Fan Fiction
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Chapter18.
Wait a minute, you only get a birthday once every four years? she asked, her eyes were twinkling at me because she was smiling so much.
I missed that look from her, it showed her cute dimple.
Technically yes, but my parents let me celebrate on the twenty eighth so I actually got a birthday every year.
Wow, so let me get this straight you have a birthday every four years, youre a very talented artist and youre the most beautiful women in the world, anything else I should know about?
I laughed, gripping her top in my hands.
And I have really bad mood swings. I added, pulling her closer.
Oh yeah, those mood swings of yours are nuclear we need to do something about them. she muttered, her hands finding my sides as her mouth fell on mine.
We fell back onto the bed, kissing and laughing. Millie lowered herself down on top of me slowly, kissing me so deeply I completely lost myself in the feeling of her. My hands grasped at her back, moving restlessly against the fabric of her top. I couldn’t keep track of the expanse of emotions which my body was experiencing. Everything seemed to be turned up to the highest level. From the soft lips exploring mine, to the body melting into me, pressing an absent thigh in-between my legs. I gasped, not knowing when or how to stop this or even if I wanted to.
Millies lips travelled down my jaw to my neck, her warm, wet mouth seeking out the spots on my skin which made me writhe and moan with pleasure. It wasn’t enough, I needed so much more. Ok the prospect of sleeping with Millie scared me more than anything ever had, I wasn’t going to deny that. And I was grateful for Millie to have taken it as slow as she had done. But I was only human and there was only so much I could take before I was going to snap with frustration. Luckily for me I don’t think I was alone in this thinking.
Millie detached herself from my neck and met my eyes, I looked up at her getting completely lost in the dark depths. Her breathing was shallow as if she were out of breath, she swallowed leaning in to plant another steamy kiss in my lips. The only sound that could be heard was our ragged breathing and the odd suck and smack of our lips. Millie was becoming more and more heated on top of me, I could tell from the passionate kisses which kept spiralling way out of control. Her tongue ran circles around mine, then she would suck my bottom lip into her mouth and give it a little tug with her teeth before letting it go and beginning all over again. This oral foreplay was having its toll on me as well, I didn’t know what I was doing. It was as if I was looking down at myself, watching what I was doing but being completely unable to intervene. Not that I wanted it to stop, but if this was just the effect kissing had on me I didn’t even want to know how I would react to anything else.
Before I had a chance to register what was happening I felt Millies hand against the flesh of my tummy, moving up underneath my top. I gasped as the soft hand continued to go further, leaving a burning tingle in its wake against my skin. Millie was also finding her own actions slightly over powering and she pulled away from my mouth, resting it against my cheek as she closed her eyes.
The expert fingers ran over my right breast, quivering slightly as they passed over the erect nipple and then moved back down again. I moaned inadvertently, grasping Millie’s top in my hands and moving my body underneath hers. Her lips covered mine again, taking their time to graze softly over the surface this simple action sending Millie close to the edge. Her hand still caressing my breast was probably the most sensual thing, along with the kissing, that I had ever felt.
It was all so soft and tender, I couldn’t understand people that would rather have a guy pressing and pushing his rugged body against their own. There was no feeling attached to it, there wasn’t even any time ot feel. It was always over and done with before any thought could be determined on the action. But what my body was experiencing was far beyond anything my imagination could have contemplated. Nothing even seemed to come close. I felt so completely linked with Millie, it was as if we had drawn back a veil which had been shrouded over each other and we could now see clearly and feel fully.
Hey guys, you want…woah never mind! Lizzies voice interrupted us, the sound of my bedroom door shutting again seemed to press a pause button over the two of us.
Millie looked at me with a wry smile over her lips, I smiled back sighing at the perfection of Lizzies timing as usual.
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(47 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
Wow…I am truly lost for words…Your writing gets to me every time…..The imagery and descriptiveness (if that’s even a word) of their feelings is simply AWESOME….please continue to write….You can always ‘go out’ after you’ve finished writing *wink*….Thanks Kat for another delightful; read…
And i’ve just realized you’ve posted another chapter…..Damn girl!!! W
i’m always first, i love that. you and morning coffee…and what’s this about going back to school and going out and not writing?? are you nuts? that’s just cruel!
A perfect way to get up in the morning… you amazing story continues to draw me in. Excellent Job!
Do you think that school ,going out and not posting is going to go with us. Know way, You go to school,and excell.Stay home and write. Can go out and have a good time. No No NO going out in last on our list for you, Loved this chapter, Millie has good timing. Lets get these two ladies together. thanks
I know you said that you don’t take compliments well and to give you some constructive critism, but there is none. Your writing is, for lack of a better word, in short, AMAZING! I love it. I am addicted. You can’t stop writing, it would be cruel to everyone! But I understand you having to go to school. But don’t forget about us, okay?
Your story continues to rock.