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Chapter23.
You want some more?
Millie nodded eagerly, swallowing what was in her mouth.
I leaned over the tray, deliberately taking my time as I felt the dark eyes roam over my poised body. I sat back down smiling and leant towards Millie.
Why don’t you close your eyes. I whispered by her ear, letting my lips brush over her ear lobe and trail down to her neck. I opened my mouth and ran my tongue over the skin before leaving a kiss. Millie was looking at me with that look that could melt the polar ice caps and I sat back down, trying to keep my cool.
Closed. I ordered, watching her until she eventually closed her eyes.
I reached for some more mango and shuffled closer so I was sitting directly in front of the beautiful brunette.
You better not be eating it all. Millie said softly, her accent letting out a hint of Southern drawl.
I wouldn’t do that. I whispered, taking Millie off guard because of my close proximity.
I lifted the dripping fruit to her lips and she opened her mouth but I continued to stroke the juices over her lips, pulling it away again to watch her lick her lips. Emitting a deep moan of pleasure as her taste buds welcomed the sweet nectar. With her eyes still closed she opened her mouth expecting me to give her the fruit, inching forward incase I was holding it just out fo reach again. She let out a moan of disappointment, pouting at me; she knew I was a sucker for that pout.
I popped the mango in my mouth and leant forward, stopping when my face was so close I could feel Millie’s breath against my lips. Then I pressed my lips against hers, demanding she open her mouth with my tongue as I slipped the slither of fruit into her mouth. Millie let out that deep murmur as she took the fruit, pulling on my lips for a second before releasing me.
I sat back down, watching her chew the fruit contentedly. She opened her eyes, her provocative stare capturing my attention immediately.
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ok i am at a complete loss for words Kat, ur story astounds me!!
Hope ur mum feels better soon and gets back to the washing up so u can get back to writing about this beautiful couple!! x
i am absolutely in love with your writing. i’ve read every chapter and it keeps getting better. post soon!!!
Wow…This was breathtaking! Really like the way you write!Please continue:)Thanks
Hey Kat…..Wow, what a chapter…..You deserve all the praise all these lovely commenters have left and much more….You are truly a great writer…..Thank you:)
Dude I will never think of fruit in the same way again. Wow that was just so intense. I love the passion but the tenderness you convey between these two women. The more I read from you the more I am so blown away by your skill. Please don’t doubt yourself you rock.
this is my second time reading this chapter. couldn’t love it more.
Cheers everyone! ur really biggin me up, gonna giv me a big head! k xx
Hard at work… so this was an extra good treat… Kudos to you Kat ~tries to grin away the blush on her cheeks~