Fan Fiction
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Chapter22.
Maybe we should take this inside. Millie said in quite possibly the huskiest and sexiest voice I had ever heard.
If I had been capable of speech at that moment I wouldve agreed with the up most support for Millies suggestion. But all I could do was gaze into her dark eyes and follow her back inside.
I hadnt realised just how cold it had been outside and now we were comfortably in the warm confines of the hotel room I began to really heat up. Adding to my already hot state Millie had gotten me into I was quite literally burning with desire.
Millie took hold of both of my hands and kissed me tenderly on the lips, pulling back to look me in the eyes. I felt my heart start to thump then, I couldn’t help it MIllie just seemed to have that effect on me.
Trix, I don’t want to rush you into anything ok so just say if you feel uncomfortable or…
I didn’t let her finish her sentence, instead I kissed her passionately, taking her completely by surprise. It was a good surprise though. We kissed, breathlessly and impatiently, our tongues doing the talking as they intertwined in a desperate fight for dominance. I began guiding Millie back, hoping my notoriously bad navigation skills had improved and I would successfully be able to push the beautiful brunette back onto the bed, and not push her into a more painful piece of furniture like a wardrobe or anything.
Millie had other ideas though and took hold of my hips, holding me still on the spot. I pulled out of the kiss and smiled at her, realising exactly what she had in mind. I felt her fingers begin to tug my top up slowly, cherishing the moment with what I could only describe as appreciation. As my top was pulled up over my face where the soft cotton passed, Millie’s lips followed, kissing me with a passion that made my toes curl. Her hands made quick work of my bra, dropping it to the floor to join my top, then innocently resting against my bare back, the odd finger tracing my shoulder or trailing down my spine. We pulled out of the fiery kiss as if we had been deep sea diving, Millies lips moving swiftly to my neck for another taste of the tender skin.
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That was both beautiful and effin hot! Perfect Kat.
Wow… this crappy day obviously inspires you… and you’re not alone in spending it alone ~sigh~
my god. i’m speechless.
wow.
Kat I have to say that was one of the most emotional, tastefully written love scenes I have ever read, you should be so proud of yourself. Amazing, simply amazing.
that was…incredible. the opposite of crap. ;)
Now that was a hell of a way to wake up!!!
Wow…..what an imagination you have Kat…….I think i will hang up my NC-17 writing boots and get you to write them chapters for me *wink*……The imagery and emotion that ‘jumps off the page’ at the reader is truly awesome….This chapter should only further enhance your fan base, not deplete it, in my humble opinion…..please keep going with this wonderful story:).You know i will always be reading….
ok ok breathing is slowly returning to normal…. this definetly makes up for not having a date today!! Down with Hallmark Holidays I say!!
another outstanding chapter Kat, thank you.