Bettes gentleness in tending to her injured foot..Tina is definitely interested in the fact and obviously pleased that Bette prefers ladies.They seem to have a shared interest to in house improvement and interior design…I look forward to the atmosphere thawing between the two as they get to know one another more…Bring on the next chapter A sap..Loving it Kins…Cxx
Loved it! Please post soon!
Thanks for the update – the walls are starting to crumble between the two.. Can’t wait to see where you take this story. PPS!
It is always a delight to read one of your stories! I am aboard and looking forward to finding out what Bette’s problem is!
I love these full integration of pure provocation they have
outra.Acredito with this form of treatment Bette
should be directed to Tina is by having your heart broken due
a loving disappointment, and suddenly falls by parachute in his
port, this lovely blonde with angel face who came to shake her
emotions she certainly did not want to feel.
I just can not explain how Tina’s father does not care about
the fact that your daughter to be with stranger.
Loving this story.
10 stars.
it was a great chapter. I really liked it! I wonder why Bette is cold and unfeeling, with Tina?
wondering what it was that hardened her heart? :)
but it seems that Tina is able to cut her sarcastic comments.
This is really strange: what is the relationship between Bette and Tina’s father?
oh, so Tina evaluate her slightly evil hosts beauty? ;)
and the house projekt … it will be very interesting.
I look forward to the sequel.
I can’t get enough of this story.
Love the dynamics of these two…great story!
Great ! I like it very much. A world that only left two of them…. hope good feelings grow better between them soon.. Thank you for posting.
Awesome as always Kins! Can’t wait for more. Thanks sweetheart!
Your Bette is a ‘perfect’ stranger :)
Your stories always have a tangential entry. Never full on allowing the reader to conjure up many different scenarios, never quite open and direct. Then suddenly, the “Aha !” moment. You’re very skillful.
Love all your stories kins (especially Bette as a vet in Savannah) and am loving this one!
Lovely descriptive paragraphs of the house and surroundings, I had to put a jumper on to combat the cold from the snow!
Looking forward to Bette’s back story and the blossoming relationship so please post another chapter soon.
ok I get the feeling that Bette is piloar ijs…seriously why is she so mean to poor ole Tina and what the hell is it that she does? and when will they hold each other at night…ok that’s was a question for my own pleasure but seriously whats’ going on with Bette?
Very interesting