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Crazy good or crazy bad?
I smiled, seeing the flicker of worry flash across her warm brown depths. I reached up and stroked her cheek softly, watching as my finger trailed over the perfect creamy skin to the full, pink lips that offered a delicate kiss as it passed. I took in a deep breath, my hand resting on Millies shoulder. So many emotions, so little words, none of which could do them justice.
Good crazy. I whispered.
Millie stroked my cheeks with her thumbs, gazing into my eyes with a look that was brimming with love. She leaned in and brought her lips to mine, kissing me so softly and tenderly that my lips shook against hers from the intensity. Millies hands moved from my cheeks down my body, to rest against my hips and pulled me forward. We smiled into the kiss and I slipped my hand round the back of her neck, bringing her lips to mine in a deep and steamy lip lock. We parted, needing to breath and rested our heads against each other.
I think crazy is the best word to describe this. Millie said quietly, wrapping her arms round my waist.
This?
Us.
I sighed, rubbing my nose against Millies.
Well at least its not boring.
She chuckled, biting her lip.
No definitely not boring.
A series of vibrations from my pocket interrupted us, I took my phone out and answered it.
Hey. I said, looking into Millies eyes as I waited for Lizzie to speak.
Trix, are you still with Millie?
Yeah.
There was a pause, I knew she wanted to know more.
Wow don’t elaborate or anything.
I laughed, getting an intrigued look from Millie as she watched me.
Hows Colin?
Oh don’t ask, hes a pig I asked him to leave last night. He asked me to do something that not even in my drunken state I would’ve done.
I frowned, angry that he treated my best friend badly.
What did he ask you to do?
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I could see M/T as B/T and Lizze as Alice Love this story. thanks
I agree with Seahurst, I see the similarities with Bette and Millie too. I did find it interesting that Millie didn’t ask Trixie if she wanted to go to the party, maybe I am searching for drama. I am so hooked on your story and I am so captivated in seeing how Millie’s character unfolds.
This is interesting. In my mind, Millie was always your Bette, and Trixie was always your Tina…so to actually bring Bette and Tina into the story will be fun. Thanks!
Ah Seahurst its an honour to have you reading my story. You’ve noticed the similarites between Millie and Bette I see, well I do hav a weakness for Bette and Tina but wanted to create my own characters as I felt like there was a certain restriction when it came to writing about characters which already exist. But I wanted to bring B+T into the picture cus Im gonna stir somethings up! Hehe!
Ace, your comment means a lot to me because I want to write professionally but lack the courage to put myself out there like that. But if you would buy my book then at least I would sell one.
Thanku guys!
Simply wonderful… Ever thought of writing a novel? I know I’d buy it!
Great more really, really soon
My dear Kat….yet another exquisite chapter…..this story of yours just keeps getting better and better…..You are indeed a great story teller:) Thank you now i’m off to read the next chapter…..:)