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Chapter VI – Empire State of Mind – Three letters
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“No … no, that’s not what Diane meant, Bette,” Jules jumped in, with a soothing voice. “Just the thought of Tina carrying a baby created with their seed could be incentive enough.”
Bette and Tina exchanged looks. Huh … they hadn’t thought about things that way.
Diane mused aloud, as she sipped on her drink, “I bet Brom would do it.”
“Or any of those strapping agent types in Mike’s team,” Jules rejoined. Wha-a-a-t? she mouthed to Diane, when her girlfriend shot her a sharp look.
“Or George,” Tina added, giving Bette a teasing smile, subtly reminding her about the bout of jealousy Bette had confessed years ago, during the daylong “first date” they’d had in Paris.
“Well if John sees you in this beyond-sexy outfit you have on today, Tina, I bet you he’d tap into the residual straight-guy in him and do it, too,” Diane observed, smiling back at Tina who’d wrinkled her nose at her.
Jules, Diane, and Tina continued throwing out names of men they knew, enjoying the game, as Bette kept silent, her thoughts on what she’d overheard between Marilyn and Jolene, and her conversation with Jolene after.
Tina’s warm voice cut into her thoughts, “What is it, baby? What are you thinking about?”
“Umm…,” Bette answered, looking at Tina with concern, ”that I don’t want this to be something that’s impersonal or coldly scientific, or base, even. That you’re like some repository where you get injected, treated like a breeder…”
Tina pulled one of Bette’s hands up to her lips, kissing the long, graceful fingers softly, “I don’t feel that way, Bette. I know we’ll be making this baby together, in love.”
Diane and Jules fell quiet. Maybe they pushed the joking around about the donor too far?
Bette sighed, “I overheard a fight recently, and I guess the residual effect of it stayed a little …”
Tina continued to stroke her hand.
“What was the fight about, baby?” Tina asked.
Bette sighed again. Then she said briefly, “Sex.”
Diane and Jules eyebrows shot up.
Bette elaborated, “Well, it was about other things, and at the root of it, the way the problems were being dealt with was through sex.”
Jules asked, “Not getting any or getting…”
Bette answered, “Not.”
Diane and Jules both sank lower into their chairs, murmuring, “Oooohhhhhh.”
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Ahhhh, just ask Marcus then the kids are really siblings! I like this story very much only wish you posted more often, I have no right to talk I have been pondering a new story for quite some time so you take all the time you need to keep up the quality. My story will be centered around the horse world which is the world I lived in before I had the stroke. I spent many years showing and breeding Appaloosa’s first and then paint horses I miss being able to ride and having horses the most. I have been thinking about doing this story for a long time. I will start it soon. In the meantime I will read whatever you write.,
Allons-y! Jackiee1. Hope you do return to the “horse world.” They’re magnificent animals. About what you’re writing: If it helps, just start with a barebones outline, so that you have a “straw man” you can play with. It’s also something that doesn’t need to be perfect. At times, you could be tempted to be your own worst critic. Don’t be. (Hmmm… I posted 2 chapters this weekend: not good enough? just kidding). Hang in there.
Thank you for the update.PPS. And Jacky please come back soon.
Love this story and the addition of Diane and Jules. Glad to see they are working on a second child and Bette can experience Tina during pregnancy. They will need to be careful who they choose as donor. Hope this upcoming trip is safe and uneventful. Of course that wouldn’t be fun then, would it? Thanks so much for your time in writing this wonderful story and sharing with us.
I also love this story! Why not just ask Marcus to deposit again. That’s the right thing to do if he’s still in their lives. I’m not feeling Tom for some reason. Please let Bette find out the truth in Luxembourg but not to much drama. PPS
So happy you posted again, thanks. Love the story but have a feeling a lot of drama is ahead.
Two posts in one week and both wonderful additions to this exceptional creativity. makes me wish it was a three day holiday weekend so that I could have all the time to read each word, digest and contemplate the creative imagery you have put forth. Thank you, keep up the wonderful work. The imagery between Bette creating life with Tina alone will set all screens on fire.
Thanks for the double post. Bette and Tina don’t know Tom well or his history. Maybe Tina can surprise Bette by searching for Marcus and getting him to be their donor again. They should not mess with perfection, Angie is a gorgeous child.
I love this story, and in my opinion marcus is the best choice.
Lovely story! And like the rest, get Marcus back in the picture, please. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us!
Thank you for both updates.
I agree with the others, they need to find Marcus and ask for another deposit.
Hi Skydancer
I think with Toms sperm and Bettes eggs with Tina as the birth mother would make the perfect match.
I admire your creativity with each chapter, keep up the good work.